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Evidence-Based Reading and
Writing
Sunshine	
  Coast,	
  gr.	
  4-­‐9	
  
January	
  21,	
  2015	
  
Faye	
  Brownlie	
  
www.slideshare.net/fayebrownlie/
sunshineintermediate/2015	
  
The teeter totter
kids
kids curriculum
Frameworks
It’s All about Thinking (English, Humanities, Social Studies) –
Brownlie & Schnellert, 2009
It’s All about Thinking (Math, Science)– Brownlie, Fullerton,
Schnellert, 2011
Universal Design for Learning
MulDple	
  means:	
  
-­‐to	
  tap	
  into	
  background	
  knowledge,	
  to	
  acDvate	
  
prior	
  knowledge,	
  to	
  increase	
  engagement	
  and	
  
moDvaDon	
  
-­‐to	
  acquire	
  the	
  informaDon	
  and	
  knowledge	
  to	
  
process	
  new	
  ideas	
  and	
  informaDon	
  
-­‐to	
  express	
  what	
  they	
  know.	
  
	
  	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
  Rose	
  &	
  Meyer,	
  2002	
  
Choose a lesson
•  Think	
  of	
  all	
  the	
  users	
  at	
  the	
  point	
  of	
  design.	
  
•  Who	
  mighty	
  not	
  be	
  able	
  to	
  do	
  this?	
  
•  Think	
  of	
  the	
  goal,	
  not	
  the	
  acDvity/method.	
  
•  Accessibility	
  not	
  accommodaDon.	
  
Backwards Design
•  What	
  important	
  ideas	
  and	
  enduring	
  
understandings	
  do	
  you	
  want	
  the	
  students	
  to	
  
know?	
  
•  What	
  thinking	
  strategies	
  will	
  students	
  need	
  to	
  
demonstrate	
  these	
  understandings?	
  	
  
	
  	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
  McTighe	
  &	
  Wiggins,	
  2001	
  
Approaches
•  Assessment	
  for	
  learning	
  
•  Open-­‐ended	
  strategies	
  
•  Gradual	
  release	
  of	
  responsibility	
  
•  CooperaDve	
  learning	
  
•  Literature	
  circles	
  and	
  informaDon	
  circles	
  
•  Inquiry	
  
It’s All about Thinking – Brownlie & Schnellert, 2009
Introduction to Mitosis
•  Whip	
  around	
  –	
  what	
  do	
  you	
  remember	
  about	
  
DNA?	
  
•  QuesDoning	
  from	
  3	
  pictures	
  
•  AnDcipaDon	
  guide	
  –	
  with	
  partner	
  
•  Read	
  to	
  find	
  out	
  and	
  provide	
  evidence	
  for	
  your	
  
answer	
  	
  
•  Sort	
  and	
  predict	
  –	
  groups	
  of	
  3	
  
•  With	
  Ken	
  Asano,	
  Centennial	
  
Before 	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
   	
  	
  	
  A]er	
  
cancer	
   	
   	
   	
  duplicate	
  
cell	
  cycle 	
   	
   	
  daughter	
  cells	
  
cytokinesis	
   	
   	
  nucleus	
  
interphase	
   	
   	
  proteins	
  
mitosis	
   	
   	
   	
  divide	
  
replicaDon	
   	
   	
  replace	
  
spindle	
  fibres 	
   	
  funcDon	
  for	
  survival	
  
separate	
  
Gallery Walk – writing lesson
•  In	
  groups,	
  3	
  things	
  that	
  count	
  in	
  wriDng	
  
•  Made	
  class	
  list	
  and	
  categorized	
  
•  Focus	
  on	
  meaning	
  and	
  thinking	
  
–  DescripDon	
  
–  ImaginaDon	
  
–  Detail	
  
–  Knowledge	
  
–  Focus	
  
–  Ideas	
  
–  Passion	
  
–  Intriguing	
  
–  Understandable	
  
•  Place	
  a	
  series	
  of	
  pictures	
  around	
  the	
  room	
  
•  Students	
  in	
  groups	
  of	
  3	
  
•  3	
  minutes	
  per	
  picture	
  
•  Chat	
  –	
  How	
  could	
  you	
  use	
  this	
  image	
  in	
  your	
  
wriDng?	
  
