The cheating rat and the crocodile final book

Notes de l'éditeur

1. Rat needs stroke. Looks fuzzy or blurred. Think about wording.
2. End first sentence at fastest. Start second sentence with This year…
3. Start at Rat pulled himself out…
4. Get borders lined up. Inside stroke instead outside. Croc is blurry top left. Text is different.
5. Opposite of snap. Character variety. Text inconsistent. Crocodile won the race… Dragonfly came second… Don’t need comma after them in second paragraph. Backs of the animals head?
6. Croc needs stroke. Crocodile knew that Rat was a cheater, so he hatched a plan. Change what he is thinking about.
7. Rat SAID to Crocodile, “Can I ride on your back?”
8. Text is inconsistent. Variety in characters.
9. Crop/zoom in here
10. Crocodile won the race… Dragonfly came second… Don’t need comma after them in second paragraph. Backs of the animals head?