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 They’re   our signal that a text is poetry, not
  prose.
 They can create rhythm.
 They control the pace/speed of a poem.
 They can emphasize words or ideas.
William Carlos Williams’
     “This Is Just to Say”
         in Varied Forms
This is just to say I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox
and which you were probably saving for breakfast. Forgive me;
they were delicious – so sweet and so cold.




This Is Just to Say

I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox
and which you were probably saving for breakfast.
Forgive me; they were delicious – so sweet and so cold.


What’s the difference between these two poems?
This Is Just to Say                                       This Is Just to Say

I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox            I
and which you were probably saving for breakfast.         have
Forgive me; they were delicious – so sweet and so cold.   eaten
                                                          the plums
                                                          that were in
                                                          the icebox
                                                          and which
                                                          you were
                                                          probably
                                                          saving
                                                          for
                                                          breakfast
                                                          Forgive me
                                                          they were
  What’s the difference between these two                 delicious
  poems?                                                  so sweet
                                                          and so cold
  What effect do the shorter lines have?
Cw line breaks
 Stanza is Italian for “room”
   • Think of stanzas of a poem as rooms of a house
 Indicates a pause
 Often coincides with the rhythm of a
  poem/song.
 Used strictly in forms
 Prevents confusion (through organization)/
  boredom in readers
 Poem’s form of a paragraph
 Best thing? There’s no right or wrong way to
  divide one of your own poems.
This Is Just to Say        This Is Just to Say

              I                          I
              have                       have
              eaten                      eaten
              the plums
              that were in               the plums
              the icebox                 that were in
              and which
              you were                   the icebox
              probably
              saving                     and which
              for                        you were
              breakfast                  probably
              Forgive me                 saving
              they were
              delicious                  for
              so sweet                   breakfast
              and so cold
                                         Forgive me

                                         they were
                                         delicious
How do the stanza breaks influence the   so sweet
reading of the poem?                     and so cold
This Is Just to Say          This Is Just to Say

I                            I have eaten
have                         the plums
eaten                        that were in
                             the icebox
the plums
that were in                 and which
                             you were probably
the icebox                   saving
                             for breakfast
and which
you were                     Forgive me
probably                     they were delicious
saving                       so sweet
                             and so cold
for
breakfast

Forgive me

they were             How do the stanza breaks influence the
delicious             reading of the poem?
so sweet
and so cold
 What  happens when you break a
 line/stanza mid-sentence?
 “This   is Just to Say”
  • William Carlos Williams
 Youdetermine the line breaks & stanza
 breaks.
Cw line breaks
Cw line breaks
 Justification   (left, right, center)
 Font
  • Typeface
  • Size
  • Bold/italics/underline
 Shape    of poems
 Tabs
 Space    between words
 See   Natalie’s poem.

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Cw line breaks

  • 3.  They’re our signal that a text is poetry, not prose.  They can create rhythm.  They control the pace/speed of a poem.  They can emphasize words or ideas.
  • 4. William Carlos Williams’ “This Is Just to Say” in Varied Forms
  • 5. This is just to say I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast. Forgive me; they were delicious – so sweet and so cold. This Is Just to Say I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast. Forgive me; they were delicious – so sweet and so cold. What’s the difference between these two poems?
  • 6. This Is Just to Say This Is Just to Say I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox I and which you were probably saving for breakfast. have Forgive me; they were delicious – so sweet and so cold. eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast Forgive me they were What’s the difference between these two delicious poems? so sweet and so cold What effect do the shorter lines have?
  • 8.  Stanza is Italian for “room” • Think of stanzas of a poem as rooms of a house  Indicates a pause  Often coincides with the rhythm of a poem/song.  Used strictly in forms  Prevents confusion (through organization)/ boredom in readers  Poem’s form of a paragraph  Best thing? There’s no right or wrong way to divide one of your own poems.
  • 9. This Is Just to Say This Is Just to Say I I have have eaten eaten the plums that were in the plums the icebox that were in and which you were the icebox probably saving and which for you were breakfast probably Forgive me saving they were delicious for so sweet breakfast and so cold Forgive me they were delicious How do the stanza breaks influence the so sweet reading of the poem? and so cold
  • 10. This Is Just to Say This Is Just to Say I I have eaten have the plums eaten that were in the icebox the plums that were in and which you were probably the icebox saving for breakfast and which you were Forgive me probably they were delicious saving so sweet and so cold for breakfast Forgive me they were How do the stanza breaks influence the delicious reading of the poem? so sweet and so cold
  • 11.  What happens when you break a line/stanza mid-sentence?
  • 12.  “This is Just to Say” • William Carlos Williams  Youdetermine the line breaks & stanza breaks.
  • 15.  Justification (left, right, center)  Font • Typeface • Size • Bold/italics/underline  Shape of poems  Tabs  Space between words
  • 16.  See Natalie’s poem.