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Adding Details to Your
               Writing
                    Ambre Lee
                 Dubnoff Center
Read the Following
 Student Paragraph
I was in a fight on my first
  day. I got beat-up. The
  other fight that I was in
  was with Jose. He does
  not go to school here
  anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           Write a list of questions
                          in your notebook that
fight on my first         you have after reading
day. I got beat-          the paragraph.
up. The other
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           Who? Who was the
                          fight with?
fight on my first
day. I got beat-
up. The other
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           Who? Who was the
                          fight with? Is he/she a
fight on my first         formidable (fearsome)
day. I got beat-          opponent? Describe
up. The other             this opponent. Who
                          has the upper-hand in
fight that I was in       the fight and why?
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           Where? Where did the
                          fight take place? Were
fight on my first         there a lot of people
day. I got beat-          around? What were
up. The other             they doing?
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           What? What
                          happened during the
fight on my first         fight? Punches?
day. I got beat-          Slaps? Was it broken-
up. The other             up? Who broke it up?
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           When? When did the
                          fight happen? What
fight on my first         class did it happen in?
day. I got beat-          What time of day was
up. The other             it?
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           Why? Why did the
                          fight start?
fight on my first
day. I got beat-
up. The other
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a           How? How did you
fight on my first         feel after the fight?
day. I got beat-
up. The other
fight that I was in
was with Jose.
He does not go
to school here
anymore.
What Question Do You
Have After Reading This?
    I was in a fight      Use your notes to
on my first day. I         create a detailed
                           paragraph about the
got beat-up. The
                           fight. Change the
other fight that I         order and the words
was in was with            to make an exciting,
Jose. He does not          descriptive paragraph
go to school here          that explains what
anymore.                   happened.

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Writing with detail

  • 1. Adding Details to Your Writing Ambre Lee Dubnoff Center
  • 2. Read the Following Student Paragraph I was in a fight on my first day. I got beat-up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 3. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  Write a list of questions in your notebook that fight on my first you have after reading day. I got beat- the paragraph. up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 4. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  Who? Who was the fight with? fight on my first day. I got beat- up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 5. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  Who? Who was the fight with? Is he/she a fight on my first formidable (fearsome) day. I got beat- opponent? Describe up. The other this opponent. Who has the upper-hand in fight that I was in the fight and why? was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 6. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  Where? Where did the fight take place? Were fight on my first there a lot of people day. I got beat- around? What were up. The other they doing? fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 7. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  What? What happened during the fight on my first fight? Punches? day. I got beat- Slaps? Was it broken- up. The other up? Who broke it up? fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 8. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  When? When did the fight happen? What fight on my first class did it happen in? day. I got beat- What time of day was up. The other it? fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 9. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  Why? Why did the fight start? fight on my first day. I got beat- up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 10. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a  How? How did you fight on my first feel after the fight? day. I got beat- up. The other fight that I was in was with Jose. He does not go to school here anymore.
  • 11. What Question Do You Have After Reading This? I was in a fight  Use your notes to on my first day. I create a detailed paragraph about the got beat-up. The fight. Change the other fight that I order and the words was in was with to make an exciting, Jose. He does not descriptive paragraph go to school here that explains what anymore. happened.