1. ORIGINAL VERSION
PROMETEO AND PANDORA
The life was easy in remote times and one day Zeus gave the orders to be
all Epimeteo to which he ordered him that he will take two boxes to the Earth, the
big one and one small, the big box was full of differences and it should be
distributed between the men and the animals, and the small box only should be
opened when Zeus was indicating him.
Epimeteo went to the land, went he sat down to resting a mouse happened and
the first differentiates that he gave it was the coyness, soon big and small
creatures surrounded Epimeteo who was delivering the differences one by one.
Prometeo sending a message to Zeus saying that he needed something for the
man to warm up in the cold nights of winter and to look their food, Prometeo
thought of sending fire to the man and Zeus prohibited him to do it, Prometeo did
not notice and took fire to the land, Zeus punished Prometeo and as for Epimeteo,
he couldn’t return to the mount Olympus.
After times Zeus there send him a wife to Epimeteo, who was called
Pandora, but he couldn’t say to her what existed in the small box, though she was
insisting. To Pandora it entered the curiosity for knowing what is inside the box
and opened it, this one was full of problems, and she put to cry when Epimeteo
returned saw what Pandora had done and on having appeared to the box
Epimeteo realized that only there were problems but also the hope was there.
Then the two filled with happiness and from that day the hope has been the
best friend of the man and they have remained there for a lot of time.

2. REFORMULATED VERSION
PROMETEO AND PANDORA
In remote times life was really easy and quiet. One day, Zeus ordered
Epimeteo (describe who Epimeteo is) to do everything he said. He gave him two
boxes, one was big and the other small. The big one was full of differences which
he should distribute among animals and men, and the small one should be
opened just when Zeus ordered to do it.
Epimeteo went to Earth, and when he was resting next to a tree a mouse
appeared, so he gave it the first difference, that was coyness. Soon many
creatures surrounded Epimeteo who gave them all the differences, one by one.
Prometeo ( This part is not very clear as what it has to do with the story)
After some time, Zeus sent Epimeteo a wife, who was called Pandora. Epimeteo
wasn’t allowed to tell her about what the content of the small box was, although
she insisted a lot.
Pandora was really curious about knowing what was inside it so she decided
to open it. What she found was just lots of problems, and when she saw them she
started to cry. When Prometeo arrived and saw what Pandora had done, he
realized that there weren’t only problems there but there also was hope.
Finally they were overwhelmed with happiness and from that moment on,
hope has been the best man’s friend.

3. ORIGINAL VERSION
To:
From:
Date: May, 8th
Subject: Restaurant Grant
The Restaurant Grant is situated in the Capital of Neuquén. It’s a beautiful place.
It’s near the Lake and far of the city centre.
There is good nature and a lot of trees near of it. Is very big and there a lot of
people working on it. Is the biggest restaurant in the city. A lot of tourists visits it every
year.
There is something bad with the Grant, is very far of the centre of the city and the
people of the centre can’t visit it.
The Grant is a good and recommended place to visit in the holidays with the family
or friends.
REFORMULATED VERSION
To: Bonus Track
From:
Date: May, 8th
Subject: Grant Restaurant
The Grant Restaurant is situated in the capital city of Neuquén. It’s a really beautiful
place near a lake and far away from the city centre.
Among the positive things of the restaurant, we can underline the fact that:
 It is surrounded by many trees so you can get in contact with nature.
 It is quite big, in fact it is the biggest restaurant in the whole city.
 Many people work there, and tourists visit it every year.
Nevertheless Grant restaurant has some negative aspects such as:
 It is too far away from the city centre, so people cannot get there easily.
 It is very expensive, only foreigners can afford it.
 The menu is not very varied and there aren’t special meals for vegetarians or celiac.
If you are in Neuquén for some days, visit the Grant Restaurant and enjoy its
wonderful view of the lake, but remember to take enough money as it is very expensive
indeed.