ancillary texts

1. Audience feedback

2. This was my first digipack draft.
After looking at my audience feedback I
knew where to change my product
based to make it better and to a higher
standard.
Firstly, my feedback tells me that the
colours were too ‘girly’ and therefore
don’t reach a the large target audience
or males and females that I wanted.
Also, I found that the pictures did not
reach a professional standard and
didn’t look realistic and conventional
enough to be on a digipack.

3. This is my final digipack after looking
at my audience feedback.
To improve I used the colour scheme
of dark pink, black and white. I felt
this looked more professional. I also
did my models hair and makeup and
prepared ideas and poses for the
album cover so I was organised and
made sure I had the correct photos I
wanted for my digipack. I also made
sure the photos were all continuous
of each other and made sure they
looked similar.

4. This is my first album advert draft, after looking at my
audience feedback of this product I found that to
improve I had to make the photo more interesting and
professional because it is the first thing that draws the
audience to the advert and makes them want to look.
Also, I found that I had to spread the text out more
because it looks crushed together and also you cant see
what some of the text says.

5. This is my final album advert, when looking at my
audience feedback I knew I had to improve it so I
decided to change the main image. I had planned and
organised a photoshoot with different poses and
hair/makeup so I had professional looking images. I
felt that with a pose it makes the advert look more
interesting and will make the audience want to read
it.
I also spread out the text on the page so it was easier
to read and made sure the font was readable.