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        Credit: Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace by
                  Williams and Colomb
Far from being locked inside our own skins, inside
the “dungeons” of ourselves, we are now able to
recognize that our minds belong, quite naturally, to
a collective “mind,” a mind in which we share
everything that is mental, most obviously language
itself, and that the old boundaries of the skin is not
boundary at all but a membrane connecting the
inner and outer experience of existence. Our
intelligence, our wit, our cleverness, our unique
personalities--all are simultaneously “our own”
possessions and the world’s.

 --Joyce Carol Oates “New Heaven and New Earth”
Let’s break that
     down:
Far from being locked
	 	 	 	 	 	
	 	 	 	 	 	 inside our own skins,

 
 
 
 
 
 inside the “dungeons” of ourselves,

we are now able to recognize
Long
                         introductory
                       series of phrases

 Far from being locked
 	 	 	 	 	 	
 	 repeated 	 	 inside our own skins,
     	 	 	
preposition 
 inside the “dungeons” of ourselves,
 
 
 
 
 

we are now able to recognize

    The Subject
RECOGNIZE...

that our minds belong, quite naturally, to a collective “mind,”

	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 everything that is mental,
a mind in which we share
	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 most obviously language
	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 itself,
        and

                                not boundary at all
                                      but
that the old                    a membrane connecting
boundaries of the skin is       the inner and outer
                                experience of existence.
“our own”
Our intelligence,                          possessions
our wit,
our cleverness, --all are simultaneously   and
our unique
personalities                              the world’s.
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The national unity of a free people depends upon a
sufficiently even balance of political power to make it
impracticable for the administration to be arbitrary and for
the opposition to be revolutionary and irreconcilable.
Where that balance no longer exists, democracy perishes.
For unless all the citizens of a state are forced by
circumstances to compromise, unless they feel that they
can affect policy but that no one can wholly dominate it,
unless by habit and necessity they have to give and take,
freedom cannot be maintained.
	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 	 Walter Lippman
This then is the heritage of pioneer experience,--a passionate
belief that a democracy was possible which should leave the
individual a part to play in free society and not make him a cog in
a machine operated from above; which trusted in the common
man, in his tolerance, his ability to adjust differences with good
humor, and to work out an American type from the contributions
of all nations--a type for which he would fight against those who
challenged it in arms, and for which in time of war he would
make sacrifices, even the temporary sacrifice of individual
freedom and his life, lest that freedom be lost forever.


 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 Frederick Jackson Turner

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Elegance and sentence style

  • 1. Check out these sentences: Credit: Style: Lessons in Clarity and Grace by Williams and Colomb
  • 2. Far from being locked inside our own skins, inside the “dungeons” of ourselves, we are now able to recognize that our minds belong, quite naturally, to a collective “mind,” a mind in which we share everything that is mental, most obviously language itself, and that the old boundaries of the skin is not boundary at all but a membrane connecting the inner and outer experience of existence. Our intelligence, our wit, our cleverness, our unique personalities--all are simultaneously “our own” possessions and the world’s. --Joyce Carol Oates “New Heaven and New Earth”
  • 4. Far from being locked inside our own skins, inside the “dungeons” of ourselves, we are now able to recognize
  • 5. Long introductory series of phrases Far from being locked repeated inside our own skins, preposition inside the “dungeons” of ourselves, we are now able to recognize The Subject
  • 6. RECOGNIZE... that our minds belong, quite naturally, to a collective “mind,” everything that is mental, a mind in which we share most obviously language itself, and not boundary at all but that the old a membrane connecting boundaries of the skin is the inner and outer experience of existence.
  • 7. “our own” Our intelligence, possessions our wit, our cleverness, --all are simultaneously and our unique personalities the world’s.
  • 9. The national unity of a free people depends upon a sufficiently even balance of political power to make it impracticable for the administration to be arbitrary and for the opposition to be revolutionary and irreconcilable. Where that balance no longer exists, democracy perishes. For unless all the citizens of a state are forced by circumstances to compromise, unless they feel that they can affect policy but that no one can wholly dominate it, unless by habit and necessity they have to give and take, freedom cannot be maintained. Walter Lippman
  • 10.
  • 11.
  • 12. This then is the heritage of pioneer experience,--a passionate belief that a democracy was possible which should leave the individual a part to play in free society and not make him a cog in a machine operated from above; which trusted in the common man, in his tolerance, his ability to adjust differences with good humor, and to work out an American type from the contributions of all nations--a type for which he would fight against those who challenged it in arms, and for which in time of war he would make sacrifices, even the temporary sacrifice of individual freedom and his life, lest that freedom be lost forever. Frederick Jackson Turner