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David Racster

Professor DiSarrio

English 103

3 November 2010


                An anabolic steroid is something that athletes use to get an unfair advantage in the

sport they play. It can cause the player to gain more muscle mass in a shorter period of time than

without taking them. Today people question how many athletes are actually using these kinds of

steroids to improve their game or physical status. To this day, almost anyone who enjoys

watching sports knows that steroids are a part of many sports known to man. Some people are

fine with it and just enjoy watching the sports that are to the max. They seem to accept this

shocking circumstance because the players are more athletic on steroids than without them. On

the other hand, some people disagree and think that not only is it bad for the sport, but it is also

terrible for the professionals and the kids watching them play.


       For people who that understand athletes and their use of steroids, well there can be

multiple reasons why. First off, what is one thing people love watching in sports, specifically

baseball? It’s obviously the hard hits and homerun balls being hit out of the ballpark. Lately in

the national football league (NFL) players have been caught using steroids, too. One well-known

player that was caught was Brian Cushings, last years AFC Rookie of the Year. Come summer

time he was caught with anabolic steroids in his system. In return, they had to revote on whether

he should still be considered the rookie of the year knowing that he had taken steroids, and of

course he retained the title. This further proves the fact that people just want to see the most

athletic players making the hardest hits possible and don’t care if they are on steroids or not.
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Another example would be the baseball player we all know, Barry Bonds. In the 2001, in one

season Barry Bonds blew up and hit a major league baseball record with 73 homeruns. He broke

Mark McGuire’s homerun record by three homeruns; McGuire was also accused of taking

steroids. In San Francisco, fans love it when a player hits the ball out of the ballpark and they

even call it the McCovey Cove. Barry Bonds is the all-time leader with the amount of balls being

hit out of that ballpark with 35. There have only been 55 hit out total, so he has more than half of

them. The fans love it when it happens and don’t care if Bonds is on steroids or not. They just

want to see homeruns, and players on steroids can do that better than anyone else.


       Not only are Professional athletes getting caught using steroids, but now it is trickling

down to high school athletes as well. The latest state to handle this issue has been Texas; they

have taken it out of the hands of educators and are making a test necessary for all athletes to take

before they can play in a sport. This is a great reason why parents are becoming angry about the

influence professional athletes are having on their children. It is obviously not good when high

school athletes are getting caught using steroids more and more. The percent of high school

athletes has gone from 6 percent to 11 percent within the past three years. That is not a good

statistic for young people to be taking steroids. I feel professional players caught using these

steroids need to have more harsh punishment then what they are now.


      Now for other and most people, steroids just hurt the sport, and are a bad influence on kids

that want to play sports. If athletes want to increase their body mass and become stronger they

should have to work on that with out the influence of steroids or even the thoughts of taking

them. Not only can one be suspended or even kicked out of a sport for using, but also can

extremely risk the state of their health. Psychological effects appear to be the only consequence

of an overdose of AAS, but long-term usage can lead to infertility, testicular atrophy (in males)
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and disturbances of the menstrual cycle (in females). The severity depends on which steroid or

combination of steroids that are being abused. The brain (psyche), the skin (acne), and the liver

(hepatis) are three main parts of the body that get abused by shooting steroids. In 1994,

recreational bodybuilders attending a Welsh needle-exchange clinic completed a survey on

feelings of hostility/aggression. Subjects reported significantly higher feelings of aggression

towards objects, verbal aggression and aggression during training. During the 6 to 14 week AAS

period, other changes included significantly higher feelings of alienation, irritability, anxiety,

suspiciousness, and negativism. This shows that there are tremendous negative effects of using

anabolic steroid, not just the glory that we fans get to see. ( Graham, Michael R)




        Present players need to think of how they are affecting younger athletes. The

suspensions aren’t doing what they need to be doing, someone has to take charge and think of

another way to deal with it. People can be for it and against it but all in all the professional

athletes taking these steroids are pretty much saying that it is alright if you take steroids; and that

is not alright for young athletes to think at all. They need to get to that high level of play on their

own not by taking steroids.
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                                   Work Cited


Graham, Michael R., et al. "Anabolic Steroid Use." Sports Medicine 38.6 (2008): 505-525.

Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. Web. 3 Nov. 2010.




Whether a professional athlete is taking steroids or breaking a minor infraction in their

contract, they should have to suffer the consequences no matter the penalty. Not only are

athletes getting away with such outrageous behavior, but they are making it more popular

around the teenage world. This needs to stop.

