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NEWSLETTER OF THE AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY
VOL. 17 ISSUE 2 • MAY-JUNE 2014 • ONLINE @ COPYDESK.ORG
ACES TAKES LEADERSHIP ROLE
Society joins with SPJ to focus on strengthening media industry.
ON PAGE 4
BUSTING MYTHS IN VEGAS
BY MATTHEW CROWLEY
ACES member since 2002
Elvis hadn’t left the building; he’d
just arrived. And a Planet Hollywood
Resort ballroom full of copy editors was
delighted.
Craig Silverman of the Poynter
Institute had just finished his keynote at
the 18th American Copy Editors Society
Conference, urging his audience to vet
the dubious and protect the truth. And,
he said, Las Vegas notwithstanding, Elvis
was still dead.
Or maybe not. To Silverman’s apparent
shock, the King of Rock ’n’ Roll bounded
onstage. Eyes shaded by dark sunglasses,
body encased in white jumpsuit, he
shook his hips and flapped his lips. That’s
Vegas, baby.
Elvis’ comeback, without even a
séance, temporarily rendered mythical
the long-standing notion that he’d died
(or ever aged). But long before Presley’s
proxy, ACES’ Niko Dugan, belted songs
and busted moves, myths had busted
all over the conference. It was enough to
leave the 330-plus attendees all shook up,
or at least with suspicious minds.
First, conferencegoers busted the
myth that flashing slots and glowing
neon would outdraw ACES sessions.
Standing-room-only classes in grammar,
lexicographical history and usage proved
this.
Second, research by Wayne State
University’s Fred Vultee continues to
dash the notion that the post-first, post-
fast digital era had rendered copydesks
superfluous.
“Some people may think that this
conference is just a bunch of crazy,
uptight grammar freaks crying in the
desert, fighting for punctuation and
subjunctive clause justice in an uncaring,
unfeeling world,” ACES President Teresa
Schmedding said. “The world has long
debated our value. … It mystifies me that
people still continue to argue in this day
and age that we’re not important, and I
think it’s because it’s difficult to measure
the absence of something.”
As ACES busted myths, NCAA
brackets busted for throngs of basketball
fans packed into a gallery next to the
convention space. Cheers sometimes
seeped into meeting rooms, contributing
to a uniquely Vegas-in-March din of
dinging machines, blasting rock and
blathering basketball analysts.
A major point of copy editor analysis,
and social media outrage, came as
Associated Press Stylebook editors
David Minthorn and Darrell Christian
announced “over” would henceforth be
acceptable as a synonym for “more than”
when used with numbers. It took mere
seconds for the news to reach Poynter
and for one Twitter wit to quip, “More
than my dead body.”
And Christian said this wasn’t a
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Elvis (aka Niko Dugan) serenades the crowd during the ACES 2014 conference banquet on March 21 in Las Vegas.
VEGAS CONTINUES ON PAGE 6
Thanks to all of you, your en-
thusiasm and thirst for knowl-
edge, our national conference
in Las Vegas was a screaming
success.
I would like to especially
thank all the more than 70
speakers who donated their
time and expertise. And the
volunteers who toil behind
the scenes for nothing but our
undying gratitude.
 If you think it’s time to relax
now that the big show is over,
you’re wrong. We are gearing
up for a lot more training in
2014.
This year, we’ll be hosting
regional conferences in Chi-
cago, Omaha, Pittsburgh, Palm
Springs, Nashville and Mon-
treal. We’re also experimenting
with social events. Karen Mart-
wick is planning a copy editor
trivia night in Portland.  
We’re also continuing to
offer you online training in
conjunction with the Poyn-
ter Institute. I’ll be doing a
webinar on managing creative
people. Also coming up is Lisa
McLendon (trimming content),
Neil Holdway (math) and Sue
Burzynski Bullard (curating
content). Plus, we’ve got the
copy editing certificate courses. 
Gerri Berendzen continues to
provide great training through
our #ACESchat on Twitter.
ACES is also leading the
charge for better collabora-
tion among journalism orga-
nizations. We’ve invited the
presidents of other major U.S.
journalism organizations to
meet with us in Nashville this
fall for a leadership summit.
Our goal is to see how we can
work together to better serve
our members and help the
journalism industry.
