1. 1ST Draft, 2nd Draft and
3rd Draft
OF ADVERT 2

2. 1ST Draft
Advert
Model Pose Title
I will make
her hold the I have
perfume placed
bottle, so the advert
that the title on
model top of the
seems as if large
she needs perfume
the
bottle, be
perfume.
Also, I have cause it
made the stands
pose quite out, as it
simple to is also
create a covering
sense of the
elegance scenery
slightly
Layout
I have placed the model slightly to the left, so that the scenery can be
seen, but also because I need to leave space for the advert title and the
picture of a perfume bottle

3. Original

4. 2nd Draft
• The image is completely different to the 1st Draft, due to the
weather. Therefore, I couldn’t go to the park and had to take
it in the house. Therefore I have changed the product from
perfume to fashion, due to the pose.
• I cropped the picture, because there was a door, as well as
there being too much white background, as the model
couldn’t stand out

5. 3rd Draft
• I moved the model up, as there was
a large gap at the top, which wasn’t
appealing to the eye

6. 4th Draft
• Instead of having the advert title on the
bottom left, I have moved it to the top of
the picture, because of the pose and there
is a white gap at the top.