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Kristina D’Arcangelo                                                                D’Arcangelo 1

Professor David DiSarro

English 101

22 January 2013



                              A Walk to Remember
       It was a brisk, windy day in late April. I woke up to my mother yelling at me, “Tina, get

up and make yourself useful for a change!” As usual, I groaned, rolled over, and decided that I

was not going to get up. After a few more unsuccessful attempts to get me out of bed by yelling

up the stairs, my mom finally ran up the stairs as fast as lighting and opened my bedroom door.

“The whole family is going to walk around the neighborhood and try to raise money, and I want

you to be a part of it this year,” my mother scolded. She was talking about The Walk for

Hunger.


       For the previous five years, my mother, father, and older sister, Jessica, had participated

in the twenty mile walk through Boston known as the Walk for Hunger. It is a fund raiser in

which people sponsor “walkers” to walk anywhere from one to twenty miles throughout Boston.

The proceeds go to help starving families. This year, my younger sister, Sara, was finally old

enough to participate, and couldn’t wait. Her eagerness and willingness amazed me. How could

an eight year old be so excited to partake in a long, dreary walk, let alone a fund raiser? This got

me thinking, “If Sara’s doing it this year, I will never hear the end of it from Mom and Dad.

Maybe I’ll just walk a few miles.” I shared my thoughts with my mother and knew I couldn’t

amend my decision.
D’Arcangelo 2


       Unfortunately, the guilt and shame of my younger sister participating in the walk didn’t

hit me until a week before the actual Walk for Hunger. My parents and sisters had already been

throughout the entire neighborhood as well as their jobs asking people to sponsor them and

donate money, so I didn’t know where to start. The sponsors will either donate a sum of money

of their choice or donate a certain amount of money for every mile you complete. I figured my

only option was to still walk around the neighborhood and see what happened. I can remember

starting at my neighbor’s house next door, when a ginormous gust of chilling wind blew my

pamphlet out of my hands. I began chasing after my papers thinking, “I knew this was a horrible

idea.” To my surprise, every single house I knocked on donated money. I could not believe that

people were still contributing even after they had already donated to my four other family

members. I also asked some of my teachers, all of which donated as well. Every single one of

my teachers was so proud of me and thought I was doing a very honorable thing. My disbelief

started changing into satisfaction.


       Every year the Walk for Hunger is executed on a Sunday. Walkers can begin as early as

six o’clock AM. To my dismay, my mother would not let me out of the house the Saturday night

before. Again, I was regretting my choice to participate and was furious. When the big day

finally arrived, my mother woke me up at 5:00 AM, telling me that it was going to be very cold

and rainy. I put on many layers of clothing shivering, just thinking about the treacherous road

ahead of me.


       The fifteen minute ride into Boston felt like an eternity. When we finally arrived at the

starting point, my attitude rapidly changed. Everyone was so cheerful and pleasant. The
D’Arcangelo 3


gratitude from all of the Walk for Hunger directors was warming and overwhelming. We

immediately started the walk. I can remember walking along the Charles River in a torrential

downpour with blustering winds forcing the rain to go sideways.           I had a numbing chill

throughout my entire body. I kept forcing myself to think, “You’re doing the right thing. People

die every day from hunger, and the rain is not going to kill you.” I stuck it out, and ended up

walking the entire twenty miles with the rest of my family. To this day, I have never walked that

long aside from the Walk for Hunger. My family alone ended up raising over two thousand

dollars, which was very rewarding.


       When I woke up the next day, I was like a concrete statue, unable to bend, let alone

move. My entire body was in excruciating pain. That extremely lengthy walk has shaped me. I

realized that I had taken my comfortable life for granite. I am lucky to have such great parents to

support me and push me to become a better person. I also recognized the importance of

community service.Without community service, the death rate would tremendously rise. It takes

courage and devotion for someone to give up their own time and money for a needy person; but

if you put yourself in someone less fortunate’s shoes your mind would change too. At first, I

thought twenty miles was unbearable, but after accomplishing it I realized that starvation was

much more intolerable than walking.