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  • 1. Racster 1 David Racster Professor DiSarrio English 103 3 November 2010 An anabolic steroid is something that athletes use to get an unfair advantage in the sport they play. It can cause the player to gain more muscle mass in a shorter period of time than without taking them. Today people question how many athletes are actually using these kinds of steroids to improve their game or physical status. To this day, almost anyone who enjoys watching sports knows that steroids are a part of many sports known to man. Some people are fine with it and just enjoy watching the sports that are to the max. They seem to accept this shocking circumstance because the players are more athletic on steroids than without them. On the other hand, some people disagree and think that not only is it bad for the sport, but it is also terrible for the professionals and the kids watching them play. For people who that understand athletes and their use of steroids, well there can be multiple reasons why. First off, what is one thing people love watching in sports, specifically baseball? It’s obviously the hard hits and homerun balls being hit out of the ballpark. Lately in the national football league (NFL) players have been caught using steroids, too. One well-known player that was caught was Brian Cushings, last years AFC Rookie of the Year. Come summer time he was caught with anabolic steroids in his system. In return, they had to revote on whether he should still be considered the rookie of the year knowing that he had taken steroids, and of course he retained the title. This further proves the fact that people just want to see the most athletic players making the hardest hits possible and don’t care if they are on steroids or not.
  • 2. Racster 2 Another example would be the baseball player we all know, Barry Bonds. In the 2001, in one season Barry Bonds blew up and hit a major league baseball record with 73 homeruns. He broke Mark McGuire’s homerun record by three homeruns; McGuire was also accused of taking steroids. In San Francisco, fans love it when a player hits the ball out of the ballpark and they even call it the McCovey Cove. Barry Bonds is the all-time leader with the amount of balls being hit out of that ballpark with 35. There have only been 55 hit out total, so he has more than half of them. The fans love it when it happens and don’t care if Bonds is on steroids or not. They just want to see homeruns, and players on steroids can do that better than anyone else. Not only are Professional athletes getting caught using steroids, but now it is trickling down to high school athletes as well. The latest state to handle this issue has been Texas; they have taken it out of the hands of educators and are making a test necessary for all athletes to take before they can play in a sport. This is a great reason why parents are becoming angry about the influence professional athletes are having on their children. It is obviously not good when high school athletes are getting caught using steroids more and more. The percent of high school athletes has gone from 6 percent to 11 percent within the past three years. That is not a good statistic for young people to be taking steroids. I feel professional players caught using these steroids need to have more harsh punishment then what they are now. Now for other and most people, steroids just hurt the sport, and are a bad influence on kids that want to play sports. If athletes want to increase their body mass and become stronger they should have to work on that with out the influence of steroids or even the thoughts of taking them. Not only can one be suspended or even kicked out of a sport for using, but also can extremely risk the state of their health. Psychological effects appear to be the only consequence of an overdose of AAS, but long-term usage can lead to infertility, testicular atrophy (in males)
  • 3. Racster 3 and disturbances of the menstrual cycle (in females). The severity depends on which steroid or combination of steroids that are being abused. The brain (psyche), the skin (acne), and the liver (hepatis) are three main parts of the body that get abused by shooting steroids. In 1994, recreational bodybuilders attending a Welsh needle-exchange clinic completed a survey on feelings of hostility/aggression. Subjects reported significantly higher feelings of aggression towards objects, verbal aggression and aggression during training. During the 6 to 14 week AAS period, other changes included significantly higher feelings of alienation, irritability, anxiety, suspiciousness, and negativism. This shows that there are tremendous negative effects of using anabolic steroid, not just the glory that we fans get to see. ( Graham, Michael R) Present players need to think of how they are affecting younger athletes. The suspensions aren’t doing what they need to be doing, someone has to take charge and think of another way to deal with it. People can be for it and against it but all in all the professional athletes taking these steroids are pretty much saying that it is alright if you take steroids; and that is not alright for young athletes to think at all. They need to get to that high level of play on their own not by taking steroids.
  • 4. Racster 4 Work Cited Graham, Michael R., et al. "Anabolic Steroid Use." Sports Medicine 38.6 (2008): 505-525. Academic Search Premier. EBSCO. Web. 3 Nov. 2010. Whether a professional athlete is taking steroids or breaking a minor infraction in their contract, they should have to suffer the consequences no matter the penalty. Not only are athletes getting away with such outrageous behavior, but they are making it more popular around the teenage world. This needs to stop.