So hang on to your edit-
ing hats. We’re just getting
started ...
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FROM THE PRESIDENT
NEWSLETTER OF THE AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 7 Avenida Vista Grande, Suite B7 #467, Santa Fe, NM 87508-9199
MAY-JUNE 2014
Vol. 17, ISSUE 2
EDITOR
Gerri Berendzen
ASSOCIATE
EDITOR
Christine Steele
CONTRIBUTORS
Naïf Bartlett
John Braun
Paul Chevannes
Matthew Crowley
Samantha Enslen
Margaux Henquinet
Kaitlyn Klein
Peter Parisi
David Sullivan
Robert Trishman
FEEDBACK
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andbeyondthroughtop-notch
training,networkingandcareer
opportunities.
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Mark Allen
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(614) 961-9666
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Vanguard Group
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National Geographic
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University of Nebraska
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Karen Martwick
Travel Portland, Oregon
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Regina McDowell
Department of Defense
(301) 821-1628
regina@copydesk.org
Merrill Perlman
ACES Education Fund
President
Merrill Perlman
Consulting
(917) 696-3567
meperl@copydesk.org
Christine Steele,
Director of Membership
The Capital Group
(213) 615-0528
csteele@copydesk.org
Fred Vultee
Wayne State University
(313) 577-6302
fredvultee
@copydesk.org
EXECUTIVE COMMITTEE
Teresa Schmedding, President
Daily Herald, suburban Chicago
(847) 427-4574
tschmedding@copydesk.org
David Sullivan, Vice President
The Philadelphia Inquirer
(215) 854-2357
dsullivan@copydesk.org
Neil Holdway, Treasurer
Daily Herald, suburban Chicago
(847) 427-4573
nholdway@copydesk.org
Brady Jones, Secretary
Omaha World-Herald
(402) 444-1277
bradyjones@copydesk.org
EXECUTIVE OFFICERS
TERESA SCHMEDDING
was elected president of the
society in March 2010. She
is deputy managing editor/
digital at the Daily Herald
Media Group, overseeing its
website and the copy desks.
Email her at tschmedding@
copydesk.org.
Trainingdoesn’tstopwithconference
If you’re reading this, you’re already aware of the big change in the ACES newsletter. We’ve moved from paper and mail delivery to an
electronic edition.
The ACES Executive Committee voted to switch newsletter delivery to an electronic format. Members will receive an email four times a
year with a link to download a PDF of the newsletter from a secure site.
With ACES membership at a record level, this new PDF newsletter will certainly be greener. And switching to electronic delivery will
save the society about $8,000 a year in printing and mailing costs. All of the other work on the newsletter is done by volunteers, with
no cost to the society.
The PDF format and size is perfect for e-readers and tablets, and the PDFs can viewed on any computer or smartphone with free PDF-
reading software. And with each page at letter size, it’s easy for those who prefer to hold paper in hand to print out a copy.
If you have any questions about the new system, please email newsletter@copydesk.org.
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Pittsburgh, which is the site of the confluence of the Monongahela and Allegheny Rivers, has a lot of
nicknames and one is the City of Bridges. You’ll be able to see some of the city’s 446 bridges at ACES
19th national conference March 26-28 in Pittsburgh.
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If you missed our
conference in Las
Vegas — or even if you
didn’t — join us at an
ACES Editing Boot
Camp this summer
and fall.
ACES presenters
will be traveling the
country, spreading the
gospel of careful edit-
ing and proofreading.
At Boot Camp, we’ll
help you to:
• understand gram-
mar and punctuation
basics;
• set and manage an
editorial style;
• enhance clarity
and readability;
• ensure accuracy;
• and, explain to
your boss why editing
is important!
Here’s our schedule:
ACESEditingBoot
Camps
Aug.5— Montreal,
in conjunction with the
Association for Educa-
tion in Journalism and
Mass Communication
annual conference.
Aug.22 — Chicago
Sept.4 — Nashville,
in conjunction with the
Society for Profession-
al Journalism annual
conference.
Oct.30 — Palm
Springs, California,
in conjunction with
the Journalism and
Women Symposium
annual conference.
Nov.8— Omaha,
Nebraska.
