1. Peer Review Exercise # 3
1. When it can be told clearly what kind of advantage there is by getting how long our services is more
excellent than other service thrown in for more our free, people would choose our service with priority.
-> When it can be told clearly about getting what kind of advantage by our service, people knows our
services is more excellent than other service, people would choose our service with priority.
2. There is importance of the documents for launching business so that the person who read a document
has you know what kind of business our company does.
->It is important to make the documents for launching business so that the person who read a document
can know what kind of business our company does.
3. It is a paragraph and a sentence that it is important in a logical arrangement paragraph.
-> It is a paragraph and a sentence that it is important in a logical
arrangement paragraph.
4. To eating our meal to customer as long as possible, we have to known to customers that they can
taste the local cooking which they can taste only in the area at our restaurant.
-> To eating our meal to customer as long as possible, we have to know to customers that they can taste
the local cooking which they can taste only in the area at our restaurant.
5. To relax to customer, it is important to endeavor not only the menu but also the store decors.
-> To relax in the customer, it is important to make effort not only Abundant menus but also interior
decorations of store.
6. We give many kind as possible as we can for the visitor and we hope them satisfaction.
-> We give the visitor as many kind as possible and we hope for their satisfactions.