Copywriting secrets of the masters michael masterson - the 10% solution – mastering the lead

1. Copywriting Secrets of the Masters:
Michael Masterson
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The 10% Solution – Mastering the Lead
As a copywriter, 90% of your success depends on 10% of the copy you
write. Get that 10% right, and you‟ll have a golden career. Fail to master
that 10%, and you‟ll be eating ketchup sandwiches.
The 10% is the 300-500 words that make up the “lead” of your promotion or
advertorial.
In the coming months, I‟ll be teaching you everything I know about writing
great leads. To begin, I‟d like to take a look at one of the most common lead
types – the “problem/solution” lead.
In Monday‟s issue of The Golden Thread, up-and-coming copywriter Penny
Thomas does a very effective job of using a problem/solution lead to engage
her reader‟s interest.
Let‟s see what she does, starting with the headline:
How I Went From Layoff to Payoff –
3 Steps to Becoming the Copywriter You Really Want to Be
By Penny Thomas, Professional Freelance Copywriter
This is a “how to” headline. The “how to” in this case explains how the
author of the article overcame a big problem the reader of the article might
be experiencing himself or – at the very least – is worried about, especially
given today‟s economy.
Penny does three things to add gripping power to this very classic approach:
1. She uses a rhyming phrase: “From Layoff to Payoff.” Studies show
that most readers respond to and remember rhyming phrases.
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3. 2. She adds some specificity to the solution: it will come in three
steps. Three steps is a judicious choice for the implicit promise here.
The reader is willing to read three steps. He may not be willing to read
33.
3. She deepens the promise. The standard promise would be “six-
figure copywriter.” She is going after another desire here, a subtler and
deeper one, by broaching this promise of personal fulfillment.
4.
I also like the byline. It establishes Penny as both an expert and a role
model. Most of the people reading this publication, customers of AWAI, want
to become professional freelance copywriters too.
Now let‟s take a look at how she handles the lead:
Having survived four layoffs, every day at work felt like a gamble.
All I could think was, “Will I be next?”
It was Christmas time, and the investment banking firm I worked for decided
on a fifth layoff – effectively cutting out 25% of the staff. As luck would have
it, my name was on that list.
Fortunately, in October – a few months before the layoff – I got a letter
from AWAI in my mailbox that read,“Can You Write a Letter Like This One?”
Initially, I didn‟t give it much thought. But once I sensed things might go
south at my company, I decided to order AWAI‟s Accelerated Program for
Six-Figure Copywriting as an “insurance policy.”
In only nine sentences, Penny has done an awful lot of work here. It‟s really
very impressive. What she has done is to introduce a problem/solution lead
with a story. Rather than state the problem (that many employees today
face uncertain futures), she creates a little story in which she is the hero
with the problem.
Since it is first of all a story, Penny begins in the middle of the conflict:
“Having survived four layoffs, every day at work felt like a gamble. All I
could think was, „Will I be next?‟”
She makes the story more visible by establishing location (an investment
banking firm) and time (Christmas, 2002). She raises the stakes by making
the problem worsen: the fifth layoff had just taken place.
And then, she suggests the solution: sending away for the AWAI program.
That is exactly what you want to do when you use a problem/solution lead:
get the reader to feel the problem as quickly as possible, and then focus on
the solution.
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4. Let‟s see what Penny does next:
And now that I was jobless, the freedom copywriting offered seemed a
perfect fit with my love for writing.
To support myself, I did a little resume writing on the side, and took various
temp jobs.
I studied copywriting every moment I could… my rise to success was slow
but steady. By 2006, I had enough copywriting clients that I felt confident in
focusing on copywriting full-time.
What‟s more, now I‟ve achieved the goal I set for myself at last year‟s
Bootcamp. To return a year later as a “Wall of Famer”!
In explaining the solution, Penny discloses that her progress was “slow but
steady,” and yet it doesn‟t seem that way to the reader. Because she was
sparse on those details, the reader feels like Penny‟s writing success came
very quickly – which is just what the reader wants.
Let‟s continue:
Much of my success comes from what I call “WSM.” It‟s a system I use to
make sure I‟m always using my time to do the things that guarantee I‟ll
achieve the copywriting goals I‟ve set for myself.
Now Penny is doing something else that is rather clever. Now that the reader
understands the solution to the problem, he might put the article aside,
feeling that he knows what is going to follow. So she creates a little secret
by referring to the “WSM” system – the secret she used to succeed. A
secret, she says, that is so good she would “guarantee” that it will work for
the reader.
