This document evaluates the first draft of a can design by Savannah Hardwick. It notes that the bold stripes and color scheme are effective at attracting attention. However, the main text is difficult to read due to the font, size, and changing placement on the can. The next draft will focus on improving the readability of the text by experimenting with font, color, and consistent placement. It will also add more nutritional information and a bar code to make the design seem more realistic.