1. Part G
Chosen Conventions and how it
develop
Convention Use/Develop/Challenge Description and Examples from film
Purpose with still shot
Conflict and Use- this convention of conflict in a drama This is the scene where Precious
film is kind of predictable, as most drama Precious and her mum
Arguments films have arguments between characters. were fighting after
Precious gets home
Develop- We will develop this convention in with her new baby. This
our opening sequence by using close ups and challenges the
extreme close ups with an addition of convention as it have
gestures and movements of the characters. high violence between
characters.
Love Triangle Use- this convention of love triangle is rarely This scene is when she Closer
scene in a drama film, but in a drama- told her husband that
romance films are possibly have a love she’s seeing another
triangle or a challenge for the couples. guy. This uses the
convention of love
Develop- we will develop this convention by triangle, because it is a
using another girl, so that the girlfriend of confession that she’s
the boy will think he’s cheating. However, seeing another man.
there will be a twist and it was just a
misunderstanding

2. Who are the Characters & who they
Part H
represent Draft 1
Ramina: Nevaeh
The Boyfriend’s close friend
Clothes:
Black clothes to show jealousy, and dark
Neil: John
Ina: Lily
The Boyfriend/ Fiancée of his girlfriend
John’s Fiancée
Clothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing
Clothes: Semi formal clothes while he’s proposing
Jeans and Hoody when going out with
to her
other girlfriend
Jogging bottoms and Top when she
saw them holding hands

3. Who are the Character and who they
represent Draft 2
John’s Semi Formal Outfit
Name: Neil Guevarra - For their Date with Lily
Age: 17
Character Name: John
Character Age:
John’s Non- Formal Outfit
- When he is with Nevaeh
Character Clothes
•Wears semi-formal clothes when he’s
with Lily on their date
•Wears jeans and hoody when he’s
with Nevaeh in the park
Phone when Lily calls him The necklace that he will
Part H be wearing throughout the
film

4. Who are the Character and who they
represent Draft 2
Lily’s Semi Formal Outfit
Name: Ina Bayson - For their Date with John
Age: 17
Character Name: Lily
Character Age:
Lily’s Non- Formal Outfit
- When following John to the
Park with Nevaeh
Character Clothes
•Wears semi-formal clothes when
she’s with John on their date
•Wears jogging bottoms, and top
when she saw John and Nevaeh in
the park
Phone that she The ring that
will be using John will give Jewellery that she
Part H to her will wear ing their
date

5. Who are the Character and who they
represent Draft 2
Name: Ramina Arlauskaite
Age: 18
Character Name: Nevaeh
Character Age:
Character Clothes
•Wears black clothes throughout the
scenes Nevaeh’s Casual Outfit
- When she is standing outside the Café
- When she is with John in the Park
Part H

6. Who are the Character and who they
represent for (draft 2) opening sequence
Name: Neil Guevarra
Age: 17
Character Name: John
Character Age:
Character Clothes
• Grey and Black hoody
• Black Jacket
• Grey/ blue jeans
• shoes
Both pictures represent an
average teenager with normal
clothes
Part H

7. Who are the Character and who they
represent for (draft 2) opening sequence
Name: Ina Bayson
Age: 17
Character Name: Ina
Character Age:
Character Clothes
• Dark blue skinny jeans
• Pink hoody
• Black jacket
• Thick Scarf Both pictures represent an
• Shoes average teenager with normal
• Pink top
• Blue and red polo clothes
• Necklace
• Mack up
Part H

8. Part I
Location/Setting Draft 1
• Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while
Nevaeh is outside looking at them.

9. Part I
Location/Setting Draft 1
• Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and
Nevaeh holding hands

10. Part I
Location/Draft 2
We are going to use the Park (Roundwood Park) for our whole Opening Sequence.
This is the place where
Lily would see Nevaeh This is the place where
and John John will propose to her
We chose this place, because we want to make the audience think that why would
he be with Nevaeh in the same place, where he proposed to Lily.

11. Part J
How are we going to create enigma
• Showing pieces of the
puzzle
– Not showing everything
– Building suspense
• Flashes of clips
– There will be a flash
forward

12. 5 bullet points of what is going to
Part K
happen in the whole film
• John and Lily got engage and move in together
• Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her
• They always argue on simple things
• John’s old friend (Nevaeh) text’s him to meet up, and Lily read it and
become’s suspicious
• John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesn’t know that
Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that
him and Nevaeh are just friends
• Tries to work thing out and they’re not engage anymore

13. Part K
5 bullet points of what is going to
happen in the opening sequence
[Shows the date and time]
• John and Lily meet up in the park, because he is going to say something
important to Lily.
• He proposed to her, and she was speechless, shocked, and happy.
• Shoe accepted his proposal, he put the ring to her finger.
[Next day: Shows the date and time]
• John was on the same park with his close friend Nevaeh, talking and
playing around (like what friends do).
• Lily saw them, shocked and gets jealous, because she doesn’t know who
Nevaeh is.

14. Part K
5 bullet points of what is going to
happen in the whole film for draft 2
• Ina (girl character) is sitting in front of the laptop looking through the internet
(Facebook)
• She went to an album of pictures of her and her boyfriend (fiancée).
• She became very happy seeing their pictures together and having a great time.
However all these changed when she got a message from someone who she
doesn’t know
• After talking to the stranger she became curious about her boyfriend John and
what is he finding from her.
• In the end, she couldn’t take the curiosity anymore and she argued with her
boyfriend and broke up with him when she finds out that he have another woman.

15. 5 bullet points of what is going to happen in the
Part K opening sequence for draft 2
• The girl character (Ina) will be looking through Facebook looking at her and her
boyfriend/husband-to-be’s pictures.
• While looking through the last 3 pictures she will get a flashback of what
happened in each of the pictures, showing what kind of memories they had
together.
• After looking at the pictures she had a message from a girl who she doesn’t know.
• The person started talking to her as if the stranger wants her to know something.
• Ina became curious about what the information from the person will be and the
stranger told her its about her boyfriend.