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Your Name Austin Shettler
Your Topic Serengeti
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Thesis Statement
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I believe that... the Serengeti is the best place in the world to go and explore.
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You should test whether or not it is a thesis
statement by imagining the words, "I believe that" Is your language at a high-level? What does high-level language mean?
before the thesis statement.
Those three words are not actually part of the
thesis statement.
Your Subtopics
Topic Why is the Serengeti Topic The wildlife in the Topic
The great migrations.
1 important? 2 Serengeti. 3
Most Important Topic / Strongest 2nd Most Important Topic 3rd Most Important Topic / Weakest
Are your topics completely different?
Are your topics interesting?

2. Topic 1 Why is the Serengeti important?
What is one good sentence
People sometimes wonder what the importance of the
to introduce this topic to
Serengeti is.
your reader?
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Support #1
1-5 sentences The Serengeti is the important because of the different animals that live in the.
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Support #2
1-5 sentences
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Support #3
1-5 sentences
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transition into the next paragraph?
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Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

3. Topic 2
What is one good sentence
to introduce this topic to
your reader?
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Support #1
1-5 sentences
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Support #2
1-5 sentences
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Support #3
1-5 sentences
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transition into the next paragraph?
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Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

4. Topic 3
What is one good sentence
to introduce this topic to
your reader?
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Support #1
1-5 sentences
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Source
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Support #2
1-5 sentences
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Source
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Support #3
1-5 sentences
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Source
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Is the information arranged from less important to most important?
Does every sentence help support your topic?
Does this information get you a step closer to proving your thesis?
Do you provide sentences of different lengths and complexities in this paragraph?

5. Introduction Paragraph
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Ask yourself
1) How can I get my reader's attention?
2) Imagine your reader knows nothing about your topic. What background information could I give my reader about
my topic?
3) Why should the reader care to know this information?
4) What is it you are trying to prove?
Attention Getter
1 Sentence
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What was your attention getter? A Question A Quick Story An Interesting Fact A Quote
A Shocking Statistic An Unusual Statement Other
Background Information
2-5 Sentences
- Introduce your topic, but not
your thesis
- Provide insider details that
would help your reader better
understand your topic, without
providing information you are
discussing in your support.
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Why should your reader care?
Complete this sentence..
It is important that you read this
essay because...
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your essay.
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Thesis Statement
(paste the one you already
wrote on page 1)
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Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly?
Would you want to read your paper after reading your introduction?

6. Conclusion Paragraph
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A conclusion should...
1) Include a brief summary of the paper's main points.
2) Suggest results or consequences
3) Leave a lasting impression
Restate your thesis in
a fresh, new way
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 1
1-3 Sentences
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 2
1-3 Sentences
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Summarize / Reflect / Give
Final thoughts on Topic 3
1-3 Sentences
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Final Thought
1 Sentence
-Contains vivid language
-Compound or Complex sentence
-Leave a lasting impression
-Sums up your essay in one
incredible sentence
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Did you avoid referring to yourself or your reader directly?
Did you feel your conclusion leaves the reader satisfied and impressed?

7. BIBLIOGRAPHY
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Paragraph Organization- Copy and Paste your sentences in the correct order
Paragraph 1- Introduction Paragraph 3 - Body Paragraph 2 Paragraph 5 - Conclusion
- Attention Getter - Topic Introduction - Thesis Restatement
- Background Information - Support 1 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 1
- Why should we care sentence - Support 2 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 2
- Thesis Statement - Support 3 - Summarize/Reflect/Final - Topic 3
- Transition - Strong Final Thought
Paragraph 2 - Body Paragraph 1
Paragraph 4 - Body Paragraph 3 Final page - Bibliography
- Topic Introduction - On a new page
- Support 1 - Topic Introduction - Titled - Bibliography
- Support 2 - Support 1 - Use citations created from Easybib
- Support 3 - Support 2 - MLA Format
- Transition - Support 3 - Alphabetized
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Did I check all punctuation and capitalization? Have I done my best?
Did I rid my essay of unnecessary qualifiers like "Really" "Just" "Sort of" "Like" and "So"
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