4. Jay Franks
These screenshotsshowme analysingthe restof myclassmate’spitchesbypostingacommenton
theirblog.Ihave giventhemgoodfeedbackasI have explainedindetailwhatIthinkwasgood about
theirpitchfor theirmagazine,aswell asmentioningnegativecriticismontheirideasotheycan
make amendmentstotheirideawhenitcomestodesigningit.
Jasmine’sPitch
Emily’sPitch
Jess’sPitch