•  Build	
  on	
  one	
  another’s	
  thinking	
  
•  View	
  4	
  pictures	
  
•  Eagle	
  Dreams	
  -­‐	
  	
  Wri.en	
  by	
  Sheryl	
  McFarlane	
  ;	
  
Illustra;ons	
  by	
  Ron	
  Lightburn;	
  	
  
•  ISBN:	
  1-­‐55143-­‐016-­‐9	
  
•  Task:	
  	
  a	
  piece	
  of	
  wriDng,	
  choose	
  your	
  genre,	
  
think	
  about	
  the	
  criteria	
  
•  As	
  you	
  are	
  moving	
  to	
  your	
  desk,	
  keep	
  walking	
  
unDl	
  you	
  have	
  your	
  first	
  line	
  in	
  your	
  head	
  
•  12	
  minutes	
  to	
  write	
  
•  As	
  students	
  are	
  wriDng,	
  move	
  about	
  the	
  room,	
  
underlining	
  something	
  powerful	
  (criteria	
  
connected)	
  in	
  each	
  person’s	
  wriDng	
  
•  Each	
  student	
  shares	
  what	
  was	
  underlined	
  
•  Listen	
  to	
  hear	
  something	
  you	
  might	
  want	
  to	
  
borrow	
  
•  As	
  a	
  class,	
  decide	
  on	
  why	
  each	
  was	
  underlined	
  
•  Create	
  the	
  criteria:	
  
– Words	
  that	
  are	
  WOW	
  
– Details	
  that	
  showed	
  emoDon	
  or	
  made	
  a	
  picture	
  
– Hook	
  –	
  first	
  line	
  made	
  me	
  want	
  to	
  keep	
  reading	
  
Sample	
  1	
  
One	
  cool	
  and	
  breezy	
  night,	
  in	
  a	
  prairie,	
  a	
  boy	
  sat	
  
on	
  the	
  rim	
  of	
  his	
  open	
  window,	
  looking	
  out	
  at	
  
the	
  moon,	
  hoping	
  for	
  something	
  to	
  happen.	
  	
  
A]er	
  a	
  few	
  minutes,	
  he	
  went	
  back	
  in	
  and	
  close	
  
his	
  window.	
  	
  Robin	
  sighed.	
  “I	
  wished	
  my	
  life	
  
has	
  more	
  excitement	
  in	
  it,	
  “	
  he	
  thought,	
  
before	
  he	
  turned	
  off	
  his	
  light	
  and	
  went	
  to	
  bed,	
  	
  
he	
  took	
  one	
  quick	
  look	
  at	
  his	
  kite	
  on	
  top	
  of	
  his	
  
bed	
  that’s	
  shaped	
  like	
  an	
  eagle,	
  and	
  went	
  to	
  
sleep.	
  
Next	
  morning,	
  Robin	
  went	
  outside	
  to	
  fly	
  his	
  kite	
  
a]er	
  breakfast,	
  while	
  he	
  was	
  flying	
  his	
  kite,	
  he	
  
noDced	
  the	
  wind	
  got	
  stronger,	
  he	
  tried	
  to	
  hold	
  on	
  
to	
  the	
  string,	
  but	
  it	
  slipped,	
  the	
  kite	
  got	
  caught	
  in	
  
the	
  wind	
  and	
  flew	
  towards	
  the	
  forest,	
  Robin	
  ran	
  
a]er	
  it,	
  he	
  ran	
  and	
  ran	
  and	
  ran,	
  unDl	
  he	
  ran	
  into	
  a	
  
clearing,	
  he	
  found	
  the	
  kite	
  there,	
  but	
  he	
  also	
  
discovered	
  something	
  else	
  a	
  few	
  feet	
  away,	
  was	
  a	
  
bunch	
  of	
  brown	
  feathers,	
  moving,	
  	
  “Can	
  it	
  be?”	
  
he	
  thought.	
  	
