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The pixelated paradox
       of plain language
From the 40s to the noughties and beyond
      Wellington Plain Language SIG, TCANZ




Rachel McAlpine
Contented.com
Our agenda

Seven decades of language, plain and fancy.

Plain language: as old as Aristotle, as new as WCAG 2.0.

It's not sexy, but it is inextricable from usability (sexy)
and accessibility (scary).
Plain language 1940s




                       After WWII, some people
                       pondered the problems of
                       gobbledegook.
My language in the 1940s




                           Ecclesiastic
                           father. Literary
                           mother.
                           Handwriting on
                           paper. Talkative
                           sisters.
What is plain language?

 Wording, structure and design are so clear that the
 intended readers can easily find and understand the
 information they need.


1. Put the reader’s needs first.
2. Design for the reader.
3. Organise information for the reader.
4. Use short sentences (about 21 words maximum)
5. Use familiar words.
Plain language in the 1950s




                              Rudolf Flesch
                              began a long
                              career in plain
                              English. Books,
                              research,
                              readability.
My language in the 1950s




                      Studying French, English and Latin
                      literature at Christchurch Girls High
                      and Canterbury University.
                      Handwritten notes on second-
                      hand books.
Plain language in the 1960s




                         Sweden 1967: government
                         hires its first language expert to
                         edit legislation.
                         UK: Melinkoff promotes legal
                         plain language.
My language in the 1960s




                           In Geneva using French and
                           global English. Touch-typing
                           fiction on my Hermes Baby.
                           Talking with my children. 
Plain language in the 1970s

1977 New York Plain English Law
1976 Australia NRMA’s car
insurance policy
My language in the 1970s




Photo © Marti Friedlander



                            International Women’s Year, 1975.
                            War on male-dominated patriarchal
                            language, literature and life.
                             Fierce feminist poetry!
Plain language in the 1980s

1982—1985: British
government overhauls all
its forms, saving millions
of pounds.

Cost of errors in forms of
Department of Health and
Social Security alone had
been £685 million per
year. (Coopers & Lybrand).   Sweden Linguistic Division:
                             5 lawyers, 5 linguists. All new
                             legislation is reviewed for
                             clarity.
My language in the 1980s




                   Double lightning strike: the personal
                   computer and word-processing software.
                   Forever more, writing will be digital and
                   electronic.
Plain language in the 1990s

1998 EU British translators’ initiative.
1995 South Africa Consumer Protection Act.
1997 South Africa Constitution.

1990s:
Initiatives worldwide for clear contracts,
government communications, forms and
legal language.
My language in the 1990s

Talking to my children 




                           Lecturing in Japan. Writing
                           HTML and books on global
                           English and web content.
Plain language in the 2000s & 2010s




  NZ 2006: Lynda Harris launched
  WriteMark Plain English Awards




NZ 2008: lobby group established.   2010 US: Plain Writing Act.
My language in the 2000s & 2010s




                          An explosion of new
                          communication devices, channels,
                          software, languages, regulations.
                          More books written. More life
                          lived.
Who noticed? Technical communicators!
Reminder: what is plain language?

Wording, structure and design are so clear that the
intended readers can easily find and understand the
information they need.


1. Put the reader’s needs first.
2. Design for the reader.
3. Organise information for the reader.
4. Use short sentences (about 21 words maximum)
5. Use familiar words.
Plain language paradox

•   40 years old          •   Still valid
•   Analogue              •   Applies to all channels
•   Paper based           •   Applies to all devices
•   Simplistic            •   Applies to all content
•   Not sexy              •   Extends to usability
•   Boring phrase             Extends to accessibility
•   About writing only:
    not video, audio,
    apps…
Communication has pixelated into chaos
Bitsy—irrelevant—too complex—keeps changing!
Your job as a technical communicator or staff writer
sometimes seems impossible.




Just squint and you’ll see plain language holds it all together.
First principle: put the reader’s needs first!
Keep in touch!

Rachel McAlpine
rachel@contented.com
www.contented.com



We help you to conquer
communication chaos
in a digital workplace.

