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Imagery 
In your books match up the types of imagery with the sense that it appeals to! 
1) Visual 
2) Tactile 
3) Auditory 
4) Olfactory 
a) Smell 
b) Touch 
c) Sight 
d) Hearing 
Starter:
Learning Objectives 
• To know how to use creative writing 
techniques to engage your reader.
Imagery 
Imagery is a technique using 
imaginative and descriptive 
words to paint a picture in the 
reader’s head.
Types of Imagery 
In your books match up the types of imagery with the 
1) Visual 
2) Tactile 
sense that it appeals to! 
3) Auditory 
4) Olfactory 
a) Smell 
b) Touch 
c) Sight 
d) Hearing
Think, pair, share 
It was in the clove of seasons, summer was 
dead but autumn had not yet been born, that 
the ibis sat in the bleeding tree. 
Type of bird! 
•What type of imagery is created here? 
•What is the effect of it? 
•What do you think the story will be about? 
•Image of pain and 
death 
•A connation of the 
colour red is danger
Annotate the text 
What type of imagery is used? Underline it. 
1) Visual 
2) Auditory 
3) Olfactory 
Extension – can you find... 
•A simile 
•Personification 
What is the effect of the 
imagery? – What kind of 
atmosphere is created?
SHHHHHHHHHHHHH! 
In pairs write a description of your picture 
without saying what it is…
Plenary: Self-Assessment 
• 1 point for every instance of imagery 
• 1 point for every type of imagery you used 
• 2 points for every time you used a simile, 
alliteration, metaphor and personification. 
What did you score?
What techniques has the author used 
to make this description effective?
What techniques has the author used 
to make this description effective? 
Short introductory 
sentence – sets the scene 
Colon 
introducing a 
list 
Semi colon 
splitting up 
the 
descriptions 
(writing a lot 
about a little!) 
Two simple 
sentences 
for impact
Describing a scene 
Watch this clip carefully as this is the scene you will be 
describing in detail! 
1st sentence – Short 
introduction about the 
girl 
1. Describe the 
men at the bar 
– what do they 
look like (use an 
interesting 
verb) 
2. Describe the 
painted faces in 
the crowds (use 
a simile!) 
3. Describe the 
town – (Use 
personification 
to describe the 
buildings or 
the streets) 
Ending 
Two short 
sentences to build 
tension – what 
might happen to 
the girl?
Peer assessment 
Has your partner included... Tick/cross 
Good use of simple punctuation (full stops/commas) 
A range of punctuation (colons and semi-colons) 
Complex sentences 
Short sentences for impact 
Long descriptive sentences 
Simile 
Metaphor 
Personification 
Ambitious vocabulary (words you have not heard of before!) 
TOTAL /9 
9 = A 
7-8 = B 
5-6 = C 
4 or below = D
Success Criteria 
C 
• Detailed descriptions 
• Some use of different 
techniques and vocabulary 
• Some complex sentences 
and good use of simple 
punctuation 
A 
Ambitious and imaginative 
vocabulary 
Writing techniques used to 
engage the reader 
Range of accurate 
punctuation used 
B 
• Writing techniques and 
vocabulary used carefully 
to engage the reader 
• Varied sentences and 
accurate punctuation

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Imagery (1)

  • 1. Imagery In your books match up the types of imagery with the sense that it appeals to! 1) Visual 2) Tactile 3) Auditory 4) Olfactory a) Smell b) Touch c) Sight d) Hearing Starter:
  • 2. Learning Objectives • To know how to use creative writing techniques to engage your reader.
  • 3. Imagery Imagery is a technique using imaginative and descriptive words to paint a picture in the reader’s head.
  • 4. Types of Imagery In your books match up the types of imagery with the 1) Visual 2) Tactile sense that it appeals to! 3) Auditory 4) Olfactory a) Smell b) Touch c) Sight d) Hearing
  • 5. Think, pair, share It was in the clove of seasons, summer was dead but autumn had not yet been born, that the ibis sat in the bleeding tree. Type of bird! •What type of imagery is created here? •What is the effect of it? •What do you think the story will be about? •Image of pain and death •A connation of the colour red is danger
  • 6. Annotate the text What type of imagery is used? Underline it. 1) Visual 2) Auditory 3) Olfactory Extension – can you find... •A simile •Personification What is the effect of the imagery? – What kind of atmosphere is created?
  • 7. SHHHHHHHHHHHHH! In pairs write a description of your picture without saying what it is…
  • 8.
  • 9. Plenary: Self-Assessment • 1 point for every instance of imagery • 1 point for every type of imagery you used • 2 points for every time you used a simile, alliteration, metaphor and personification. What did you score?
  • 10. What techniques has the author used to make this description effective?
  • 11. What techniques has the author used to make this description effective? Short introductory sentence – sets the scene Colon introducing a list Semi colon splitting up the descriptions (writing a lot about a little!) Two simple sentences for impact
  • 12. Describing a scene Watch this clip carefully as this is the scene you will be describing in detail! 1st sentence – Short introduction about the girl 1. Describe the men at the bar – what do they look like (use an interesting verb) 2. Describe the painted faces in the crowds (use a simile!) 3. Describe the town – (Use personification to describe the buildings or the streets) Ending Two short sentences to build tension – what might happen to the girl?
  • 13. Peer assessment Has your partner included... Tick/cross Good use of simple punctuation (full stops/commas) A range of punctuation (colons and semi-colons) Complex sentences Short sentences for impact Long descriptive sentences Simile Metaphor Personification Ambitious vocabulary (words you have not heard of before!) TOTAL /9 9 = A 7-8 = B 5-6 = C 4 or below = D
  • 14. Success Criteria C • Detailed descriptions • Some use of different techniques and vocabulary • Some complex sentences and good use of simple punctuation A Ambitious and imaginative vocabulary Writing techniques used to engage the reader Range of accurate punctuation used B • Writing techniques and vocabulary used carefully to engage the reader • Varied sentences and accurate punctuation