This document discusses the key features and rules of academic writing. It notes that academic writing is a process, has a clear audience and purpose, and is linear, complex, formal, precise, clear, concise, objective, and explicit. The document outlines rules for academic writing, such as using reliable evidence to support arguments and presenting both sides of an issue. It provides tips for avoiding errors like spell checking and having others proofread. Common errors like its/it's and e.g./i.e. are explained. The document emphasizes supporting claims with academic underpinning and having an open mindset to question information.
1. What Do We Mean By Academic
Writing?
Bruce Hargrave
Military Education Group
2. Academic vs ‘normal’ writing
• Are there some differences?
• If so, how can we describe those
differences?
• We will have a look at some examples and
try to establish some ‘rules’.
3. Read the examples and decide..
• Is this academic writing?
• Why? (Or, why not?).
4. Features of Academic Writing
• It is a process
• It is a social practice
• It has an obvious audience and a clear
purpose
• Academic writing is linear.
5. Features of Academic Writing
• Complexity
• Formality
• Precision
• Clarity and conciseness
• Objectivity
• Explicitness
• Accuracy
• Responsibility.
6. Rules of Academic Writing
• Any evidence used to support an
argument must be based on reliable
research.
• Objectivity is better than subjectivity.
• Both sides of the argument must be
presented – for and against, pros vs cons.
• Emotional language should only be used
with great care.
• Critical analysis is vital.
7. Avoiding Errors
• Use the toolset available to you
– Spell check everything before submission
– Grammar check everything before submission
– AND proof read everything before submission
• Proof reading tips
– Get some temporal distance
– Read out loud
– Get someone else to read it to you.
8. Common Errors
• Its and It’s
– It’s is short for ‘it is’ (or ‘it has’).
– The cat had eaten its dinner (no apostrophe
required).
– It’s time to put the cat out for the night.
– It’s been raining for a week.
9. Common Errors
e.g. and i.e.
– do not mean the same things.
– i.e. is short for id est, the Latin for it is.
– e.g. is short for exempli gratia,
– and means for example.
The standard discount applies, i.e. 10%.
Try using easy-to-read fonts, e.g.
Georgia and Verdana.
10. Marking Frustrations
• If all I do as the marker of your work is ask
questions, then you have not written your
work correctly
• Here are some common questions I shout
out when marking:
– “How can you say that?”
– “Who says?”
– “Where did that come from?”
– “What has this got to do with anything?”
11. The Academic Mindset
• “Everything is open to Question”
– If you ask all of these questions as you write
then by definition you will be forced into
supporting your work
– Bias will be removed
– Your work will be appropriately supported
– You will write far fewer definitive statements
12. Remember
• Your opinion counts, tell me what you
think, but support or refute what you say
with academic underpinning!
• It doesn’t matter if I don’t agree with you!
Notes de l'éditeur
This is a brief introduction to the subject. In actual fact, academic writing is the main subject of this course. You will cover the mechanics of academic writing – including spelling, punctuation and grammar - in a lot more depth with your language tutor. During this week we will also discuss:
Literature searches and literature reviews
Critical analysis
Research questions and how questions can be deconstructed
Essay proposals and how they can be improved, and
How to write a 4,000 word essay.
These subjects are all part of academic writing.
There are two pairs of examples.
The first pair of writing examples are written by the same journalist.
Example 1 is written for the Daily Mirror, a UK tabloid daily newspaper. Whilst it is hard to generalise, the readership of this paper comprises those who may have had little formal education after the age of 16 and are more likely to be manual workers. In terms of National Readership Survey (NRS) grades – used in the UK as a standard for market research – Daily Mirror readership is broken down into AB/C1=34%, C2/DE=66%.
Example 2 is written for The Independent, a UK broadsheet daily newspaper. Independent readership is broken down into AB/C1=82%, C2/DE=18%.
A=upper middle class Higher managerial, administrative or professional
B=middle class Intermediate managerial, administrative or professional
C1=lower middle class Supervisory or clerical and junior managerial, administrative or professional
C2=skilled working class Skilled manual workers
D=working class Semi and unskilled manual workers
E=non working, Casual or lowest grade workers, pensioners, and others who depend on the welfare state for their income
It is a process - It starts from understanding your task. It then goes on to doing the research and reading. The next stage is planning and writing various drafts. This is followed by proof-reading and editing. All this should lead to the final text.
It is a social practice - By a social practice I mean that it is what people do together. This means that you always write with a readership in mind. You always write with a purpose: to explain, to persuade etc. It also means that what is right and wrong, appropriate or inappropriate is defined by the users in the social community. In your case these are other people in the ‘military community’. There is nothing natural about the organisation and the way language is used in a scientific report, for example. It is as it is because that is the way it has developed through centuries of use by practitioners. For that reason it has to be learned. No-one speaks (or writes) academic English as a first language (Bourdieu & Passeron, 1994, p. 8). It must be learned by observation, study and experiment.
Academic writing is linear - it starts at the beginning and finishes at the end, with every part contributing to the main line of argument, without digression or repetition. This line of argument must be made clear whatever kind of writing you are producing and you, the writer, are responsible for making this line of argument clear and presenting it in an orderly fashion so that the reader can follow.
Complexity - Written language is relatively more complex than spoken language. Written language has longer words, it is lexically more dense and it has a more varied vocabulary. It uses more noun-based phrases than verb-based phrases. Written texts are shorter and the language has more grammatical complexity, including more subordinate clauses and more passives.
Formality - Academic writing is relatively formal. In general this means that in an essay you should avoid colloquial words and expressions.
Precision - In academic writing, facts and figures are given precisely.
Clarity and conciseness – these are features of good academic writing. Unfortunately, there is a lot of academic writing that is neither clear nor concise. I would call that bad academic writing.
Objectivity - Written language is in general objective rather than personal. It therefore has fewer words that refer to the writer or the reader. This means that the main emphasis should be on the information that you want to give and the arguments you want to make, rather than you. For that reason, academic writing tends to use nouns (and adjectives), rather than verbs (and adverbs).
Explicitness - Academic writing is explicit about the relationships in the text. Furthermore, it is the responsibility of the writer in English to make it clear to the reader how the various parts of the text are related. These connections can be made explicit by the use of different signalling words.
Accuracy - Academic writing uses vocabulary accurately. Most subjects have words with narrow specific meanings.
Responsibility - In academic writing you must be responsible for, and must be able to provide evidence and justification for, any claims you make. You are also responsible for demonstrating an understanding of any source texts you use.
Objectivity refers to a deliberate distance between yourself as a writer and
the subject matter of your assignment. Being objective is about creating this
distance. Objectivity is established in various ways.
Some students find it useful to think about the opposite of objectivity –
‘subjectivity’. If you are writing in a subjective way, you seem very close to
your subject. Another way to think about this difference is this: imagine
objectivity as being on the outside looking in. Subjectivity is being on the
inside looking out.
So, instead of writing about your own experiences, you write about the
research and reading you’ve done. Instead of making points based on your
opinions, write about the conclusion to which your research has led you.
Instead of writing based on a chat, or argument, you had with your friends,
use an interview you’ve conducted with an academic expert in the field.