GRADE ALLOCATIONS 1. Health Status of Minority GroupExcellent 10% The health status of the identified minority group is compared and contrasted in detail with the national average. References are appropriate and clearly connected to content. Good subject knowledge is demonstrated. Offers examples that display personal insight and/or reflection. Subject knowledge appears comprehensive. 2. Barriers to Health and Influencing Factors Excellent 20% A detailed discussion of cultural, socioeconomic, and sociopolitical barriers to health is provided, as well as a detailed discussion of race, ethnicity, socioeconomic status, and education in relation to the health of the minority group. References are appropriate and clearly connected to content. Good subject knowledge is demonstrated. Offers examples that display personal insight and analysis. Subject knowledge appears comprehensive. 3. Diverse Population Excellent 20 % A detailed identification of current health status, definition of health promotion, and health disparities of the diverse population is provided. References are appropriate and clearly connected to content. Good subject knowledge is demonstrated. Offers examples that display personal insight and/or analysis. Subject knowledge appears comprehensive. 4. Health Promotion Approach Excellent 30 % A detailed description of at least one approach is present. All three levels of health promotion prevention (primary, secondary, and tertiary) are described in detail. Approach is grounded in rationale describing in detail why it is the most effective for the needs of the minority group. References are appropriate and clearly connected to content. Good subject knowledge is demonstrated. Offers examples that display personal insight and/or analysis are present. Subject knowledge appears comprehensive. ORGANIZATION AND EFFECTIVENESS 5. Thesis Development and Purpose Excellent 5 % Thesis and/or main claim are comprehensive; contained within the thesis is the essence of the paper. Thesis statement makes the purpose of the paper clear. 6. Paragraph Development and Transitions Excellent 5 % There is a sophisticated construction of paragraphs and transitions. Ideas progress and relate to each other. Paragraph and transition construction guide the reader. Paragraph structure is seamless. 7. Mechanics of Writing (includes spelling, punctuation, grammar, language use) Excellent 5 % No mechanical errors present. Use a variety of sentence structures and effective figures of speech. Writer is clearly in command of standard, written, academic English. 8. Paper Format (use of appropriate style for the major and assignment) Excellent 2.0 % All format elements are correct. 9. Research Citations (In-text citations for paraphrasing and direct quotes, and reference page listing and formatting, as appropriate) Excellent 3.0 % In-text citations and a reference page are complete. The documentation o.