  He	
  moved	
  a	
  likle	
  closer	
  and	
  he	
  saw	
  
what	
  the	
  bunch	
  of…	
  
Sample	
  3	
  
Once	
  upon	
  a	
  Dme	
  there	
  was	
  a	
  boy	
  that	
  was	
  facinated	
  by	
  eagles,	
  he	
  
asked	
  his	
  father	
  to	
  get	
  one	
  for	
  him	
  but	
  he	
  couldn’t.	
  	
  Then	
  the	
  boy	
  
thought	
  about	
  a	
  way	
  to	
  catch	
  an	
  eagle	
  and	
  then	
  a	
  different	
  gender	
  
one	
  for	
  more	
  eagles.	
  	
  Delighted	
  with	
  his	
  idea	
  that	
  he	
  thought	
  of	
  last	
  
night,	
  he	
  conDnued	
  his	
  plan.	
  	
  He	
  put	
  3	
  fishes	
  in	
  the	
  open	
  with	
  a	
  
trap,	
  and	
  went	
  to	
  bed.	
  	
  Then	
  he	
  heard	
  a	
  noise	
  that	
  sounded	
  like	
  an	
  
eagle.	
  	
  When	
  he	
  had	
  checked	
  the	
  trap,	
  he	
  found	
  an	
  eagle	
  that	
  was	
  
in	
  his	
  trap.	
  	
  Happily	
  jumping	
  around,	
  the	
  eagle	
  made	
  him	
  inspired	
  to	
  
make	
  a	
  home	
  for	
  the	
  eagle.	
  	
  He	
  created	
  a	
  bond	
  with	
  the	
  eagle.	
  	
  He	
  
remembered	
  how	
  much	
  his	
  father	
  despised	
  eagles.	
  	
  He	
  lead	
  the	
  
eagle	
  to	
  a	
  secret	
  place	
  in	
  the	
  forest	
  where	
  his	
  father	
  never	
  went.	
  	
  
He	
  came	
  downstairs	
  and	
  his	
  father	
  was	
  in	
  a	
  rage.	
  	
  He	
  threatened	
  to	
  
ground	
  his	
  son	
  if	
  he	
  didn’t	
  kill	
  the	
  eagles.	
  Shocked,	
  the	
  boy	
  asked	
  
why	
  he	
  told	
  him	
  so.	
  	
  The	
  father	
  said	
  they	
  …	
  
Sample	
  4	
  
At	
  Sunday,	
  the	
  Ximing	
  and	
  his	
  father	
  mother	
  go	
  
travel.	
  	
  On,	
  Ximing	
  say	
  “I’m	
  see	
  a	
  eagle!”	
  	
  His	
  
father	
  and	
  his	
  mother	
  is	
  going	
  to	
  his.	
  	
  And	
  his	
  
mother	
  say	
  “Oh,	
  Help	
  it!”	
  	
  OK.	
  	
  It	
  was	
  heal.	
  	
  OK.	
  	
  
We	
  are	
  go	
  back	
  home!	
  
At	
  home:	
  
Today	
  is	
  very	
  funning.	
  Because	
  we	
  are	
  helpa	
  eagle!	
  	
  
I’m	
  so	
  happy	
  now!	
  Ximing	
  is	
  Dme	
  to	
  eat	
  a	
  dinner	
  
say	
  mother	
  say	
  …	
  
Sample	
  5	
  
One	
  day	
  Amiy	
  was	
  flying	
  a	
  kite	
  it	
  like	
  an	
  eagle.	
  	
  
He	
  loves	
  eagle.	
  	
