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Constructing a Paragraph The Writing Process
Writing is a PROCESS… NOBODY WRITES SOMETHING PERFECT ON THE FIRST TRY!!!!
There are several steps Brainstorming Drafting Editing Rewriting
Has everyone eaten a hamburger before?   Hamburgers are simple thing.: BREAD + MEAT + BREAD = HAMBURGER
Paragraphs are the same way: All paragraphs have a main idea, supporting details, and a closing sentence. MAIN IDEA SENTENCE + SUPPORTING DETAILS + CLOSING SENTENCE = PARAGRAPH.  You can change the number of supporting details to make your paragraph more interesting and drool-worthy, just like a hamburger.
Like this: Topic sentence: Ancient Polynesians developed a complex system of navigation that allowed them to travel the vast ocean.  Supporting Detail #1: Instead of using compasses and other navigation tools, Polynesians relied on the stars. Supporting Detail #2 By understanding positions of stars in the sky and the ocean tides, Polynesians were able to locate lands far across the sea. Supporting Detail #3 When explorers in Europe were just beginning to set out, Polynesians had been making regular voyages across the Pacific Ocean for hundreds of years. Supporting Detail #4 In modern Hawai`i, this tradition is commonly known as “Wayfinding.” Closing Sentence: These voyages represent an important cultural tradition for Polynesians that continues today.
Paragraphs are like hamburgers because… The important details are always between two ends!!!
Hamburger Paragraphs

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Hamburger Paragraphs

  • 1. Constructing a Paragraph The Writing Process
  • 2. Writing is a PROCESS… NOBODY WRITES SOMETHING PERFECT ON THE FIRST TRY!!!!
  • 3. There are several steps Brainstorming Drafting Editing Rewriting
  • 4. Has everyone eaten a hamburger before?   Hamburgers are simple thing.: BREAD + MEAT + BREAD = HAMBURGER
  • 5. Paragraphs are the same way: All paragraphs have a main idea, supporting details, and a closing sentence. MAIN IDEA SENTENCE + SUPPORTING DETAILS + CLOSING SENTENCE = PARAGRAPH. You can change the number of supporting details to make your paragraph more interesting and drool-worthy, just like a hamburger.
  • 6. Like this: Topic sentence: Ancient Polynesians developed a complex system of navigation that allowed them to travel the vast ocean. Supporting Detail #1: Instead of using compasses and other navigation tools, Polynesians relied on the stars. Supporting Detail #2 By understanding positions of stars in the sky and the ocean tides, Polynesians were able to locate lands far across the sea. Supporting Detail #3 When explorers in Europe were just beginning to set out, Polynesians had been making regular voyages across the Pacific Ocean for hundreds of years. Supporting Detail #4 In modern Hawai`i, this tradition is commonly known as “Wayfinding.” Closing Sentence: These voyages represent an important cultural tradition for Polynesians that continues today.
  • 7. Paragraphs are like hamburgers because… The important details are always between two ends!!!