3. Grounding Activity
•Think-Pair-ShareWhat:
•Allows for individual reflection and small
group discussion; gets all voices in the
room; sets the stage for the day
Why:
•Write a response to the following question:
What are your strengths as a writing
teacher?
•Share with a partner
How:
4. “Writing is the foundation of reading; it
may be the most basic way to learn about
reading…when writers read, they use
insights they have acquired when they
compose… when our students write, they
learn how reading is put together because
they can do it. They learn the essence of
print.”
When Writers Read, Jane Hansen, 1987
5. • Expect students to compose arguments (6+) and opinions
(K-5), informative/explanatory pieces, and narrative texts.
• Focus on the use of reason and evidence to substantiate an
argument or claim.
• Emphasize ability to conduct research – short projects and
sustained inquiry.
• Require students to incorporate technology as they create,
refine, and collaborate on writing.
• Include student writing samples that illustrate the criteria
required to meet the standards (See Appendix C for writing
samples).
Common Core State Standards:
Writing
6. Common Core State Standards:
Writing
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jt_2jI010WU&feature=related
7. Appendix C
Appendix C:
• Annotated writing samples that
illustrate the criteria required to
meet Common Core State
Standards for particular types of
writing—argument,
informative/explanatory text and
narrative—in a given grade.
• Each of the samples exhibits at
least the level of quality required
to meet the Writing standards for
that grade.
http://www.corestandards.org/assets/Appendix_C.pdf
8. Imagine…
Students who want to write
Students who do write
Teachers who want to teach writing
Teachers who teach writing vs.
assign writing
9. Kelly Gallagher, Author and Teacher
http://www.kellygallagher.org/index.html
“Assigning writing
is easy. Teaching
writing is really
hard.”
“We need to teach our
students to read like
writers and write like
readers.”
10. Current Research
70% of all
students in
grades 4-12
are low
achieving
writers.
9th grade
students in
the lowest
25% of their
class are
twenty times
more likely to
drop out.
50% of high
school
graduates are
not ready for
college level
composition
courses.
11. The most effective strategy to improve writing…
Increase the amount
and quality of writing.
19. Successful Implementation of
Writer’s Workshop
How Often
• Everyday
• Everyday
• Everyday
How Long
• KDG – 45
minutes
• 1st Grade –
45 minutes
extending
to 60
minutes
• 2nd – 12th
Grades – 60
minutes
When
• Beginning
the first day
of school
• A single
block of
time at the
same time
everyday
Management
• Same
format used
everyday
• Same rules
and
procedures
used
everyday
• Keep it
simple
Why
• Consistency
• Consistency
• Consistency
20. Writing Mini-Lesson
10-15 Minutes
Connection
•Students learn
the
importance of
today’s
instruction
•Students hear
the teaching
point
Teach
•Students are
shown how
writers go
about doing
the teaching
point
Engage
•Students
practice what
writers do
•Teacher
model
•Class model
•Students
work
Link
•Students hear
the teacher
reinforce
today’s lesson
•Students are
reminded that
today’s lesson
can be used
everyday
when they
write
21. Independent Practice with
Conferring
30-40 Minutes
Students work independently while the teacher
meets with small groups or individual students
•Conferring Talking Cards
Possible mid-workshop teaching point
•Occur naturally when the teacher notices something that
needs clarification or further explanation to help students as
they write
22. Conferring
Research
•Ask “What are
you working on
as a writer?”
•Have the
student read
aloud his/her
work
Decide
• Synthesize what
is learned
• Decide what to
compliment:
“What has this
child done that I
can name and
make a fuss
over?”
• Decide what to
teach: “What
does this child use
but misuse? or
“What is nearly
there in his or her
writing that I can
help them with
right now?”
Compliment
•Point out
writing
strategies the
child used well
•Say “I like how
you…”(give
specific
example)
Teach
•Teach only one
thing
•Teach to the
compliment
•Teach to
today’s
teaching point
•Negotiate a
strategy
When choosing your teaching point think: Of all the options I have, what can I teach
that will make the biggest difference for this writer?
