3. Ramina’s Brainstorm
• A young girl + boyfriend
• Go to the same school
• Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the
boy’s girlfriend
• The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend
• In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on
her mouth.
4. Carolle’s Brainstorms
• The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying
• *flashback*
• Girl and boy kissing while watching TV
• Her phone rings and boy takes it off her
• Tries to hit her
• *flash forward*
• Shows her trying to cut herself again
5. Ina’s Brainstorm
• Girlfriend+Boyfriend
• Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe)
• She accepts
• Then, flash-forward:
• of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding
hands)
• Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl
6. Strongest Idea
• Strongest Idea
• Ramina’s Idea
• Ina’s Idea
• Not showing all story, just giving pieces of puzzle
7. Final Idea
• Used Ramina and Ina’s Idea together:
• Girlfriend + Boyfriend
• Having a date, then he proposes to her
• Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily
• He putting the ring in her finger
• *Flash forward*
• Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl holding
hands
• She calls him but he didn’t pick up
8. Why did we chose this genre
with example/conventions
• Happens in real life
o Shows that not all situations are perfect
• Affects young married couples (not all)
o Showing that they are still too young
10. I Love You To Death
• Joey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee,
and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to
extremes when she finds he has been cheating.
Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheating
Long shot of Rosalee Mid shot of her with Two shot of Rosalee
enter the library books and the librarian
Time- 7:51/8:55
Mid shot of Rosalee point of view http://www.youtube.com/wat
Mid shot of her looking at shot as she see’s her husband ch?v=4Vp-
books to borrow from the kissing another women Z0u4Rhs&feature=related
library
11. Character Representation
Good/happy wife
Mid shot of her smiling Two shot, Serving her Two shot, they are
and she seems very happy husband a drink having conversation
http://www.youtube.com/wat
ch?v=4Vp-
Z0u4Rhs&feature=related
Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her
next to her husband husband
(protection)
12. Character Representation
Angry housewife
Time- 00:00/00:53
http://www.youtube.com/watch
?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=relat
ed
Rosalee hatred towards her husband
because he cheated on her, she and
her mother planning to kill her
husband by over dose the food with
sleeping pills, and different
ingredient.
13.
14. Chosen theme, brainstorm
for opening
• Theme: Tragic (a bit), Romance
Close up
Flash forwards
Showing emotions Clips of after he
of a character/s proposed to her
Mid-shot
Brainstorm He took his phone out
Boyfriend + to see who called him
Girlfriend
POV
Other girl seeing them
Young and became together + proposing
engaged
Cheating in a
relationship
15. Research about our
theme: Young couples
• There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which
almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their
partner.
• So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to
relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry
prematurely because the need for connection wins out.
• Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some
experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity.
• In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their
adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It
is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that
this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance
that people will later come to realize that they didn’t really know
themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have
grown apart from their partner.
17. Who are the Characters &
who they represent
Carolle: Nevaeh
The Boyfriend’s other girlfriend
Ina: Lily
Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy,
John’s Fiancée
dark, and evil
Clothes: Smart/Cute clothes while
he’s proposing to her
Neil: John
Jeans and Top when she
The Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his
saw them holding hands
girlfriend
Clothes: Smart clothes when proposing
Jeans and Hoody when going
out with other girlfriend
18. Location/Setting
• Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is
outside looking at them.
• Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh
holding hands
19. How are we going to
create enigma
• Showing pieces of the puzzle
• Flashes of clips (flash forward)
• Expressions
20. 5 bullet points of what is going
to happen in the whole film
• John and Lily got engage and move in together
• Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that
John is cheating on her
• They always argue on simple things
• John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up,
and Lily read it and become’s suspicious
• John picks up the phone and meet up with
Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that Lily is following him
and Lily ended the relationship and John explains
that him and Nevaeh are just friends
21. 5 bullet points of what is going to
happen in the opening sequence
• John proposes to Lily while they’re on a date.
• Nevaeh is watching them angrily from outside the
cafe. Then *Flash Forward*
• Lily followed John and saw him holding hands with
Nevaeh
• Lily tries to call John
• He declined the call
23. Shot list
Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume
Number
1 Two Shot Lily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart clothes- jeans,
the cafe (having a date) polo, trainers, skirt, top,
shoes, coffee
2 Over the John taking out the ring to Ring in the box
Shoulder shot propose to Lily
3 Mid shot Nevaeh of her looking at Black jacket, jeans,
John and Lily angrily white top, boots, make
up black lipstick
4 P.O.V Nevaeh’s POV of what she is Table, chairs, coffee,
seeing people, ring, clothes
5 Close up Opening of the box (ring) Box and ring
6 Mid shot Lily shocked and happy Make up
7 Close up Lily’s eyes crying of joy
24. Shot Shot Name Description Props/Costume
Number
8 Extreme Close Him putting the ring in her Ring
up finger
9 Long shot John and Nevaeh holding Park, clothes-
hands in park trousers, Hoody,
trainers, jeans,
jacket, hand bag
10 Mid shot Lily behind John and Tracksuit trousers,
Nevaeh top, jacket, trainers,
hair tied back
11 Close up Lily dialling the phone to phone
call John
12 Two shot Nevaeh and John Talking Clothes, phone
(Mid shot) *Phone rings*
13 Extreme close Him declining the call phone
up
25. 1. INT. Inside the cafe shop. Day
Script
Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea.
Over-the-shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily
2. EXT. The cafe shop window
Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans, white top,
boots and black lipstick
Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she seeing
3. INT. Inside the coffee shop
Close up shot, of John’s hand opening the ring box
Mid shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouth speechless
Close up, of Lily’s face crying as John propose to her
Extreme close up, John putting the ring on Lily’s finger
4. EXT. The park (roundwood)
Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. John’s wearing black
trousers, hoody and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearing jeans, black jacket and hand bag
Mid shot, of Lily behide John and Nevaeh, Wearing tracksuit, top, jacket, trainers and hair
tied back
Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she press the button hard as she cannot
believe what she’s seeing
Two shot (Mid shot), Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, the phone rings
Extreme close up shot, of Johns hand and the phone and he declines the call
Blackout
26. Applying theories of
Todorov
• Everything started good- him proposing
• Then, becomes complicated- she sees John with
someone else, suspicion
27. Applying theories of
Propp
• Villain- Nevaeh- wearing black, emo looking, Lily
thinks that she is John’s girlfriend
• Main Character- John- story revolves around him
• Second Character- Lily- John’s girlfriend
29. Target Audience
• Age: 15-25
• Gender: Both
• Social Class: Working class
• Hobbies: exploring, going out,
• Lifestyle: Teenagers, young adults
• Location: London
