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Narrative Writing

Show and Tell Technique
Text One                             Text Two
-Gulliver got up, realized that he   - Gulliver had fallen asleep lying on his
was tied to the floor and noticed    back, and now he found that his arms
                                     and legs were tightly fastened to the
hundreds of tiny people running      ground. Across his body were numbers
around him.                          of thin but strong cords, and even his
                                     hair, which was very long, was pegged
-He did not understand what          down so securely that he could not
was happening and tried to free      turn his head.
himself from the ropes.              - Gulliver had fallen asleep lying on his
                                     back, and now he found that his arms
                                     and legs were tightly fastened to the
                                     ground. Across his body were numbers
                                     of thin but strong cords, and even his
                                     hair, which was very long, was pegged
                                     down so securely that he could not
                                     turn his head.
Text One                      Text Two
-Gulliver noticed many tiny   - Then many more small men began to swarm
people running around         over him. Gulliver let out such a roar of wonder
                              and fright that they all turned and ran, many of
him.                          them getting bad falls in their hurry to get out of
                              danger. But very quickly the little people came
-He did not understand        back again.
what was happening and
tried to free himself from    - Then he heard a great shouting, followed by a
                              shrill little voice that called sharply, "Tolgo
the ropes.                    phonac," and immediately, arrows like needles
                              were shot into his hand, and another volley struck
-Seeing this, the little      him in the face.
people started to attack.
                              -Poor Gulliver covered his face with his hand, and
                              lay groaning with pain.
                              - Again he struggled to get loose. But the harder
                              he fought for freedom, the more the little men
                              shot arrows into him, and some of them even
                              tried to run their spears into his sides.
Choose which text is better.
Criteria:                         Text One   Text Two

Does the text tell you about
Gulliver’s feelings?
Does the text describe what was
happening in detail?
Does the text describe the
environment/surroundings in
detail?
Does it describe the people and
their character?
Text Two is Better Because it shows
you a picture of what is happening.
Show and Tell
• Definition:
• This can be done through:
  1. Non-verbal communication
  2. Describing surroundings/environment
  3. Describing people
  4. Describing what was happening
  (event/activity)
Description of non-verbal
                communication
Telling                  Showing

He was angry when he Upon realizing that his drink was drugged, his face turned
found out that his   red and his breathing became heavier. He pounded his fist
drink was drugged.   on the table and demanded for an explanation.
Gulliver was lost and    Gulliver shook his head, unable to give an answer. He
confused.                frantically searched the map and fiddled with the compass.
                         He had no clue where he was and didn’t know where to go
                         from here. He sat back on his chair, gazed at the sky and let
                         out a worried sigh.
The little men shot      arrows like needles were shot into his hand, and another
arrows at Gulliver; he   volley struck him in the face. Poor Gulliver covered his face
was in pain.             with his hand, and lay groaning with pain.
                         Again he struggled to get loose. But the harder he fought
                         for freedom, the more the little men shot arrows into him,
                         and some of them even tried to run their spears into his
                         sides.
Describing surroundings
-Talk about the:
          * Weather (Breeze, Heat etc.)
          * Natural plants
          * Landscape (Mountains, valley etc.)
          * Buildings and Structures

Telling                                   Showing

The island was beautiful.                 With crystal clear waters and fine sand,
                                          the island before Gulliver was probably
                                          paradise. Coconuts trees were lined up
                                          neatly along the shores and swayed to
                                          the tunes of the wind.
Describing people
•     What they are doing?
•     Their Character
•     Their behaviour
•     Their appearance
    Telling                                   Showing
    That important man gave Gulliver a note   That man, who from his brilliant uniform
    from the king.                            seemed to be an officer of very high rank,
                                              marched with some others on to Gulliver's
                                              chest and held up to his eyes a paper
                                              which Gulliver understood to be an order
                                              from the King of the country.
Happenings/Events Description
Telling                                 Showing

When Gulliver was thirsty, the little   When he signed that he was thirsty,
people gave him food.                   they slung up on to his body two of their
                                        biggest casks of wine, and having rolled
                                        them forward to his hand they knocked
                                        out the heads of the casks. Gulliver
                                        drank them both off at a draught, and
                                        asked for more, for they held only about
                                        a small tumblerful each. But there was
                                        no more to be had.
SHOW AND TELL TECHNIQUE SHOULD
     HAVE:




                                  DESCRIPTION OF   DESCRIPTION OF
  NON-VERBAL     DESCRIPTION OF      WHAT IS       SURROUNDINGS
COMMUNICATION        PEOPLE        HAPPENING/           AND
                                      EVENT         ENVIRONMENT
LET’S TRY!
• Refer to page to of worksheet and read the
  first sentence.
• Take two minutes and brainstorm what
  aspects of show and tell you can use with your
  partner.
• Get ready to share with the class!
Sentence 1: Gulliver got up, realized
  that he was tied to the floor and
  noticed hundreds of tiny people
        running around him.
(possible answers from students to be scribed here)