  Well	
  he	
  was	
  running	
  he	
  saw	
  
an	
  eagle	
  liding	
  on	
  the	
  grass,	
  he	
  thik	
  the	
  eagle	
  
is	
  in	
  troudel	
  so	
  he	
  went	
  over	
  to	
  see	
  what’s	
  
wong.	
  	
  It	
  was	
  a	
  baby	
  eagle	
  that	
  had	
  it’s	
  weing	
  
hurt.	
  	
  Amiy	
  broDn	
  it	
  home	
  and	
  ask	
  his	
  sister.	
  	
  
His	
  sister	
  told	
  him	
  that	
  the	
  eagle	
  is	
  in	
  …	
  
•  Kids	
  can	
  add/edit/conDnue	
  to	
  work	
  
•  Set	
  up	
  for	
  next	
  class	
  
–  Work	
  on	
  same	
  criteria	
  
–  Hear	
  again,	
  pieces	
  that	
  work	
  
–  Move	
  to	
  where	
  kids	
  can	
  idenDfy	
  criteria	
  in	
  their	
  own	
  
work	
  and	
  ask	
  for	
  help	
  with	
  criteria	
  that	
  are	
  struggling	
  
with	
  
•  A]er	
  repeated	
  pracDce,	
  students	
  choose	
  one	
  
piece	
  to	
  work	
  up,	
  edit,	
  revise,	
  and	
  hand	
  in	
  for	
  
marking	
  
•  Feedback	
  is	
  conDnuous,	
  personal,	
  Dmely,	
  focused	
  
Quick Writes
• Give	
  a	
  word	
  
• 15	
  seconds	
  to	
  think	
  
• 2-­‐3	
  minutes	
  to	
  write	
  
• Word	
  count	
  
• Find	
  a	
  phrase,	
  short	
  piece	
  you’d	
  like	
  to	
  share	
  
• As	
  the	
  students	
  stand	
  and	
  share,	
  listen	
  for	
  nuggets	
  
you	
  might	
  be	
  able	
  to	
  use	
  in	
  some	
  way	
  in	
  your	
  wriDng	
  
• –	
  the	
  words	
  we	
  used	
  today	
  
Picture Prompts
•  Talk	
  to	
  your	
  partner	
  about	
  what	
  you	
  are	
  seeing,	
  
wondering,	
  thinking	
  about	
  in	
  this	
  picture…think	
  
about	
  how	
  it	
  connects	
  to	
  ‘paint’	
  and	
  ‘train’	
  
•  Share	
  2-­‐3	
  pictures.	
  
•  Walk	
  and	
  talk	
  with	
  a	
  partner:	
  	
  what	
  is	
  the	
  story	
  
behind	
  the	
  pictures?	
  What	
  is	
  the	
  story/text	
  that	
  is	
  
sparked	
  in	
  your	
  thinking	
  by	
  the	
  words,	
  the	
  
wriDng,	
  the	
  conversaDon,	
  the	
  pictures.	
  
•  Quick	
  write	
  of	
  10	
  minutes	
  or	
  so.	
  
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Sunshine coast literacy_jan_2015

