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Beyond the Manual: Writing for
Web, Mobile, and Social Media


          Ellen Buttolph
    STC Mid-Atlantic Conference
           March 2013

                          Follow me on Twitter: @ebuttolph
It’s Not Just About the Manual
1. Know Your Users


• Why are they visiting your website?
• Why are they reading your blog, your Tweets
  or your Facebook postings?
• What are their needs?
• How can you learn more about them?
Read
Listen
Interview
User Personas

“Personas are fictional
 characters created to represent
 the different user types within
 a targeted demographic,
 attitude and/or behavior set
 that might use a site, brand or
 product in a similar way.”
                  Wikipedia.com




                                   http://stcbok.editme.com/PersonaMarciaHouston
2. Start a Conversation


“Good web writing is like a conversation.”
                                    Ginny Redish
                         Letting Go of the Words
Direct Conversation
What is…?                What does it …?
                         Can I…?
Implied Conversation

• Did you know?
Write Good Conversation

•   Take turns with headings.
•   Use pronouns like you, us, we.
•   Use action verbs.
•   Write visually with white space and lists.
3. Show Your Personality



Stop writing boring corporate content.
Voice and Tone

• Voice expresses your site’s personality.
• Tone reflects the feelings or mood of the
  voice.
• Voice is consistent, while tone can change.
MailChimp Style Guide: http://voiceandtone.com
Define Your Voice

•   Ask key questions:
   • Who visits your site?
   • Why do they visit?
   • How do you want them to feel?
• Create a list of personality traits.
 • Write sample text.
4. Tell a Story
Tell a Story


•   Stories engage other people.
•   Stories create empathy.
•   People remember stories.
5. Write Clearly and Concisely



  Make your content easy to understand.
Use Plain Language
Make It Easy to Scan

•   Put important information first.
•   Write useful headings.
•   Use white space.
•   Use bullet lists.
Keep It Short

•   Write short sentences, 10 to 20 words.
•   Keep paragraphs short, less than 100 words.
•   Cut unnecessary words.
•   Use short, common words
Use Active Voice

• Active voice makes it clear who is doing what.
• Put the action in verbs, not nouns.
Keep it Simple
Stop Crafting Perfect Sentences


   It’s about sharing information.
What You Can Do Now

• Join the conversation.
• Start a discussion.
• Write a blog.
• Create mobile user assistance.
• Keep writing.
Resources
•   Letting Go of the Words: Writing Web Content that Works, Janice (Ginny)
    Redish

•   Storytelling for User Experience: Crafting Stories for Better Design, Whitney
    Quesenbery and Kevin Brooks

•   The Yahoo Style Guide, Chris Barr and the Senior Editors of Yahoo

•   Conversation and Community: The Social Web for Documentation,
    Anne Gentle

•   VoiceandTone.com, MailChimp Style Guide

•   CenterforPlainLanguage.org

•   PlainLanguage.gov

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Beyond the Manual: Writing for the Web, Mobile and Social Media

  • 1. Beyond the Manual: Writing for Web, Mobile, and Social Media Ellen Buttolph STC Mid-Atlantic Conference March 2013 Follow me on Twitter: @ebuttolph
  • 2. It’s Not Just About the Manual
  • 3. 1. Know Your Users • Why are they visiting your website? • Why are they reading your blog, your Tweets or your Facebook postings? • What are their needs? • How can you learn more about them?
  • 7. User Personas “Personas are fictional characters created to represent the different user types within a targeted demographic, attitude and/or behavior set that might use a site, brand or product in a similar way.” Wikipedia.com http://stcbok.editme.com/PersonaMarciaHouston
  • 8. 2. Start a Conversation “Good web writing is like a conversation.” Ginny Redish Letting Go of the Words
  • 9. Direct Conversation What is…? What does it …? Can I…?
  • 11. Write Good Conversation • Take turns with headings. • Use pronouns like you, us, we. • Use action verbs. • Write visually with white space and lists.
  • 12. 3. Show Your Personality Stop writing boring corporate content.
  • 13. Voice and Tone • Voice expresses your site’s personality. • Tone reflects the feelings or mood of the voice. • Voice is consistent, while tone can change.
  • 14. MailChimp Style Guide: http://voiceandtone.com
  • 15. Define Your Voice • Ask key questions: • Who visits your site? • Why do they visit? • How do you want them to feel? • Create a list of personality traits. • Write sample text.
  • 16. 4. Tell a Story
  • 17. Tell a Story • Stories engage other people. • Stories create empathy. • People remember stories.
  • 18. 5. Write Clearly and Concisely Make your content easy to understand.
  • 20. Make It Easy to Scan • Put important information first. • Write useful headings. • Use white space. • Use bullet lists.
  • 21. Keep It Short • Write short sentences, 10 to 20 words. • Keep paragraphs short, less than 100 words. • Cut unnecessary words. • Use short, common words
  • 22. Use Active Voice • Active voice makes it clear who is doing what. • Put the action in verbs, not nouns.
  • 24. Stop Crafting Perfect Sentences It’s about sharing information.
  • 25. What You Can Do Now • Join the conversation. • Start a discussion. • Write a blog. • Create mobile user assistance. • Keep writing.
  • 26. Resources • Letting Go of the Words: Writing Web Content that Works, Janice (Ginny) Redish • Storytelling for User Experience: Crafting Stories for Better Design, Whitney Quesenbery and Kevin Brooks • The Yahoo Style Guide, Chris Barr and the Senior Editors of Yahoo • Conversation and Community: The Social Web for Documentation, Anne Gentle • VoiceandTone.com, MailChimp Style Guide • CenterforPlainLanguage.org • PlainLanguage.gov