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  • 1. Kristina D’Arcangelo D’Arcangelo 1 Professor David DiSarro English 101 22 January 2013 A Walk to Remember It was a brisk, windy day in late April. I woke up to my mother yelling at me, “Tina, get up and make yourself useful for a change!” As usual, I groaned, rolled over, and decided that I was not going to get up. After a few more unsuccessful attempts to get me out of bed by yelling up the stairs, my mom finally ran up the stairs as fast as lighting and opened my bedroom door. “The whole family is going to walk around the neighborhood and try to raise money, and I want you to be a part of it this year,” my mother scolded. She was talking about The Walk for Hunger. For the previous five years, my mother, father, and older sister, Jessica, had participated in the twenty mile walk through Boston known as the Walk for Hunger. It is a fund raiser in which people sponsor “walkers” to walk anywhere from one to twenty miles throughout Boston. The proceeds go to help starving families. This year, my younger sister, Sara, was finally old enough to participate, and couldn’t wait. Her eagerness and willingness amazed me. How could an eight year old be so excited to partake in a long, dreary walk, let alone a fund raiser? This got me thinking, “If Sara’s doing it this year, I will never hear the end of it from Mom and Dad. Maybe I’ll just walk a few miles.” I shared my thoughts with my mother and knew I couldn’t amend my decision.
  • 2. D’Arcangelo 2 Unfortunately, the guilt and shame of my younger sister participating in the walk didn’t hit me until a week before the actual Walk for Hunger. My parents and sisters had already been throughout the entire neighborhood as well as their jobs asking people to sponsor them and donate money, so I didn’t know where to start. The sponsors will either donate a sum of money of their choice or donate a certain amount of money for every mile you complete. I figured my only option was to still walk around the neighborhood and see what happened. I can remember starting at my neighbor’s house next door, when a ginormous gust of chilling wind blew my pamphlet out of my hands. I began chasing after my papers thinking, “I knew this was a horrible idea.” To my surprise, every single house I knocked on donated money. I could not believe that people were still contributing even after they had already donated to my four other family members. I also asked some of my teachers, all of which donated as well. Every single one of my teachers was so proud of me and thought I was doing a very honorable thing. My disbelief started changing into satisfaction. Every year the Walk for Hunger is executed on a Sunday. Walkers can begin as early as six o’clock AM. To my dismay, my mother would not let me out of the house the Saturday night before. Again, I was regretting my choice to participate and was furious. When the big day finally arrived, my mother woke me up at 5:00 AM, telling me that it was going to be very cold and rainy. I put on many layers of clothing shivering, just thinking about the treacherous road ahead of me. The fifteen minute ride into Boston felt like an eternity. When we finally arrived at the starting point, my attitude rapidly changed. Everyone was so cheerful and pleasant. The
  • 3. D’Arcangelo 3 gratitude from all of the Walk for Hunger directors was warming and overwhelming. We immediately started the walk. I can remember walking along the Charles River in a torrential downpour with blustering winds forcing the rain to go sideways. I had a numbing chill throughout my entire body. I kept forcing myself to think, “You’re doing the right thing. People die every day from hunger, and the rain is not going to kill you.” I stuck it out, and ended up walking the entire twenty miles with the rest of my family. To this day, I have never walked that long aside from the Walk for Hunger. My family alone ended up raising over two thousand dollars, which was very rewarding. When I woke up the next day, I was like a concrete statue, unable to bend, let alone move. My entire body was in excruciating pain. That extremely lengthy walk has shaped me. I realized that I had taken my comfortable life for granite. I am lucky to have such great parents to support me and push me to become a better person. I also recognized the importance of community service.Without community service, the death rate would tremendously rise. It takes courage and devotion for someone to give up their own time and money for a needy person; but if you put yourself in someone less fortunate’s shoes your mind would change too. At first, I thought twenty miles was unbearable, but after accomplishing it I realized that starvation was much more intolerable than walking.