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How to
write copy
that
focuses on
your reader
This is #2 of a FREE
copywriting course.
3 tips that will improve
the way you write
Sign up here
Lesson2: You VS ME
How to write copy that
focuses on your reader
When you write marketing
collateral for your business
it’s pretty normal to start with
what you know…
If you want people to
engage with your
message,
Make them the star of
your story.
MAKE IT PERSONAL
I’M NOT
LIKE
EVERYONE
ELSE!
Use the powerful word in marketing….
YOU
TIP: use YOU twice as much as ME/WE/US
How to turn ME into YOU
1. Identify every sentence starting with WE/I
2. Consider how it impacts your customer
3. Rewrite the sentence so it’s about them
 Because we [do X] you can [benefit]
 We [do X] which means that …
 We [do X] so you can [benefit]
 When you need [X] we can help.
We help you get your tax done on
time.
We help you get your tax done on
time.
Turns into…
Leave your tax stress with your taxes
– on our desk.
Our studio only does ashtanga yoga.
Our studio only does ashtanga yoga.
Turns into…
Because we only do ashtanga yoga, you
know you’re learning from a specialist.
Our business opened in
1967.
Our business opened in
1967.
Turns into…
Since opening our doors
in 1967, we’ve been
delivering the kind of
quality service that keeps
our customers coming
back, decade after
decade.
Remember….
1. ID those WE/I statements
2. Think about the impact
3. Add how readers benefit
4. Use YOU more than WE/I
Want to learn more
professional
copywriting tips?
Find out about my next
Copywriting Master Class
/copywritematters
@copywritemattrs
Copywrite Matters
Subscribe to The Copy Detective
blog for a new copywriting mystery
solved every week …
www.thecopydetective.com
If you want to learn how to write copy with
personality and action – head to
copywritematters.com
You’ll find copywriting courses, content and more.
Contact me
Copywrite Matters

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Word Smart copywriting tutorial - How to write customer centric copy

  • 2. This is #2 of a FREE copywriting course. 3 tips that will improve the way you write Sign up here
  • 3. Lesson2: You VS ME How to write copy that focuses on your reader
  • 4. When you write marketing collateral for your business it’s pretty normal to start with what you know…
  • 5.
  • 6. If you want people to engage with your message, Make them the star of your story.
  • 9. Use the powerful word in marketing…. YOU TIP: use YOU twice as much as ME/WE/US
  • 10. How to turn ME into YOU 1. Identify every sentence starting with WE/I 2. Consider how it impacts your customer 3. Rewrite the sentence so it’s about them  Because we [do X] you can [benefit]  We [do X] which means that …  We [do X] so you can [benefit]  When you need [X] we can help.
  • 11. We help you get your tax done on time.
  • 12. We help you get your tax done on time. Turns into… Leave your tax stress with your taxes – on our desk.
  • 13. Our studio only does ashtanga yoga.
  • 14. Our studio only does ashtanga yoga. Turns into… Because we only do ashtanga yoga, you know you’re learning from a specialist.
  • 16. Our business opened in 1967. Turns into… Since opening our doors in 1967, we’ve been delivering the kind of quality service that keeps our customers coming back, decade after decade.
  • 17. Remember…. 1. ID those WE/I statements 2. Think about the impact 3. Add how readers benefit 4. Use YOU more than WE/I
  • 18. Want to learn more professional copywriting tips? Find out about my next Copywriting Master Class
  • 19. /copywritematters @copywritemattrs Copywrite Matters Subscribe to The Copy Detective blog for a new copywriting mystery solved every week … www.thecopydetective.com If you want to learn how to write copy with personality and action – head to copywritematters.com You’ll find copywriting courses, content and more. Contact me Copywrite Matters