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Copywriting
    and evolving media



Postgrad Marketing & Digital Comms
Nick McGivney Wk 5 // Thurs 28 Jan
• Last week in the world: what grabbed you

• First in-class assignment: Facebook ads

• Writing headlines
Relevance: Female Facebook user, mid-20s.
Value Proposition: Win up to $1,000.
CTA: ENTER HERE!
Relevance: SME marketer, early 30s.
Value Proposition: grow your business through pinning.
CTA: Take Advantage HERE! (note t he Fb ad rules breaking)
Your turn:

•   Paddy Power Shergar Burgers
•   Free with any bet this week
•   Headline 25 chars incl spaces
•   Body copy 90 characters
•   You decide tone of voice
•   Three versions, each distinct
    for split testing

•   Screengrabbed and sent to
    nmcgivney@gmail.com by end
    of class
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
•   Personalisation
•   Hyperbole
•   Paradox
•   Puns
•   Parallelism
•   Anaesis
•   Simile
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
•   Hyperbole             ‘People will grasp the
                          wretchedness of a toupee
•   Paradox
                          much more quickly if you
•   Puns                  call it a rug than they will if
•   Parallelism           you just describe it as
•   Anaesis               unattractive.’
•   Simile                              Suzanne Pope
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘Personification is a kind of
•   Personification
                          metaphor. But with
•   Hyperbole             personification, you’re no
•   Paradox               longer comparing your subject
•   Puns                  with an inanimate object;
•   Parallelism           instead, you’re describing it as
                          you would a human being.
•   Anaesis
                          Personification allows you to
•   Simile                present mere objects as being
•   Rhetorical question   capable of love, hate, fear,
•   Quotation             hope and every other emotion
                          available to humans.’
                                             Suzanne Pope
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘Hyperbole makes it
•   Personification
                          possible to provoke shock
•   Hyperbole             or laughter without the
•   Paradox               need for words. Though
•   Puns                  hyperbole is typically
•   Parallelism           viewed these days as a
                          visual device, it can also
•   Anaesis
                          succeed wonderfully in
•   Simile                words alone. ’
•   Rhetorical question               Suzanne Pope
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘The power of paradox
•   Personification
                          comes from the fact that
•   Hyperbole             the contradiction often
•   Paradox               turns out to contain a
•   Puns                  thought-provoking grain of
•   Parallelism           truth.’
•   Anaesis                            Suzanne Pope
•   Simile
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘If puns don’t make sense
•   Personification
                          for the brief on every
•   Hyperbole             level, then ditch them.’
•   Paradox                            Suzanne Pope
•   Puns
•   Parallelism
•   Anaesis
•   Simile
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          Parallelism is the
•   Personification
                          deliberate repetition of a
•   Hyperbole             particular word, phrasing
•   Paradox               or sentence structure for
•   Puns                  effect.
•   Parallelism
•   Anaesis
•   Simile
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘Typically with anaesis,
•   Personification
                          one starts with a fairly
•   Hyperbole             lofty, dignified or
•   Paradox               respectful statement and
•   Puns                  lets it all go downhill from
•   Parallelism           there. structure for effect.
                          It is the use of a
•   Anaesis
                          concluding sentence or
•   Simile                phrase that undercuts or
•   Rhetorical question   diminishes what was said
•   Quotation             previously.’
                                         Suzanne Pope
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘When the equation of a
•   Personification
                          metaphor (“life is a poker
•   Hyperbole             game”) is altered by
•   Paradox               adding the word “like” or
•   Puns                  “as” (“life is like a poker
•   Parallelism           game”) the resulting
                          comparison is known as a
•   Anaesis
                          simile.’
•   Simile
                                         Suzanne Pope
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘When the equation of a A
•   Personification
                          question to which no answer
•   Hyperbole             is needed or expected, asked
•   Paradox               to bring your listener or
•   Puns                  reader to your chosen
•   Parallelism           conclusion. Rhetorical
                          questions are powerful tools,
•   Anaesis
                          tools that don’t exist in all-
•   Simile                visual advertising. They can
•   Rhetorical question   be used to serve rational
•   Quotation             arguments.’
                                           Suzanne Pope
HEADLINES!
•   Metaphor
                          ‘When people talk, they
•   Personification
                          reveal a lot about
•   Hyperbole             themselves, whether they
•   Paradox               mean to or not. The most
•   Puns                  brilliant visual ads in the
•   Parallelism           world – and there have been
                          a lot of them – have never
•   Anaesis
                          captured the nuances of
•   Simile                human speech in the way
•   Rhetorical question   that a headline-driven ad
•   Quotation             can.’
                                            Suzanne Pope
Your turn…
HEADLINES
•   Metaphor
•   Personalisation
•   Hyperbole
•   Paradox
•   Puns
•   Parallelism
•   Anaesis
•   Simile
•   Rhetorical question
•   Quotation

