An unique perspective of how the ideal world would be in my perspective.

2. ...In my ideal world,
there aren’t monsters.

3. ...In my ideal world,
there is a God which
is my priority...

4. ...In my ideal world,
there is, yes, the
imaginary world...

5. ...In my ideal world,
there isn’t beauty
greater than love...

6. ...In my ideal world,
there are crazy
people capable of
loving...

7. ...In my ideal world,
there isn’t fear...

8. ...In my ideal world,
there is love among
each other...

9. ...In my ideal world,
there are people who
wish a good day and
greet each other
even when it’s
sunny...

10. ...In my ideal world,
there is happiness!

11. THE END
Author: Natália Durães
Editorial Supervisor: Teacher: Gerson A. Moura
Illustrator: novoseltseve
Publisher: www.storybird.com
Date: II Semester - Summer 2014
A project from ‘Cilc’s Writing Club’: “Café Literário”
CILC: Centro Interescolar de Línguas de Ceilândia

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