Writing is an essential form of communication in which you share your thoughts with your reader. It is important that your reader receives the message that you are sending.
1. Writing: Presenting You
C Gita Bosch, PhD, MBA
Academic & Educational Consulting
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Say all you have to say in the fewest
possible words, or your reader will be
sure to skip them; and in the plainest
possible words or he will certainly
misunderstand them. John Ruskin
2. Outline
Personal statement
Writing strategies
Writer’s block
Personal statement
Some examples
Wrap-up
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3. Personal Statement
Job cover letter
Abstract/Paper
Grant proposal
Thesis proposal/Dissertation
Writer Reader
Thought Impression
words
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4. Personal Statement
Introduction of you
Commitment and motivation
Writing skills
Inform and persuade
Who am I?
What do I
want to do?
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5. Your qualifications/experiences
Your goals
Introduction of you
I have to talk
about my
research…do I
think like a
scientist?
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6. Do not use slang/clichés/jargon
Use active, not passive voice
Be positive
Do not use gigantic words when
diminutive alternatives can suffice
Better to understate than exaggerate
Writing skills
My personal
statement has to
be a
professional
document?
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7. Inform and persuade
Beginning
Interesting and captivating
Middle
Substance = Research Statement
Ending
Reader wants to meet you
OMG! I need
weeks to work
on my Personal
Statement!
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8. Where do I start?
What is your story?
Outline
Linear, hierarchical (left-brain)
Mind mapping (right-brain)
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10. Mind Mapping
Main idea = commonality of semi-main
ideas
Logically relate the boxes
Number each network in relevance to
the main idea
I have an
OUTLINE!
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11. Procrastination
Open computer to write and….
Check FB, email, etc.
Writer’s block
Now what?
How am I going to
get through this? I
have to talk about
my whole life…will
they think I am
qualified? What if
they hate my PS?
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12. Anxiety
Not enough planning
Grandiose expectations
Over-thinking
Underestimating your ability
Boredom
Not enough planning
Narrow thinking
Writer’s block
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13. Zoom out, think about the big picture
Free write
Prepare an outline
Zoom in on the task at hand, writing
Take small chunks and write
Do not guess at the readers’ reactions
Writer’s block solutions
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14. Listen to instrumental music
Clear the clutter in your writing space
Find a new space to write
Write at a different time of day (when is
your most productive time?)
Take a walk, exercise, take a nap
Writer’s block solutions
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15. Strategies to be a better writer
Writing is like preparing to run a marathon
Write everyday
Set an output goal for each writing
session and stop when you reach it
Write about what you are interested in,
your voice
Writing generates ideas, keep writing
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16. Writing vs. Editing
Send your internal editor away!
Write on paper, you go back less than if
you write on the computer
Write the whole draft, wait two days,
then edit
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17. Personal Statement
Beginning
Interesting & captivating = the hook
Who are you?
Why do you want to go to graduate school?
Middle
Substance = Research Statements
Experiences
Ending
Reader wants to meet you
Why this program
Inform and Persuade
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18. What does the school want
to know? BE HONEST
Your goals—degree, field, specialty
Why are you pursuing this degree?
What events brought you to this point?
What makes you qualified to do this?
Why are you applying to this School?
How will they help you reach your goals?
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19. Read the instructions
Answer the questions
Why are you unique
Accent the positive
Briefly address negative events which
impacted your academics, no excuses
Show how the negatives positively
impacted your growth
Do not whine
What you should do BE HONEST
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20. SKGSBS
Writing about your research
Introduce the overall purpose of the
research
Describe specifically what you worked
on and what you did
Describe how your work fitted into the
overall objective of the main project, the
field and human health
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21. Research paragraph
One of the goals of the laboratory is to generate
…. We studied ….. My project involved ….. The
resulting structures were …. Because they …..,
these structures could be used to …..
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22. Personal Statement
Write. Edit. Edit more.
Get feedback
Have faculty read & comment for content
Have someone read & comment for writing
Rewrite. Edit. Rewrite.
Will they want
to me meet
after reading
this?
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23. Read it
out loud
The Final Touch
No errors!
Grammar. Spelling. Language.
Proofread!
Punctuation: commas, colons, & semicolons
Apostrophes and hyphens
Subject-Verb agreement
Word usage
Listen to
it
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24. Some Common Errors
Its v. It’s
Affect v. Effect
Would have v.
Would of
Supposed to v.
Suppose to
Then v. Than
Wonder v.
Wander
Their v. There v.
They’re
Farther v. Further
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25. Personal Statement
Deliberate & thoughtful
Clear & simple language
Concise (trim the fat)
Interesting & creative
Style & tone
Vary the sentence forms
Seamless transitions between paragraphs
More is not necessarily better
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ERROR-
FREE
ZONE
26. A new scientific truth does not triumph
by convincing its opponents and
making them see the light, but rather
because its opponents eventually die,
and a new generation grows up that is
familiar with it. Max Planck
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