1. Zoltars Invasion
Written By
Evie Heffer
Based on, if any
PRODUCTION DRAFT
Blue Revised Nov 17, 2013
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2. 1
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INT. JAY'S HOUSE - DAY
Jay talking to his parents.
JAY
(nervously)
How far away is the school from
here, dad?
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FATHER
Not far away. We'll be leaving in
half an hour.
MUM
(shouting from upstairs)
Have you put your lunch in your
bag, Jay? It's in the fridge.
Jay walks over to the kitchen.
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JAY
(whispering to himself)
I really really don't want to go to
this new college, I'm scared to
meet new people.
FATHER
Have you also remembered all of
your books and paper work, you want
to make a good effort
(without Jay seeing)
Don't worry son I'll put them in
your bag for you.
Jay's father using his powers without moving. He makes all
of Jay's books fly from the shelves into Jays bag while Jay
walks back into the kitchen.
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Jay's mum walks down the stairs and sorts out Jay's collar
and tie.
JAY
(embarrassed)
Get off me, mum!
FATHER
Come on Jay lets get going...
(MORE)
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JAY
(looking shocked)
How did you do that so quickly?
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3. 2
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(CONT'D)
Jay and his father are sitting in the car, Jay's father is
talking to him about how to behave and be confident.
FATHER
I know you won't want to hear this
Jay but this is a big opportunity
for you to finally make some
friends and grow up a little bit.
You'll find out a lot about your
self you've just got to be
confident and believe in yourself.
JAY
(looking un-interested)
Alright, dad. I will, what's the
school like? Will it be like all
the others? I just hate school,
dad.
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FATHER
You'll find out, Jay.
Pulling up to the school, all the children are hyper,
greeting each vother, some are using special powers.
JAY
(confused)
What is this place, dad? They are
all using their special powers, is
that normal? Do i have one?
FATHER
Get out of the car, Jay. Enjoy your
day i'll pick you up at the end of
the day.
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4. 3
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Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:41 PM
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Double the,meant to say "too"
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:44 PM
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Need a capital i
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:46 PM
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Need a capital i
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Kitchen*
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:47 PM
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Quickly*
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:48 PM
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Collar*
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Embarrassed*
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:48 PM
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Change to 'to'
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:50 PM
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Capital letter
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:58 PM
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Highfen
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:58 PM
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Good - classic pep talk
Evie Heffer Nov 15, 2013 3:57 PM