53. E|Spaces
attracts
entrepreneurs,
businesses
and
freelancers
who
need
to
create
a
professional
image
and
focus
in
their
work.
We
promote
learning
and
collegiality.
56. We
say...Join
today.
We
don’t
say...E|Spaces
is
the
hottest
spot
in
town.
Join
up!
[too
slangy]
57. We
say...Join
today.
We
don’t
say...E|Spaces
is
the
hottest
spot
in
town.
Join
up!
[too
slangy]
We
say...E|Spaces
means
top-‐notch
speakers
and
networking.
58. We
say...Join
today.
We
don’t
say...E|Spaces
is
the
hottest
spot
in
town.
Join
up!
[too
slangy]
We
say...E|Spaces
means
top-‐notch
speakers
and
networking.
We
don’t
say...E|Spaces
members
find
that
the
networking
and
speakers
are
beyond
compare.
[too
stilted,
passive]
63. Internet
or
internet?
email,
e-‐mail,
E-‐mail,
what??
members,
customers,
E|Spacers?
615.500.4131,
615-‐500-‐4131,
(615)
500-‐4131?
What
about
the
1-‐
?
64. Internet
or
internet?
email,
e-‐mail,
E-‐mail,
what??
members,
customers,
E|Spacers?
615.500.4131,
615-‐500-‐4131,
(615)
500-‐4131?
What
about
the
1-‐
?
Should
we
call
out
time
zone
in
copy?
65. Internet
or
internet?
email,
e-‐mail,
E-‐mail,
what??
members,
customers,
E|Spacers?
615.500.4131,
615-‐500-‐4131,
(615)
500-‐4131?
What
about
the
1-‐
?
Should
we
call
out
time
zone
in
copy?
Should
we
mention
that
prices
are
in
USD?
69. “While
homogenous
groups
feel
more
confident
in
their
performance
and
group
interacNons,
the
diverse
groups
are
more
successful
in
compleNng
their
tasks.”
—Bunkhuon Chhun, writing about the
research of Katherine W. Phillips,
Katie A. Liljenquist and Margaret A. Neale