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The Pixelated paradox of plain language: from the forties to the noughties and beyond

  • 1. The pixelated paradox of plain language From the 40s to the noughties and beyond Wellington Plain Language SIG, TCANZ Rachel McAlpine Contented.com
  • 2. Our agenda Seven decades of language, plain and fancy. Plain language: as old as Aristotle, as new as WCAG 2.0. It's not sexy, but it is inextricable from usability (sexy) and accessibility (scary).
  • 3. Plain language 1940s After WWII, some people pondered the problems of gobbledegook.
  • 4. My language in the 1940s Ecclesiastic father. Literary mother. Handwriting on paper. Talkative sisters.
  • 5. What is plain language? Wording, structure and design are so clear that the intended readers can easily find and understand the information they need. 1. Put the reader’s needs first. 2. Design for the reader. 3. Organise information for the reader. 4. Use short sentences (about 21 words maximum) 5. Use familiar words.
  • 6. Plain language in the 1950s Rudolf Flesch began a long career in plain English. Books, research, readability.
  • 7. My language in the 1950s Studying French, English and Latin literature at Christchurch Girls High and Canterbury University. Handwritten notes on second- hand books.
  • 8. Plain language in the 1960s Sweden 1967: government hires its first language expert to edit legislation. UK: Melinkoff promotes legal plain language.
  • 9. My language in the 1960s In Geneva using French and global English. Touch-typing fiction on my Hermes Baby. Talking with my children. 
  • 10. Plain language in the 1970s 1977 New York Plain English Law 1976 Australia NRMA’s car insurance policy
  • 11. My language in the 1970s Photo © Marti Friedlander International Women’s Year, 1975. War on male-dominated patriarchal language, literature and life. Fierce feminist poetry!
  • 12. Plain language in the 1980s 1982—1985: British government overhauls all its forms, saving millions of pounds. Cost of errors in forms of Department of Health and Social Security alone had been £685 million per year. (Coopers & Lybrand). Sweden Linguistic Division: 5 lawyers, 5 linguists. All new legislation is reviewed for clarity.
  • 13. My language in the 1980s Double lightning strike: the personal computer and word-processing software. Forever more, writing will be digital and electronic.
  • 14. Plain language in the 1990s 1998 EU British translators’ initiative. 1995 South Africa Consumer Protection Act. 1997 South Africa Constitution. 1990s: Initiatives worldwide for clear contracts, government communications, forms and legal language.
  • 15. My language in the 1990s Talking to my children  Lecturing in Japan. Writing HTML and books on global English and web content.
  • 16. Plain language in the 2000s & 2010s NZ 2006: Lynda Harris launched WriteMark Plain English Awards NZ 2008: lobby group established. 2010 US: Plain Writing Act.
  • 17. My language in the 2000s & 2010s An explosion of new communication devices, channels, software, languages, regulations. More books written. More life lived.
  • 18.
  • 19. Who noticed? Technical communicators!
  • 20. Reminder: what is plain language? Wording, structure and design are so clear that the intended readers can easily find and understand the information they need. 1. Put the reader’s needs first. 2. Design for the reader. 3. Organise information for the reader. 4. Use short sentences (about 21 words maximum) 5. Use familiar words.
  • 21. Plain language paradox • 40 years old • Still valid • Analogue • Applies to all channels • Paper based • Applies to all devices • Simplistic • Applies to all content • Not sexy • Extends to usability • Boring phrase Extends to accessibility • About writing only: not video, audio, apps…
  • 22. Communication has pixelated into chaos Bitsy—irrelevant—too complex—keeps changing! Your job as a technical communicator or staff writer sometimes seems impossible. Just squint and you’ll see plain language holds it all together. First principle: put the reader’s needs first!
  • 23. Keep in touch! Rachel McAlpine rachel@contented.com www.contented.com We help you to conquer communication chaos in a digital workplace.

Editor's Notes

  1. Peter Rabbit CC wiipedia.Bible CC www.kingjamesbibleonline.org . Cursive handwriting: www.penwablog.com
  2. Old Canterbury University © friiskiwi, pxleyes.com Caesar Bellum Gallicum: openlibrary.org
  3. Photo ica.org
  4. Typewriter ehow.com
  5. Photo of Lightning CC Alberto-Jas-e, flickr.com
  6. Globe: wikipedia
  7. HTML image © abcomputered.com
  8. CSS image: © thecybertramp.com PHP image © arisroyo.com WCAG 2.0 stamp © greenbeast.com Everyday things © unknown Intranet © quintagroup.com
  9. Images © visualparadox.com and andrew.cmu.edu
  10. Pixelated fireworks © Caughtinthefire.com