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Scientific Writing
Task 2
Comments on "Landscape of Genomic
Alterations in Cervical Carcinomas"
By Andini Indyanita
Structure
• Its structure is not classified into seperate
sections.
• Abstract identified is located at the end of article
• Introduction, methods, results, and conclusion
are clearly stated.
• The discussion is not stated in this article.
Clarity
• The title does not clearly explain what the article
is about.
• There is no supporting captions, subheads, or
highlighted terms in this article.
• Graphics and pictures stated are well presented.
Content
• The subject is clearly stated : the genomic
alterations at servical cancer.
• The purpose is clearly stated : to find new
strategies to combat the disease.
• The research conducted is well presented.
Understanding
• Content of this article is easy to understand,
however the structure make it more complex.

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Scientific Writing Task 2

  • 1. Scientific Writing Task 2 Comments on "Landscape of Genomic Alterations in Cervical Carcinomas" By Andini Indyanita
  • 2. Structure • Its structure is not classified into seperate sections. • Abstract identified is located at the end of article • Introduction, methods, results, and conclusion are clearly stated. • The discussion is not stated in this article.
  • 3. Clarity • The title does not clearly explain what the article is about. • There is no supporting captions, subheads, or highlighted terms in this article. • Graphics and pictures stated are well presented.
  • 4. Content • The subject is clearly stated : the genomic alterations at servical cancer. • The purpose is clearly stated : to find new strategies to combat the disease. • The research conducted is well presented.
  • 5. Understanding • Content of this article is easy to understand, however the structure make it more complex.