Connecting with consumers when they’re on the go is more important than ever and SMS marketing can be a highly effective technique. Here are 5 tips for writing marketing texts that get read and produce results.
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4. 1. How to Create Your
Message
2. SMS Marketing
Campaign Samples
3. What Makes a
Promotion Work
OBJECTIVES
5. Connecting with
consumers when they’re
on the go is more
important than ever and
SMS marketing can be a
highly effective technique
CREATING YOUR MESSAGE
6. Here are 5 tips for writing
marketing texts that get
read and produce results
CREATING YOUR MESSAGE
7. Laser-focused
No room for fluff in
mobile marketing
Know your target
audience and speak
directly to it
TIP #1: BE BRIEF AND
FOCUSED
8. Leave out extaneous
details
Describe only how to
take advantage of your
offer
TIP #1: BE BRIEF AND
FOCUSED
9. If your message looks
like spam, consumers
will delete it
It is critical to leave out
anything that is too
slick or promotional
TIP #2: AVOID HYPE SLANG
ABBREVIATIONS
10. That includes marketing
hype like “amazing”
offers, slang and
abbreviations which
can destroy your
campaign
TIP #2: AVOID HYPE SLANG
ABBREVIATIONS
11. No one wants to
receive texts from a
company unless the
messages offer
something of value
TIP #3: OFFER SOMETHING OF
IMMEDIATE VALUE
12. Because SMS is
instantaneous, you
should include real-
time offers
TIP #3: OFFER SOMETHING OF
IMMEDIATE VALUE
27. Sample 1:
50% off all leather laptop
bags at www.abcbags.com
for the next 48 hours only.
Use coupon code
HALFOFFTEXT at checkout.
GOOD SAMPLES
28. Sample 2:
ABC Bags 50% off leather laptop bags
through 3/31/12. Show this message to
store manager to get half off. Find a store:
www.abcbags.com/locations.
GOOD SAMPLES
43. Lesson
Make your call to action
simple to understand and
execute
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
44. Lesson
Every time you add a
layer – multiple steps,
keywords – you’re just
making it harder for
people to reach you
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
45. Ford
Ford ran an campaign
inviting viewers to text a
shortcode to learn more
about their latest model
and other offers
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
46. Ford
After customers text, the autoresponder
just sent out a pretty bland message
detailing financing offer and a phone
number of a dealer
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
47. Ford
Two weeks later – same
message. Two weeks after
that – same message.
Another two weeks –
guess what?
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
50. Pampers
In 2011, they ran a list-
generating campaign to
encourage customers to
sign up to their mailing list
and receive rewards
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
51. Pampers
To do this, they stuck a
sticker into their product
packaging. The sticker
instructed the reader in
tiny writing that if they…
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
52. Pampers
Wished to benefit from
rewards they should text
the 15 digit reference to a
shortcode number
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
53. Pampers
The reply they received was: “Sorry, we
couldn’t find your mobile number. Please
enter your email address. Msg&data rates
may apply. reply STOP 2 quit, HELP 4help &
T&Cs”
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
54. Pampers
Obviously you are going to send over your email,
to which Pampers replied: “Sorry, we could not
find your email @ Pampers GTG. Please register
at pampers.com. Msg&data rates may apply.
reply STOP 2 quit, HELP 4help”
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
55. Pampers
So customers would go
to the website and
found a long data-entry
form asking for more
information.
THINGS NOT TO FOLLOW
59. Orange
Orange is a mobile
network operator who, six
years ago, began an SMS
campaign
THINGS TO FOLLOW
60. Orange
that was designed to benefit Orange
customers, but was in fact, so unbelievably
successful that it actually ended up
changing the habits of consumers
regardless of their mobile phone provider.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
65. Lesson
More importantly it was
memorable since practically
everyone knows what
“Orange Wednesday” is
THINGS TO FOLLOW
66. BMW
BMW Germany ran a
campaign highlighting the
necessity of winter tires.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
67. BMW
They sent an MMS to everyone who had
bought a BMW that year, with a picture of
the car they bought, in the color they
bought it in, with the tires – and reminded
customers of the requirement
THINGS TO FOLLOW
73. Dylon: Color Catcher
They ran a series of
adverts on TV offering a
free sample so that
consumers could see how
well the product worked.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
75. Dylon: Color Catcher
In the end they were able
to give out over 34,000
samples
THINGS TO FOLLOW
76. Dylon: Color Catcher
What makes this
campaign interesting is
Dylon’s decision to use
different keywords for the
inbound SMS
THINGS TO FOLLOW
77. Dylon: Color Catcher
So, they were able to tell what
the take up was in different
areas of the country- and
refine subsequent campaigns
accordingly.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
81. Walkers
Walkers gave away an
iPod every hour to people
who texted a code shown
on their crisp packets.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
82. Walkers
Aside from dishing out the
prizes to the winners,
Walkers’ campaign is
interesting because they
also replied to the losers.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
83. Walkers
On one day, they sent the message ‘Did you
know that 34% of the winners yesterday
came from Barbecue Beef?’ – and the next
day, 78% of the entrants came from that
flavour.
THINGS TO FOLLOW
86. Lesson
We expect it from family, friends and
colleagues. Why shouldn’t we expect it
from a company who wants us to buy
their stuff?
THINGS TO FOLLOW
87. Lesson
For Walkers, the reply
was all it took to generate
an increase in sales
within 24 hours
THINGS TO FOLLOW
93. Let’s look at a Promotion
and point out a few
things that could improve
their SMS marketing
campaign
BEFORE AND AFTER
94. Let’s take for example a
Restaurant and Lounge
business
BEFORE AND AFTER
95. Promotion Before
“All draft beer only $2 on Wednesday,
Karaoke starts at 9pm come sing & get a
chance to win dinner for 2. Show your
server this txt for $2 drafts”
BEFORE AND AFTER
101. Respect time sensitivity
Promote the day of the
special, not days before
BEFORE AND AFTER
102. Promotion After
“Draft beer is only $2 all day today – simply
show this text! Karaoke starts at 9pm, so
come sing and enjoy the bang for your
buck!”
BEFORE AND AFTER