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1. The feedback:
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I found your essay to be a vast improvement this time around,
but there are still things missing that should be addressed when
you revise this essay for the portfolio. Grammar like always
needs to be looked at and fixed. I also want to see you use your
more sources and rely on your sources more in your revision of
this paper. I also want you to talk more about the importance of
the space and how the space itself is defining the purpose and
area in which people are experiencing.
Please follow the feedback Don't be late
Please follow the feedback
Please follow the feedback
