19. Grey circle now sits better on the page as it is more transparent. The boldness of the WIN still grabs the readers attention.
20. Adding a light grey glow around the cover lines means they can be easily read at first glance.
21. Spreading the glow around the Headline looks like sparkles reflecting the fame and celebrity of the cover star.
22. Again I added glow around the banner at the bottom so it stand forward from the image.
23. Overall I am very pleased with my cover, I think it is exciting and will stand out on a magazine stand the direct form of address form the model and the bold headline and masthead and a lot of lure words such as Exclusive and WIN!