1. [ENGLISH0105] English
[Name]: Mak Mun Choon
[Id]: 0314928
[Module]: Assignment- Essay
[Date]: 31 May 2013

2. Pre-writing
Many countries young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of
pressure to work hard in their studies. For example: assignment, project, folio, doing
part time and others. So what the point and the effects of this condition, if the young
people continue to work hard every day like this?
The number of assignment is too many maybe 4 or 5 weeks for finish it and it is
doing it as a group and small type of project like journal or others. These just
have maybe 2 or 3 week to do.
They lack of time. When they get the assignment, the lecture gave them too little
time to them to finish their assignment. They spend the whole day by doing the
assignment or project from night until morning.
Doing the assignment like model, the student spent a long time to finish it but
when the show to lecturer, the lecture didn’t approve.
The next causes are the parents, who are not aware of importance drawbacks of
studying hard on their children such as depression as well as sickness lesson for
the rest of their lives.
In conclusion, I think that the college or university lecturer shouldn’t give
the student too much assignment at the same time and they should make their
submission day longer. This is the way that can solve the young people have little leisure
time problem.

3. The causes and problem of the young people have little leisure time
Many countries young people have little leisure time and they are under a lot of
pressure to work hard in their studies. For example: assignment, project, folio, doing
part time and others. So what the point and the effects of this condition, if the young
people continue to work hard every day like this?
One of the causes about them less leisure time is the assignment in college. Most
of the young people though after their secondary school they feel like free from jail,
they though in college no need doing homework and project as many as secondary
school and they think college not stress as secondary school. But there is not, in college
is more things are waiting you to do. In college they need to think about doing
assignment given by the lecture. The assignment is not easy to do although it is group
work or individual, the point I want to talk is the number of assignment is too many.
When the lecture given an assignment, they will give them maybe 4 or 5 weeks for finish
it and it is do it as a group. But the lecture also will give a small type of project like
journal or others. These just have maybe 2 or 3 week to do. This wills a cause the
student can’t use their time as well. Because they need to do the assignment by doing
research or something, they will spend a lot of time on it maybe 3 or 4 weeks on it
although with their group. Besides, they still got a small project to do; they will feel very
stress on it, by doing two things at one time. This causes them no time to go out relax or
enjoy their happy hour with their friends. If they continue like this, they emotion will
become bad during day by day. They mood will bad and easy get angry with their friend
just because they no things to realize their stress.
Another reason the young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of
pressure to work hard in their studies is they lack of time. When they get the
assignment, the lecture gave them too little time to them to finish their assignment. So
they spend the whole day by doing the assignment or project from night until morning.
This will causes they feel very stress and nervous. In one week, they sleep not more than
10 hours, according to the specialist a normal people need to sleep at less 8 hours a day,
so you think about how a person can stand without having a enough sleep. If they
continue like this every day, they might easy to get sick and they emotion will not stable.
In the news some people spend the whole night for doing assignment or something, the
person suddenly die on the working table. This because our whole working for a whole
day, we need to having a enough sleep to relax from our stress.

4. In another reason is the assignment like model, the student spend a long time to
finish it but when the show to lecturer, the lecture didn’t approve. That mean their
effort they put in the model was wasted. This will affect their emotion and make them
feel angry and stress, so they having a bad mood whole day. This will cause them easy to
argue with other person and fight with other person just because they over stress can’t
control their emotion. This is the most popular reason that makes the young have little
leisure time.
Moreover, the next causes are the parents, who are not aware of importance
drawbacks of studying hard on their children such as depression as well as sickness
lesson for the rest of their lives. They believe that if they obligate their children to study
hard and limit their children’s time for playing and having fun, it lead them to be a
successful person in feature working life.
In conclusion, I think that the college or university lecturer shouldn’t give the
student too much assignment at the same time and they should make their submission
day longer. This is the way that can solve the young people have little leisure time
problem. So, I think I should stop my pen now, I hope my opinion will give them a small
effort to solve this type of problem in their study.

5. Reference:
http://testbig.com/ielts-essays/some-countries-young-people-have-little-leisure-time-
and-are-under-lot-pressure-work
http://ielts.studyhorror.com/writings/IELTS-Writing-Task-2-Study-Pressure-For-Young-
People/12