By now the reader is fairly well hooked. He wants to read on to find out
exactly how Penny achieved the success she has. Thus, the article
continues:
Here‟s what it stands for, and how it can help you achieve the writer‟s life:
W = Write
You‟re not a copywriter unless you write copy every day. Writing is how you
actually gain the skills and find your “voice.” Don't get caught up in the easy
mistake of wanting to learn it all and never finding the time to write. If you
don‟t have any clients to write for, write spec assignments, re-write any one
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5. of AWAI‟s promos, or write an article you could submit to a potential
publisher or use as a self-marketing piece.
S = Study
In addition to writing, you constantly need to be learning and sharpening
your skills. And that doesn‟t mean only studying copywriting. Read books on
marketing to give you a deep understanding of how this business works as a
whole. The more marketing you know, the better copywriter you‟ll be… and
the more valuable you‟ll be to every potential client that comes your way.
M = Market
As soon as you feel competent at writing copy, market yourself! It‟s the only
way you‟ll land paying assignments. And if you‟re feeling a little timid about
“being a copywriter,” simply fake it till you make it. Although cliché, there‟s a
profound truth in it.
To market yourself, write a self-promotion selling yourself and send it to
companies you‟d like to write for. When I started out, I marketed myself to
small, local companies. As my skills grew, I went to my local library, and got
a copy of Direct Marketing Market Place– a reference book listing companies
who use direct mail. Then I picked out a few companies and sent them a
promo selling my services.
In giving the reader an explanation of the “WSM” system, Penny is providing
a benefit, one that many readers will feel emotionally obliged to reciprocate.
And she adds to that by providing another benefit: she tells the reader how
to solve a related problem (an objection) he might be having.
And finally she ends by repeating the original promise – the solution to the
problem:
Once you follow WSM, you‟ll be living the writer‟s life before you know it. It
worked for me…See you at Bootcamp!
Penny demonstrates an advanced knowledge of how to use the
problem/solution lead. It‟s not surprising that the article got a lot of positive
feedback and some Bootcamp sign-ups.
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6. [Ed. Note: Be there when Michael Masterson and Penny Thomas continue
this conversation at Bootcamp next month.See the latest agenda and claim
one of the few remaining spots at this life-changing event…
This article was originally published as part of The Golden Thread
MICHAEL MASTERSON – There is no one more qualified and experienced
than copywriter, entrepreneur, and business-builder Michael Masterson to
teach you the art, craft, and business of copywriting.
Michael started his first business – a fifth-grade publishing venture – at age
11.
After finishing grad school at the University of Michigan in 1975, he spent
two years in the Peace Corps, where he began his writing career.
Several years later he was working as a writer for a small newsletter
publishing company in Washington D.C. Then, in 1982, he learned the art of
copywriting and launched the first of dozens of successful direct-marketing
ventures, many of which have become multi-million dollar companies.
All told, he‟s been directly involved in the generation of over ONE BILLION
DOLLARS of sales through the mail and online.
He‟s also a highly successful author. He‟s published more than a dozen
books, including several which have become Wall Street Journal,
Amazon.com or New York Times bestsellers.
Today, Michael consults mainly for newsletter publishing giant Agora, Inc.,
and writes regularly for Early To Rise, one of the most popular self-
improvement newsletters on the Internet, and for The Golden Thread,
AWAI‟s weekly copywriting newsletter.
But there‟s more to Michael Masterson than just his writing and business
skills.
Michael also has a knack for taking just about anyone with a burning desire
to upgrade his lifestyle – no matter what his background or education – and
transforming him (or her) into a top-notch copywriter:
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7.  He‟s the one responsible for transforming Paul Hollingshead from a 35-
year-old minimum-wage grocery store stock boy into a copywriter
earning upward of $300,000 a year … and Don Mahoney from a
woodworker to a $300,000-a-year copywriter living in Miami Beach …
 He‟s mentored other copywriters who have gone on to generate
hundreds of millions of dollars in sales each year through their copy …
 He‟s shown people in their 50s and 60s – people preparing for
retirement – how to successfully change careers and become well-paid
freelance copywriters …
 He‟s taken young people fresh out of college – with no “life experience”
at all – and turned them into top-notch copywriters and newsletter
journalists …
 He‟s taught housewives, bartenders, and laborers to excel …
 He‟s even helped “professionals” – doctors and college professors –
leave successful careers to enjoy the big money and stress-free
lifestyle copywriting offers
Discover how Michael can do the same for you with his
AWAI Accelerated Program For Six Figure Copywriting.
Michael Masterson
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