We received feedback on a rough cut from an audience and aimed to improve the opening sequence for the final cut. We made changes such as shooting the entire sequence in widescreen, adding missing titles, using more efficient fading, adding a voiceover to a bar scene, improving sound continuity throughout, and adding ambient sounds. The feedback helped expand on our planned changes and draw attention to other areas for improvement.

2. Added titles to the sequence that were missing previously.

3. We also added more efficient fading to the film, to allow more elliptical editing indications.

4. A voiceover for the bar scene to make the shot more believable and less bare.

5. The sound throughout the whole sequence to be more continuous and levels to be more adjusted to each scene.

6. Addition of ambient sound in the likes of the bar scene. Even after adding these additions to the sequence we used the feedback given to expand on what we already wanted to change and highlight areas that we may have not noticed before.<br />