23. Conferring Look Fors
What to look for when deciding what to confer about…
• Structure
– Focused
– Beginning, middle, end
– Moves across time or space
• Meaningful
– Writer cares about it
– Reader learns from it
• Narrative strategies
• Conventions that enhance
– All caps – WOW
– Bold – Wow
– End marks – Wow!!!
– Italics – Wow!
– Stacked Words - One!
Two!
Three!
24. Sharing
5-10 Minutes
• Notice
• Question
• Personal Connection
• Compliment and Suggestion (glow & grow)
Partner
Small
Group
Whole
Group
26. Language Minilesson Key Points
Aligned to CCSS
Weekly concepts
taught
approximately five
minutes a day
Follows Jeff
Anderson’s format
PowerPoint to
match each weekly
lesson
31. Table of Contents
Target!
• Grade Level
Goals
Units of Study
• Getting Ready
for Statewide
Assessments
• Notebooking
• Author,
Genre, and
Skill units
Score!
• Formative
assessments
• Determine
students’
ability to write
on demand
Rubrics
• Narrative
• Informational
• Peer
Response to
the student
writing
sample
http://www.sccresa.org/toolsforschools/curriculumtools/writewell/introductiontowritew
ell/writewell2ndgrade/
35. How Units of Study Tend to Go
Immerse in the
genre
Identify
distinguishing
features of the
genre
Choose an idea to
write about
Choose a mentor
text to help you
write
Plan your draft Draft long and fast
Revise Edit Publish/Celebrate
36. Structure of a Unit
Example
Unit
K-12 units
formatted
the same
Unit
Review
What do you
notice?
41. "A writer's notebook works just like an
incubator; a protective place to keep
your infant idea safe and warm, a place
for it to grow while it is too young, too
new, to survive on its own."
Ralph Fletcher
43. What Should I Write?
• Three…
– Times you laughed really hard
– Times you were in physical pain
– Memorable Moments
– Topics that interest you
• Circle the one that you could tell the best story
about
• Tell your story to a partner
• Write your story in the writing section of your
notebook
• Share
45. What Should I Write?
• Play the contrast game. Write five minutes on one
side and then five minutes on the other side:
I want… I don’t want…
I remember… I don’t remember…
I do… I don’t…
Last summer… This summer…
Last Saturday… Next Saturday…
A scary place… A safe place…
46. What Should I Write?
Draw a heart on a notebook
page.
Fill the heart with the things you
know about and care about.
Draw lines to separate your
ideas.
47. What Should I Write?
6 + 1 Writing Traits
• One Day in the Life of Bubble Gum
• The Secret Knowledge of Grown-ups
• Nothing Ever Happens on 90th Street
48. Craft
• Ba-Da-Bing – Gretchen Bernabei
Ba Da Bing
Example: As I stepped onto the red carpet of the
darkened room, I noticed a wall lined with lit candles
and an old woman hunched in the far corner at a
round table and I thought maybe now I’ll get some
answers.
49. Craft
• Let’s create a Ba-Da-Bing together.
• Copy the example(s) into the craft section of
your writer’s notebook.
• Return to your writing and add a Ba-Da-Bing
to your piece.
• Share
51. Writing/Literary Terms
• Students may have an understanding of
personification.
– Create a definition collectively
– Write in notebook
• Mentor text example “Fishing in the Air”
www.tinyurl.com/examplepersonification
53. Writing/Literary Terms
• Let’s try one together…
And the _____ which had been _____ became,
in an instant, _____.
• Go to the writing section of your notebook
and revise part of your writing to include
personification.
• Share
54. Spelling Demons
• Write at least three words, spelled correctly,
that are your biggest challenge words.
What are your spelling demons?
available anonymous knowledgeable
55. Writing
The heart of the writer’s
notebook.
Where the writer plays with
writing on a daily basis.
56. Editing
•Commas in a list (author’s craft – show not tell):
•What do you notice?
•Let’s create one together…
•Return to your piece and add commas in a list
•Share
Inside, it smells like grade school –
boredom, paste, Lysoled vomit.
57. Reading
Connections
•Reflect on who you
are as a reader
•Reflect on how you
view and think about
what you are reading
Craft Examples
•Reading with a
writer’s eye:
•Leads
•Endings
•Word choice
•Narrative
strategies
•Conventions that
enhance
58. Planning for Implementation
Review the Table
of Contents
Consider your
daily and yearly
schedule
Ensure that there
are no long gaps
within a unit
Determine the
instructional order
of the units
59. “No writing is ever
finished, it is just due.”
