1. The Other Side of Malaysia
As neighbors, we should live in peace and harmony in our
neighborhood. In order to make it comes true, we have to build
good relationships, not threatening each other, nor stealing other’s
property. Just like Indonesia and Malaysia. By living close this
whole time, we have enough to see Malaysia’s true nature.
Malaysia has been a real “BADASS” toward us, like how they
raped our people and stole our cultures.
Thesis

2. Recently, the Malaysian police investigated a man for allegedly
raping, beating and scalding a 26 years old Indonesian maid from
Sumatra. Even the Malaysian polices raped a 15 years old Indonesian.
These are not the only cases that occurs. There are thousand more
cases of sexual abuses and rapes. Ties between the two neighbors
have been tense over frequent reports of abuse in recent years.
Even the society figures give bad examples. Like Sultan Tengku
Muhammed Fakhry abused Manohara Odelia Pinot, Indonesian
actress and model. We all know that Sultan is the role model for
the people. Even the role model violates human rights, it will
automatically affect the people of Malaysia.
Arguments

3. Besides abuse cases, Malaysia also claimed Indonesia’s culture.
Years ago, they claimed Pendet and Reog Ponorogo, Bali’s
traditional dances; Gamelan; and our precious batik. Not only
our culture, they even sold our products with their trademark.
For example our famous coffee candies, Kopiko, they sold
them in Philippine with their trademark without permission
from the company. There’s more. They claimed our Ambalat
Island as theirs. They also claimed our ‘tempe’ and ‘rendang’
from West Sumatra.
Arguments

4. With all evidences and facts about Malaysia, we know the Malaysia
which said that their country is truly Asia is just hiding their dark side
with a mask of brilliance. And the mask should be stripped off of
their face to expose their bad nature. These all are why Malaysia is a
real bad country.
Reiteration

5. Thesis : Outline of the arguments are presented
“Malaysia has been a real “BADASS” toward us, like how they
raped our people and stole our cultures.”
Arguments : States, develop and support the main argument
1. “Recently, the Malaysian police investigated a man for
allegedly raping, beating and scalding a 26 years old
Indonesian maid from Sumatra. “
2. “Even the role model violates human rights, it will
automatically affect the people of Malaysia.”
3.”Besides abuse cases, Malaysia also claimed Indonesia’s
culture”
Reiteration : Re state the writer opinion
“These all are why Malaysia is a real bad country. “