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Responding to Student Writing
What we say & what we mean ,[object Object]
What we say  What they hear ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
What we say  What they hear ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Holding your applause (and reprimands) until the end ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Bear in Mind ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Back to commenting ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Types of comments (see handout)
Some last bits ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Your take  ,[object Object],[object Object]
Critique of Three Commentators (~15 min each) ,[object Object],[object Object],[object Object],[object Object]
Your take, take 2.  (~15 min) ,[object Object]
Regroup

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Responding to Student Writing