4. 2) Brainstorming
Beaches
Summer Winter
-Swimming -Beach games -Less crowded Sitting with
friends around
-Water sports -Relax on sand -Walking alone a fire
6. 4) Outline
• TS: Beaches are fun in summer and in winter
• SS1: (Summer) you can swim and do many other water sports
• E.G.1: you can play beach games or relax on the warm sand
• SS2: (Winter) beaches are less crowded, so they are good
places for walking alone
• E.G.2: sitting with a group of friends around a fire
• CS: a beach is a place to have fun.
7. Beaches
Beaches are fun in summer and in winter.[TS] In
summer, you can swim and do many other water sports.
[SS1] If you don't like water sports, you can play beach
games or relax on the warm sand. [E.G. 1] In
winter, beaches are less crowded, so they are good places
for walking alone. [SS2] Also, on a clear winter
night, nothing is more fun than sitting with a group of
friends around a fire, talking, laughing, and singing.
[E.G.2] All year round, a beach is a place to have fun.
8. Beaches
Beaches are fun in summer and in winter. In
summer, you can swim and do many other water sports. If
you don't like water sports, you can play beach games or
relax on the warm sand. In winter, beaches are less
crowded, so they are good places for walking alone.
Also, on a clear winter night, nothing is more fun than
sitting with a group of friends around a
fire, talking, laughing, and singing. All year round, a beach
is a place to have fun.