1. Audience Feedback
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Laura Hinds

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I found the meaning of my music video was
well understood
The audience liked the speed changes in my
video, it emphasized the meaning behind it
The ending of my video, on the shot of the fire,
was well received as it implied something was
coming to an end, which fits with the narrative
of the video
The use of four narrative quarters was
identified: Nature, Friendship of Girls, Coming
to an End and the Final Memory.
Positive

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Add a final ending of the two girls, overlaying
the fire, to accompany the “memorial sign”
It would add a bigger sense of finality and
remind the audience of the meaning of the
video
Changes