3. Audience feedback and improvements
for the contents page
I have used audience feedback in order to change
my contents page, I added more information and
added topics such as the suggested radar and the
new topic, this was a great improvement as my
audience feedback allowed me to make my
contents a lot more clearer to my target
audience.
The contents page has changed dramatically
from the original design and introduces a more
in-depth and realistic design of what a magazine
contents page should be, this in turn makes my
improvements worthwhile as I have followed
what my audience feedback have stated to do.
The improved contents page Previous contents page
The pictures above is a before and after feedback,
on the left is the improved contents page which has
included audience feedback, the right is my previous
design which is very dull and plain.
4. Feedback and improvements for double
page spread
This is my double page spread after the feedback received, I
listened to my participants advise and have enlarged my model. I
also added a lot more questions to fill the page, I added relevant
questions which many fans of artists would appreciate.This
includes information about the artists personal life and what
inspired him to write the song.
I have also included a quote from the double page spread which
supports the magazine as being perceived as more professional. I
have also linked the front cover with the double page spread, this
creates the double page to be more professional.
I have keenly stuck to the natural background, this is because I
wanted to link the front cover and double page spread. As the
double page becomes of greater importance.
Moreover, I have used part of the interview on the right hand side,
to follow the models body as it the interview progresses. I thought
this would be good idea as I wanted to make my double page
spread more appealing to my target audience.
DPS before audience feedback.
DPS after feedback