Kelly Gallagher, Author and High School Teacher, April 12, 2011, Macomb ISD Presentation
Notes de l'éditeur
Foundation of the WriteWell curriculum – interaction between students – on own, partner share, whole group share – co-constructivist learning process
Assign and assess writing does not teach students the knowledge and skills needed to become better writersWriteWell is designed around the format of Writer’s Workshop where teachers teach students minilessons as well as teach them to read like writers and write like readers.
Research presented April 12, 2011 – Kelly Gallagher workshop session on writing @ Macomb ISD
Model/coach students to elevate their writingRead lots of mentor texts in the genre – have them look at the text with the thought “What did the writer do that I could do?”Turn & talk about the “how” Show them by writing in front of students – write in front of the class and think aloud during the process, modeling about 5-7 minutes at a timeWriteWell is about quality vs. quantity
Discuss alignment process this summer to match CCSSIt is an online product that is revised and improved as needed throughout the year and more extensively each summer, relying on classroom teachers to make the revisions
Structure similar to 90-minute reading block – whole group, small group, independent work
Teach – TOEngage – With Link – By (at the same time kids are writing by themselves, the teacher is conferring)Also known as “I go…, we go…, you go…”
Share “Conferring Talking Points” handout
Provide Introduction to Language Minilessons handout with this slide
Show an example of a finished PowerPoint after this slide
Provide handout of pre/post assessments for each grade level with this slide.
Have them look at the copy of the Table of Contents for their grade level
Participants spend some time online exploring the units for their grade level
Note – WriteWell does not dictate topic, but does dictate genre – students are more willing to write when they have choice – they can write what they know about, care about, and can tell stories aboutUnits of study related to the genre of test prep – is its own genre with rules
Point out – “About this Unit” information – overview of the unitPoint out – Summary (shows all sessions and a brief description)Carefully look at the first 5-6 lessons, then skim & scan the remaining sessionsUse Presenting Information Using New Technologies Unit
Have participants create their own notebook + do a few minilessons to see how it is used throughout the WriteWell curriculumNote that the curriculum does not always specifically say to “use the notebook”, but the intent is that the students to their learning and drafting in the notebook; finished products can be done in or out of the notebook, both in written form and using the computer – it is important that students do more drafting and writing on the computer to prepare for upcoming online CCSS assessments starting in the 2014-15 school year.
“seed ideas” 20 best moments20 worst momentsKelly Gallaghar’s suggestion for persuasive writing ideas: matrix chart – school issues, local issues, state issues, national issues, global issues (take one class period and give students stacks of newspapers and magazines --- have them generate a list of ideas on the matrix
“seed ideas” 20 best moments20 worst momentsKelly Gallaghar’s suggestion for persuasive writing ideas: matrix chart – school issues, local issues, state issues, national issues, global issues (take one class period and give students stacks of newspapers and magazines --- have them generate a list of ideas on the matrix
Example of a “to” or “I go”Draw the Ba-Da-Bing graphics in the CRAFT section of the writer’s notebookShare my exampleAsk: What do you notice?
Example of “with” or “we go”
Caution them with the definition kids might give – giving human characteristics to inanimate objects (plants and animals can also be personified and they are living)Better definition – giving human characteristics to non-human objects or thingsWrite the class definition in notebook with teacher, class and own examples
Caution them with the definition kids might give – giving human characteristics to inanimate objects (plants and animals can also be personified and they are living)Better definition – giving human characteristics to non-human objects or thingsWrite the class definition in notebook with teacher, class and own examples
Caution them with the definition kids might give – giving human characteristics to inanimate objects (plants and animals can also be personified and they are living)Better definition – giving human characteristics to non-human objects or things
Discuss how to use this section if there isn’t time for them to write their own demons…
Where students do all of their writing
What do you notice?Make a chart about what they notice.Make a chart: We use commas to… separate 3 or more ideas or details in a list the use of a common before “and” is optionalGive them the “Elements of Craft/Editing” handout – glue into Editing section