  • 1. Evidence-Based Reading and Writing Sunshine  Coast,  gr.  4-­‐9   January  21,  2015   Faye  Brownlie   www.slideshare.net/fayebrownlie/ sunshineintermediate/2015  
  • 3. Frameworks It’s All about Thinking (English, Humanities, Social Studies) – Brownlie & Schnellert, 2009 It’s All about Thinking (Math, Science)– Brownlie, Fullerton, Schnellert, 2011
  • 4. Universal Design for Learning MulDple  means:   -­‐to  tap  into  background  knowledge,  to  acDvate   prior  knowledge,  to  increase  engagement  and   moDvaDon   -­‐to  acquire  the  informaDon  and  knowledge  to   process  new  ideas  and  informaDon   -­‐to  express  what  they  know.                        Rose  &  Meyer,  2002  
  • 5. Choose a lesson •  Think  of  all  the  users  at  the  point  of  design.   •  Who  mighty  not  be  able  to  do  this?   •  Think  of  the  goal,  not  the  acDvity/method.   •  Accessibility  not  accommodaDon.  
  • 6. Backwards Design •  What  important  ideas  and  enduring   understandings  do  you  want  the  students  to   know?   •  What  thinking  strategies  will  students  need  to   demonstrate  these  understandings?                      McTighe  &  Wiggins,  2001  
  • 7. Approaches •  Assessment  for  learning   •  Open-­‐ended  strategies   •  Gradual  release  of  responsibility   •  CooperaDve  learning   •  Literature  circles  and  informaDon  circles   •  Inquiry   It’s All about Thinking – Brownlie & Schnellert, 2009
  • 8. Introduction to Mitosis •  Whip  around  –  what  do  you  remember  about   DNA?   •  QuesDoning  from  3  pictures   •  AnDcipaDon  guide  –  with  partner   •  Read  to  find  out  and  provide  evidence  for  your   answer     •  Sort  and  predict  –  groups  of  3   •  With  Ken  Asano,  Centennial  
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  • 14. cancer        duplicate   cell  cycle      daughter  cells   cytokinesis      nucleus   interphase      proteins   mitosis        divide   replicaDon      replace   spindle  fibres    funcDon  for  survival   separate  
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  • 20. Gallery Walk – writing lesson •  In  groups,  3  things  that  count  in  wriDng   •  Made  class  list  and  categorized   •  Focus  on  meaning  and  thinking   –  DescripDon   –  ImaginaDon   –  Detail   –  Knowledge   –  Focus   –  Ideas   –  Passion   –  Intriguing   –  Understandable  
  • 21. •  Place  a  series  of  pictures  around  the  room   •  Students  in  groups  of  3   •  3  minutes  per  picture   •  Chat  –  How  could  you  use  this  image  in  your   wriDng?   •  Build  on  one  another’s  thinking   •  View  4  pictures  
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  • 28. •  Eagle  Dreams  -­‐    Wri.en  by  Sheryl  McFarlane  ;   Illustra;ons  by  Ron  Lightburn;     •  ISBN:  1-­‐55143-­‐016-­‐9  
  • 29. •  Task:    a  piece  of  wriDng,  choose  your  genre,   think  about  the  criteria   •  As  you  are  moving  to  your  desk,  keep  walking   unDl  you  have  your  first  line  in  your  head   •  12  minutes  to  write   •  As  students  are  wriDng,  move  about  the  room,   underlining  something  powerful  (criteria   connected)  in  each  person’s  wriDng  
  • 30. •  Each  student  shares  what  was  underlined   •  Listen  to  hear  something  you  might  want  to   borrow   •  As  a  class,  decide  on  why  each  was  underlined   •  Create  the  criteria:   – Words  that  are  WOW   – Details  that  showed  emoDon  or  made  a  picture   – Hook  –  first  line  made  me  want  to  keep  reading  
  • 31. Sample  1   One  cool  and  breezy  night,  in  a  prairie,  a  boy  sat   on  the  rim  of  his  open  window,  looking  out  at   the  moon,  hoping  for  something  to  happen.     A]er  a  few  minutes,  he  went  back  in  and  close   his  window.    Robin  sighed.  “I  wished  my  life   has  more  excitement  in  it,  “  he  thought,   before  he  turned  off  his  light  and  went  to  bed,     he  took  one  quick  look  at  his  kite  on  top  of  his   bed  that’s  shaped  like  an  eagle,  and  went  to   sleep.  
