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- 2. CHARACTERS Characters include: • Jane – the possessed daughter • Mother- also know as Judith is the mother of Jane • Father- Also known as Justin is the Father of Jane
- 3. STORYLINE • 1. Jane begins telling her story, happiness ‘I used to have a happy life, everything was close to perfect’… shots of family, friends and social events • 2. But then something happened to me that would change my life forever, I tried to warn them • 3. Cuts to scene ‘mum, there’s something wrong with me, I can feel it’… ‘listen to me because this is the last time I’m going to say this, it’s all in your head and im sick and tired of you telling me the same story, GROW UP (big climax). • 4. Creak of the door. Loud music comes, hands begin to grab Jane she screams’ leave me alone, leave me alone, and finally shouts ‘go away’ they disappear, she looks around and nothing is there. • 5. It then cuts to a dialogues scene with her mum, “ I’m scarred i think its returning, that the thing is happening again” • 6. She looks around searching her room checking everything is normal, she then seats down and stares into her mirror, but she see nothing, not even her own reflection, it’s just black. Then a face appears, slowly it evolves from a spec to her own reflection, but it’s not quite what she was expecting. • 7. • 8. The camera zooms in towards the mirror, we hear a loud thud, she screams and begins fighting with herself banging her head on the wall then you hear her final scream, she becomes evil, total transformation, we no longer see this happy girl, instead we see a demon, red eyes, thick matted black hair, blood dripping teeth, yellow in colour, ancient in age, panning shot, the transition is made. • 9. Cuts to scene with mum talking “i think our daughters possessed” • 10. Flashing scene 1: jane goes into the mothers bedroom, point of view shot from janes perspective mother cries out ‘jane, jane, JANE’ also the ending • • 11. Flashing scene 2: preist casts out demon • 12. Flashing scene3: dad looking for jane‘ where are you?’
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- 6. Camera shot Medium/over the shoulder shot Camera movement Panning shot From over the shoulder AUDIO 1 – SPOKEN MY NAME IS JANE AND I’M 14...
- 7. Camera shot Medium, two shoot Camera movement Pans up Dialogue I USED TO HAVE A HAPPY LIFE
- 8. Camera shot Medium , two shot Dialogue Mum there something wrong with me
- 9. Close up/medium shot Dialogue: mum I think there something wrong with me
- 10. Camera shot Long shot Camera angle: High angled ddialogue: please mum please
- 11. Camera shot Medium/ long shot Dialogue listen to me because this is the last time I’m going to say this, it’s all in your head and im sick and tired of you telling me the same story, GROW UP Camera angle straight view
- 12. Camera shot Close up/mediu,m shot Sound effects Creek of the door
- 13. Camera shot Close up shot Dialogue Aaaah!!! Sound: Intense music begins form this scene through to the next
- 14. BDROOM SHOT
- 15. Camera shot Close/medium shot Dialogue I think there is something wrong with jane
- 17. Camera shot Over the shoulder shot
- 18. Tagline
- 19. Camera shot Close up Camera movement Pans to the left
- 21. Camera shot Close up Camera angle High angle Sound effects Dramatic music in back ground
- 22. tagline Can Jane change what now is apart of her
- 24. Camera shot Medium long shot/over the shoulder Tranasition Jump
- 26. Camera shot Close up shot Dialogue Jane?!!