1. Summary of pitch research
When I did my pitch my target audience came back with
several improvements for next time. These included
things like the sound, images and presentation method.
However many people thought my pitch was good and
said that it was a great way of putting my ideas across.
They also liked how I researched into Interscope Records
and got good background information of the company.
The audience also liked how I went into detail on the the
conventions of the genre highlighting key props and
costume that would needed to be used in my production.

2. Improvements
• To not look down at the piece of paper I was
reading from. The audience said I could position
the paper directly behind the camera so I could
read clearer.
• The audience also said I could add some sound to
my images to make it more appealing to my target
audience and make it more creative.
• The final improvement that my audience told me I
could make was if I added in better quality images.
These would make the standard look much better.

3. What went well
• The audience liked my knowledge of the
Interscope Records label. They all thought that it
was a good idea to include the background
information in my pitch.
• They also liked how I made the conventions clear
and said what was typical to include. I included
specific examples such as costume and setting.
• Finally they said they liked the different way I
chose to present my pitch. Instead of just of just a
power point I chose to make a video with
animations and images.