2. Final edit feedback from the target audience
Positive =
Good
very creative and I can understand the message
I like how you have shown how someone can be like without drinking and I like
how you used the flowers to symbolise that
I like how you have shown that before someone has started to drink they can be
happy and confident with themselves but when they had have alcohol they can
change.
that is absolutely wicked and funky
it looks great, visually appealing with a strong message
smashin
I think it is great it is very detailed, professional and has had a lot of time put into it
It is good
Negative =
main title font is a little hard to read
There is a lot happening and it is some what busy
3. Final edit feedback response
For the most part I received positive feedback with comments such as: very creative
and I can understand the message ,I like how you have shown how someone can be
like without drinking and I like how you used the flowers to symbolise that ,I like
how you have shown that before someone has started to drink they can be happy
and confident with themselves but when they had have alcohol they can change,
that is absolutely wicked and funky ,it looks great, visually appealing with a strong
message, smashin, I think it is great it is very detailed, professional and has had a lot
of time put into it, which is what I wanted to come across from the poster however I
also received some constructive feedback: main title font is a little hard to read,
there is a lot happening and it is somewhat busy I understand their feedback
however the aim was to make the poster busy to show how alcohol can fully
consume someone's life and the writing is supposed to flow together like water
linking the theme with all aspects of the poster. Overall, I am pleased I was able to
get my message across to the audience effectively without having to describe the
meaning behind the poster and pleased that people like what I have created.
