1. My Five Best
Writing Tips

2. 1. Cut the Fat

3. Such utilization of these good
coffee beans helps in the
barista’s ability to brew great
coffee.

4. Such utilization of these good
coffee beans helps in the
barista’s ability to brew great
coffee.

5. Using good beans helps
baristas brew great coffee.

6. Using good
beans helps
baristas brew
great coffee.

7. There is very good coffee provided for
people by Starbucks for free if you show
them your “I Voted” sticker.

8. Starbucks provides free coffee
to voters.

9. Starbucks
provides free
coffee to voters.

10. It is true that Starbucks’ coffee
beans are totally overroasted
from too much time in the
roaster.

11. Starbucks burns its coffee.

12. Starbucks
burns its
coffee.

13. 2.Make
It Flow

14. “Water can flow or it
can crash.
Be water, my friend.”
-Bruce Lee

15. • 1. Strong Subject
• 2. Strong Verb
• 3. New Information

16. In a strange move back toward utility at later
section of On Rhetoric, Aristotle seems to
undermine the play that may occur rhetorically in a
text by his exploration of fallacious enthymemes.
His first type of fallacious enthymeme comes “from
verbal style,” particularly regarding homonyms,
which are built into many puns. Hence, the
puncept likely represents a fallacious proof or a
constructed meaning within Aristotle‟s system.
However, if the meaning is worthwhile, whether
the meaning is formulated or natural matters little.

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18. 3. Make the
Subject the
Subject

19. This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.
-famous lines from T.S. Eliot’s “The Hollow Men”
The world ends, not with a
bang, but a whimper.

20. The situation of human cloning
presents moral dilemmas for
humanity.
Human cloning presents moral
dilemmas for humanity.

21. Capital punishment is
viewed differently by everyone.
Better: Everyone views capital
punishment differently.

22. 4. Read

23. 5. Write

24. 6. Break
the Rules