30. How many of you have attended presentations
where the leader of the discussion reads, word
for word, exactly what is written on the slide?
How many of you found this to be stimulating?
How many of you found this to stretch your
thinking and hold your attention span? How
many of you would rather eat dry, three-day old
toast?
teleprompting.
Adapted from: “You are a Natural Born (Visual) Storyteller” by Nancy Duarte
31. How many of you have attended presentations
where the leader of the discussion reads, word
for word, exactly what is written on the slide?
How many of you found this to be stimulating?
How many of you found this to stretch your
thinking and hold your attention span? How
many of you would rather eat dry, three-day old
toast?
teleprompting.
Adapted from: “You are a Natural Born (Visual) Storyteller” by Nancy Duarte
38. matthew’smethods*.
*Rarely, if ever, is a method presented actually Matthew’s,
but he did go through the trouble of compiling them for
you, so please don’t hold that against him. He’s a nice guy.
42. Bullet Points
• This is a Bullet Point
• It’s boring
– And linear and hierarchical which some people might
need (or think they need).
• Very often bullet points are way too long and are
written in passive voice and complete sentences.
• Reading (300 WPM) is usually faster than talking
(120 WPM to 200 WPM)
– That’s why you’re already here
– I’m probably not
From: “PR agencies are obsessed with bullet points” by Tim Dyson
43. Bullet Points
• This is a Bullet Point
• It’s boring
– And linear and hierarchical which some people might
need (or think they need).
• Very often bullet points are way too long and are
written in passive voice and complete sentences.
• Reading (300 WPM) is usually faster than talking
(120 WPM to 200 WPM)
– That’s why you’re already here
– I’m probably not
From: “PR agencies are obsessed with bullet points” by Tim Dyson
44. how effective is this presentation?
Image via Flickr user niallkennedy
Adapted from: “You are a Natural Born (Visual) Storyteller” by Nancy Duarte
51. Yawning, and smearing my eyes with my fingers, I walked bleary eyed into the
kitchen and grabbed the kettle, unhooking it from the cord. I turned the tap and
drew fresh water, checking with my hands to make sure it was cold enough (the
best tea comes from the coldest water!). I filled the kettle as I glanced outside
for a minute across the city mist. I could almost taste the grey. The kettle was
half full, so I switched the tap off and returned it to its socket. I flicked the power
switch on and sifted through the cupboards, looking for biscuits. Anything above
loose crumbs would do. Thankfully I found some fusty digestives. For some
reason, biscuits are nicer always nicer when they're they've gone a bit dry and
stale. I reached over and opened the fridge, retrieving the milk. I poured a little
into a mug at the same time as grabbing the mug from the cupboard and
placing it on the surface. This is a technique I made that doesn't really save any
time, but makes me feel clever. The kettle began grumbling fiercely so I took it
from the cord, threw a teabag into my cup and poured boiling water onto it. I
watched brown swirls rise up and through the muted white of milky water. A few
minutes passed. I removed and squeezed the teabag, then flicked it into the
bin. I picked up my mug and left the kitchen with a nice, hot cup of strong tea.
Adapted from: “Telescopic Text” by Joe Davis
52. Yawning, and smearing my eyes with my fingers, I walked bleary eyed into the
kitchen and grabbed the kettle, unhooking it from the cord. I turned the tap and
drew fresh water, checking with my hands to make sure it was cold enough (the
best tea comes from the coldest water!). I filled the kettle as I glanced outside
for a minute across the city mist. I could almost taste the grey. The kettle was
half full, so I switched the tap off and returned it to its socket. I flicked the power
switch on and sifted through the cupboards, looking for biscuits. Anything above
loose crumbs would do. Thankfully I found some fusty digestives. For some
reason, biscuits are nicer always nicer when they're they've gone a bit dry and
stale. I reached over and opened the fridge, retrieving the milk. I poured a little
into a mug at the same time as grabbing the mug from the cupboard and
placing it on the surface. This is a technique I made that doesn't really save any
time, but makes me feel clever. The kettle began grumbling fiercely so I took it
from the cord, threw a teabag into my cup and poured boiling water onto it. I
watched brown swirls rise up and through the muted white of milky water. A few
minutes passed. I removed and squeezed the teabag, then flicked it into the
bin. I picked up my mug and left the kitchen with a nice, hot cup of strong tea.
Adapted from: “Telescopic Text” by Joe Davis
60. Classified in the division Magnoliophyta, class Magnoliopsida, order
Sapindales, family Rutaceaenative. Native to China and Indochina. Its
physical characteristics (especially the rich citric acid and vitamin
content) and history of cultivation are similar to those of the other types
of citrus fruits. Among the commercially important species are C.
sinensis, which furnishes most of the varieties for commercial growing,
including the Baiá; the C. aurantium, which is grown in the United States
chiefly as understock on which to bud sweet varieties; the C. reticulata or
nobilis, or the "kid glove," group. They hybridize freely. Flowers and fruits
in all stages of development are on the tree throughout the year, although
a large portion of the fruits ripen at one time. It is is attacked by many
insects and fungus diseases and is quite sensitive to frost. If the fruits are
picked when still "green" (though fully mature), they must undergo a
bleaching or degreening process to bring out the color in their rinds.
Some are artificially colored and waxed before marketing. Some varieties
yield essential oils used in perfume. The flower is a favorite for bridal
decoration. The yellow wood, which is hard and close-grained, is
manufactured into small articles.
73. “If you feel tempted to use a
picture of two hands shaking in
front of a globe, put the pencil
down, step away from the desk,
and think about taking a
vacation or investigating
aromatherapy.”
-Nancy Duarte, in Presentation Zen by Garr Reynolds
104. Reasons Garfield Hates Mondays
• They start with “M”.
• They aren’t Fridays.
• They sneak up on you.
• They have a bad reputation.
• They crush the human spirit.
• They crush the feline spirit.
• They don’t crush the canines.
105. Reasons Garfield Hates Mondays
• They start with “M”.
• They aren’t Fridays.
• They sneak up on you.
• They have a bad reputation.
• They crush the human spirit.
• They crush the feline spirit.
• They don’t crush the canines.
110. Good: The library has storytime
Adapted from: “Writing for the Web” by Laura Solomon
111. Good: The library has storytime
Better: Why your child needs
storytime
Adapted from: “Writing for the Web” by Laura Solomon
112. Good: The library has storytime
Better: Why your child needs
storytime
Best: How to increase your child’s
literacy
Adapted from: “Writing for the Web” by Laura Solomon
113. This Slide Is About Our Library
• The library has books
• The library has internet
• The library has classes
• The library has databases
• The library has storytime
• The library serves people
• The library serves a LOT of people
Adapted from: “Writing for the Web” by Laura Solomon
114. This Slide Is About Our Library
• The library has books
• The library has internet
• The library has classes
• The library has databases
• The library has storytime
• The library serves people
• The library serves a LOT of people
Adapted from: “Writing for the Web” by Laura Solomon