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Feedback of First Draft,[object Object]
Negative Feedback of First Draft,[object Object],Front cover looks a bit random. Doesn’t look professional,[object Object],These are two different pages so keep them separated ,[object Object],See how it will look with the black background just on the headings of the editorial pillars,[object Object],Alot of white space. Fill it up ,[object Object]
Positive Feedback of First Draft,[object Object],Good images and pages matches with the editorial pillars,[object Object],Use of colours are good. Coordinated with the front cover ,[object Object],The use of resizing images and page numbers to make it stand out is really catchy,[object Object],The setting out of this is professional and looks attractive,[object Object],Looks attractive and professional,[object Object]
From looking at the feedback there is a lot to improve I will start by:,[object Object],[object Object]

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Feedback Of First Draft

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  • 5. I will only have the black background on the ‘FEATURES’, ‘REVIEWS’, ‘NEWS’ and ‘GIGS’ and make my white text black instead
  • 6. next to my film tape I will add a black background describing what the images are from and contact details