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Clear plot
Research is developed
Convention of romance is apparent
Theme of romance is apparent
The idea
Good logline
Contrast of characters is strong
Representation of the protagonist is established well
The voiceover is appealing to the opening title sequence

4. • How we will film in the public locations
• What to include in the two minute sequence
• How we will make our film different and not
cliché
• How the main female characters personality
will be shown

5. From this feedback, we have realised what we need to improve
for our own opening title sequence. To solve the issue of filming
in a public location we will have a practice day where we will get
a feeling of the busy environment. As well as this, we hope to
solve the subject of what to include in our opening title
sequence by writing a script and storyboard of our events
occurring in the two minutes. Additionally, to make sure the film
is not cliché we will remove the typical themes that occur in
romantic films and use our originality to create our own themes
and events. Finally, the personality of the female character will
be hidden in the first two minutes as we do not get to see her
real emotions. However, during the film her personality will be
revealed.