  • 32. Next  morning,  Robin  went  outside  to  fly  his  kite   a]er  breakfast,  while  he  was  flying  his  kite,  he   noDced  the  wind  got  stronger,  he  tried  to  hold  on   to  the  string,  but  it  slipped,  the  kite  got  caught  in   the  wind  and  flew  towards  the  forest,  Robin  ran   a]er  it,  he  ran  and  ran  and  ran,  unDl  he  ran  into  a   clearing,  he  found  the  kite  there,  but  he  also   discovered  something  else  a  few  feet  away,  was  a   bunch  of  brown  feathers,  moving,    “Can  it  be?”   he  thought.    He  moved  a  likle  closer  and  he  saw   what  the  bunch  of…  
  • 33. Sample  3   Once  upon  a  Dme  there  was  a  boy  that  was  facinated  by  eagles,  he   asked  his  father  to  get  one  for  him  but  he  couldn’t.    Then  the  boy   thought  about  a  way  to  catch  an  eagle  and  then  a  different  gender   one  for  more  eagles.    Delighted  with  his  idea  that  he  thought  of  last   night,  he  conDnued  his  plan.    He  put  3  fishes  in  the  open  with  a   trap,  and  went  to  bed.    Then  he  heard  a  noise  that  sounded  like  an   eagle.    When  he  had  checked  the  trap,  he  found  an  eagle  that  was   in  his  trap.    Happily  jumping  around,  the  eagle  made  him  inspired  to   make  a  home  for  the  eagle.    He  created  a  bond  with  the  eagle.    He   remembered  how  much  his  father  despised  eagles.    He  lead  the   eagle  to  a  secret  place  in  the  forest  where  his  father  never  went.     He  came  downstairs  and  his  father  was  in  a  rage.    He  threatened  to   ground  his  son  if  he  didn’t  kill  the  eagles.  Shocked,  the  boy  asked   why  he  told  him  so.    The  father  said  they  …  
  • 34. Sample  4   At  Sunday,  the  Ximing  and  his  father  mother  go   travel.    On,  Ximing  say  “I’m  see  a  eagle!”    His   father  and  his  mother  is  going  to  his.    And  his   mother  say  “Oh,  Help  it!”    OK.    It  was  heal.    OK.     We  are  go  back  home!   At  home:   Today  is  very  funning.  Because  we  are  helpa  eagle!     I’m  so  happy  now!  Ximing  is  Dme  to  eat  a  dinner   say  mother  say  …  
  • 35. Sample  5   One  day  Amiy  was  flying  a  kite  it  like  an  eagle.     He  loves  eagle.    Well  he  was  running  he  saw   an  eagle  liding  on  the  grass,  he  thik  the  eagle   is  in  troudel  so  he  went  over  to  see  what’s   wong.    It  was  a  baby  eagle  that  had  it’s  weing   hurt.    Amiy  broDn  it  home  and  ask  his  sister.     His  sister  told  him  that  the  eagle  is  in  …  
  • 36. •  Kids  can  add/edit/conDnue  to  work   •  Set  up  for  next  class   –  Work  on  same  criteria   –  Hear  again,  pieces  that  work   –  Move  to  where  kids  can  idenDfy  criteria  in  their  own   work  and  ask  for  help  with  criteria  that  are  struggling   with   •  A]er  repeated  pracDce,  students  choose  one   piece  to  work  up,  edit,  revise,  and  hand  in  for   marking   •  Feedback  is  conDnuous,  personal,  Dmely,  focused  
  • 37. Quick Writes • Give  a  word   • 15  seconds  to  think   • 2-­‐3  minutes  to  write   • Word  count   • Find  a  phrase,  short  piece  you’d  like  to  share   • As  the  students  stand  and  share,  listen  for  nuggets   you  might  be  able  to  use  in  some  way  in  your  wriDng   • –  the  words  we  used  today  
  • 38. Picture Prompts •  Talk  to  your  partner  about  what  you  are  seeing,   wondering,  thinking  about  in  this  picture…think   about  how  it  connects  to  ‘paint’  and  ‘train’   •  Share  2-­‐3  pictures.   •  Walk  and  talk  with  a  partner:    what  is  the  story   behind  the  pictures?  What  is  the  story/text  that  is   sparked  in  your  thinking  by  the  words,  the   wriDng,  the  conversaDon,  the  pictures.   •  Quick  write  of  10  minutes  or  so.