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Narrative show and tell lecture

  • 1. Narrative Writing Show and Tell Technique
  • 2. Text One Text Two -Gulliver got up, realized that he - Gulliver had fallen asleep lying on his was tied to the floor and noticed back, and now he found that his arms and legs were tightly fastened to the hundreds of tiny people running ground. Across his body were numbers around him. of thin but strong cords, and even his hair, which was very long, was pegged -He did not understand what down so securely that he could not was happening and tried to free turn his head. himself from the ropes. - Gulliver had fallen asleep lying on his back, and now he found that his arms and legs were tightly fastened to the ground. Across his body were numbers of thin but strong cords, and even his hair, which was very long, was pegged down so securely that he could not turn his head.
  • 3. Text One Text Two -Gulliver noticed many tiny - Then many more small men began to swarm people running around over him. Gulliver let out such a roar of wonder and fright that they all turned and ran, many of him. them getting bad falls in their hurry to get out of danger. But very quickly the little people came -He did not understand back again. what was happening and tried to free himself from - Then he heard a great shouting, followed by a shrill little voice that called sharply, "Tolgo the ropes. phonac," and immediately, arrows like needles were shot into his hand, and another volley struck -Seeing this, the little him in the face. people started to attack. -Poor Gulliver covered his face with his hand, and lay groaning with pain. - Again he struggled to get loose. But the harder he fought for freedom, the more the little men shot arrows into him, and some of them even tried to run their spears into his sides.
  • 4. Choose which text is better. Criteria: Text One Text Two Does the text tell you about Gulliver’s feelings? Does the text describe what was happening in detail? Does the text describe the environment/surroundings in detail? Does it describe the people and their character?
  • 5. Text Two is Better Because it shows you a picture of what is happening.
  • 6. Show and Tell • Definition: • This can be done through: 1. Non-verbal communication 2. Describing surroundings/environment 3. Describing people 4. Describing what was happening (event/activity)
  • 7. Description of non-verbal communication Telling Showing He was angry when he Upon realizing that his drink was drugged, his face turned found out that his red and his breathing became heavier. He pounded his fist drink was drugged. on the table and demanded for an explanation. Gulliver was lost and Gulliver shook his head, unable to give an answer. He confused. frantically searched the map and fiddled with the compass. He had no clue where he was and didn’t know where to go from here. He sat back on his chair, gazed at the sky and let out a worried sigh. The little men shot arrows like needles were shot into his hand, and another arrows at Gulliver; he volley struck him in the face. Poor Gulliver covered his face was in pain. with his hand, and lay groaning with pain. Again he struggled to get loose. But the harder he fought for freedom, the more the little men shot arrows into him, and some of them even tried to run their spears into his sides.
  • 8. Describing surroundings -Talk about the: * Weather (Breeze, Heat etc.) * Natural plants * Landscape (Mountains, valley etc.) * Buildings and Structures Telling Showing The island was beautiful. With crystal clear waters and fine sand, the island before Gulliver was probably paradise. Coconuts trees were lined up neatly along the shores and swayed to the tunes of the wind.
  • 9. Describing people • What they are doing? • Their Character • Their behaviour • Their appearance Telling Showing That important man gave Gulliver a note That man, who from his brilliant uniform from the king. seemed to be an officer of very high rank, marched with some others on to Gulliver's chest and held up to his eyes a paper which Gulliver understood to be an order from the King of the country.
  • 10. Happenings/Events Description Telling Showing When Gulliver was thirsty, the little When he signed that he was thirsty, people gave him food. they slung up on to his body two of their biggest casks of wine, and having rolled them forward to his hand they knocked out the heads of the casks. Gulliver drank them both off at a draught, and asked for more, for they held only about a small tumblerful each. But there was no more to be had.
  • 11. SHOW AND TELL TECHNIQUE SHOULD HAVE: DESCRIPTION OF DESCRIPTION OF NON-VERBAL DESCRIPTION OF WHAT IS SURROUNDINGS COMMUNICATION PEOPLE HAPPENING/ AND EVENT ENVIRONMENT
  • 12. LET’S TRY! • Refer to page to of worksheet and read the first sentence. • Take two minutes and brainstorm what aspects of show and tell you can use with your partner. • Get ready to share with the class!
  • 13. Sentence 1: Gulliver got up, realized that he was tied to the floor and noticed hundreds of tiny people running around him. (possible answers from students to be scribed here)