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Nick week 5 postgrad facebook print

  • 1. Copywriting and evolving media Postgrad Marketing & Digital Comms Nick McGivney Wk 5 // Thurs 28 Jan
  • 2. • Last week in the world: what grabbed you • First in-class assignment: Facebook ads • Writing headlines
  • 3.
  • 4.
  • 5. Relevance: Female Facebook user, mid-20s. Value Proposition: Win up to $1,000. CTA: ENTER HERE!
  • 6. Relevance: SME marketer, early 30s. Value Proposition: grow your business through pinning. CTA: Take Advantage HERE! (note t he Fb ad rules breaking)
  • 7.
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  • 15. Your turn: • Paddy Power Shergar Burgers • Free with any bet this week • Headline 25 chars incl spaces • Body copy 90 characters • You decide tone of voice • Three versions, each distinct for split testing • Screengrabbed and sent to nmcgivney@gmail.com by end of class
  • 16. HEADLINES! • Metaphor • Personalisation • Hyperbole • Paradox • Puns • Parallelism • Anaesis • Simile • Rhetorical question • Quotation
  • 17. HEADLINES! • Metaphor • Hyperbole ‘People will grasp the wretchedness of a toupee • Paradox much more quickly if you • Puns call it a rug than they will if • Parallelism you just describe it as • Anaesis unattractive.’ • Simile Suzanne Pope • Rhetorical question • Quotation
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  • 26. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘Personification is a kind of • Personification metaphor. But with • Hyperbole personification, you’re no • Paradox longer comparing your subject • Puns with an inanimate object; • Parallelism instead, you’re describing it as you would a human being. • Anaesis Personification allows you to • Simile present mere objects as being • Rhetorical question capable of love, hate, fear, • Quotation hope and every other emotion available to humans.’ Suzanne Pope
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  • 32. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘Hyperbole makes it • Personification possible to provoke shock • Hyperbole or laughter without the • Paradox need for words. Though • Puns hyperbole is typically • Parallelism viewed these days as a visual device, it can also • Anaesis succeed wonderfully in • Simile words alone. ’ • Rhetorical question Suzanne Pope • Quotation
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  • 37. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘The power of paradox • Personification comes from the fact that • Hyperbole the contradiction often • Paradox turns out to contain a • Puns thought-provoking grain of • Parallelism truth.’ • Anaesis Suzanne Pope • Simile • Rhetorical question • Quotation
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  • 41. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘If puns don’t make sense • Personification for the brief on every • Hyperbole level, then ditch them.’ • Paradox Suzanne Pope • Puns • Parallelism • Anaesis • Simile • Rhetorical question • Quotation
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  • 52. HEADLINES! • Metaphor Parallelism is the • Personification deliberate repetition of a • Hyperbole particular word, phrasing • Paradox or sentence structure for • Puns effect. • Parallelism • Anaesis • Simile • Rhetorical question • Quotation
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  • 56. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘Typically with anaesis, • Personification one starts with a fairly • Hyperbole lofty, dignified or • Paradox respectful statement and • Puns lets it all go downhill from • Parallelism there. structure for effect. It is the use of a • Anaesis concluding sentence or • Simile phrase that undercuts or • Rhetorical question diminishes what was said • Quotation previously.’ Suzanne Pope
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  • 61. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘When the equation of a • Personification metaphor (“life is a poker • Hyperbole game”) is altered by • Paradox adding the word “like” or • Puns “as” (“life is like a poker • Parallelism game”) the resulting comparison is known as a • Anaesis simile.’ • Simile Suzanne Pope • Rhetorical question • Quotation
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  • 65. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘When the equation of a A • Personification question to which no answer • Hyperbole is needed or expected, asked • Paradox to bring your listener or • Puns reader to your chosen • Parallelism conclusion. Rhetorical questions are powerful tools, • Anaesis tools that don’t exist in all- • Simile visual advertising. They can • Rhetorical question be used to serve rational • Quotation arguments.’ Suzanne Pope
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  • 68. HEADLINES! • Metaphor ‘When people talk, they • Personification reveal a lot about • Hyperbole themselves, whether they • Paradox mean to or not. The most • Puns brilliant visual ads in the • Parallelism world – and there have been a lot of them – have never • Anaesis captured the nuances of • Simile human speech in the way • Rhetorical question that a headline-driven ad • Quotation can.’ Suzanne Pope
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  • 71. HEADLINES • Metaphor • Personalisation • Hyperbole • Paradox • Puns • Parallelism • Anaesis • Simile • Rhetorical question • Quotation