ACESAdvanced
EditingBootCamps
OctoberTBD —
Washington, D.C.
To register, go to
workshops.copydesk.
org/events.
ACESSETS
REGIONAL
WORKSHOPS
Steal away to Pittsburgh
By JOHN BRAUN
ACES Executive Committee member
It’s the Steel City, the home-
town of Heinz, and Mister
Rogers’ neighborhood.
And next March, Pittsburgh
will garner a new distinction:
as host of the 2015 ACES na-
tional conference.
Registration has already be-
gun for the conference, which
will take place March 26 to 28
at the Wyndham Grand Pitts-
burgh Downtown. Right across
the street from the historic
Point State Park where the Al-
legheny and Monongahela riv-
ers meet to form the Ohio, the
hotel is offering a promotional
rate of $149 for the conference.
Add in that early registrants
can book the 2015 conference
at the 2014 price, and there’s no
reason not to go ahead and sign
up now at www.copydesk.org/
national-conference.
As you make your travel
plans, remember that Pitts-
burgh may be closer than you
think — just a stone’s throw
from Ohio and less than half a
day’s drive from Washington,
Baltimore, Philadelphia and
New York.
And if you want to present
a session at the conference,
you can nab a prime spot on
the schedule by emailing your
proposal to any of the ACES
conference committee mem-
bers: Karen Martwick, David
Brindley and John Braun.
So, as you enjoy spring
2014, firm up your plans to get
spring 2015 off to an excellent
start by joining us in Pitts-
burgh.
ACES19thnationalconferencetakesplace
wherethe AlleghenyandMonongahelameet
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The American Copy Editors Society is
collaborating with the Society of Profes-
sional Journalists this fall to bring together
journalism organizations to create a uni-
fied force in the rapidly changing media
industry.
ACES and SPJ will be holding a leader-
ship summit at the Excellence in Journal-
ism Conference Sept. 4-6 in Nashville.
“The more we stand together, the stron-
ger we are — whether it’s on training or
large scale issues affecting our industry,”
said Teresa Schmedding, ACES president.
“Now, more than ever, journalism organi-
zations need to work together toward our
common goals, which is why I wanted to
bring an event like this leadership summit
to fruition.
“The days of suspicion and competition
are passing. If we want to help journalism,
then our organizations need to collaborate
as a team.”
Last year ACES led a team representing
several journalism organizations in put-
ting together a summit to fight plagiarism
and fabrication. And efforts among the So-
ciety of Professional Journalists, Investi-
gative Reporters and Editors, the National
Association of Hispanic Journalists, the
Radio-Television Digital News Associa-
tion and other groups have demonstrated
the inherent power of industry collabora-
tion.
“Despite the efforts of our individual
groups over the years; media credibility
has continued to deteriorate, newsroom
diversity hasn’t improved, governments
are more secret than ever, and journalists
are struggling to find and afford the train-
ing they need. No individual journalism
organization can fix these problems,” said
David Cuillier, SPJ president. “Turning
the tide and restoring the important role of
journalism in democracy will take all of us
working together.”
ACES has invited the presidents of all
the major journalism organizations in the
United States to EIJ for a roundtable dis-
cussion on the greatest challenges facing
media organizations and the industry and
suggestions for how to solve these chal-
lenges through collaboration.
ACES and SPJ will survey the presi-
dents in advance to build a framework for
the summit.
Representatives from the following or-
ganizations already have confirmed they
will attend: American Copy Editors Soci-
ety; American Society of Business Press
Editors; the Native American Journalist
Association; the Society for News Design;
the American Society of News Editors;
Investigative Reporters and Editors; the
Radio, Television, Digital News Asso-
ciation; and the Society for Professional
Journalists.
ACESurgesjournaliststojoinforces
Society, SPJ host leadership summit focused on strengthening media industry
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BY DAVID SULLIVAN
ACES vice president
One new face will join the ACES Executive
Committee as a result of this year’s elections,
the first under a new format with a single vice
president.
David Brindley, managing editor
of National Geographic magazine,
is the new member of the Executive
Committee. He was elected to a two-
year term.
That new board format also left
the office of secretary open, and the
Executive Committee voted to fill the
vacant position with former board
member Brady Jones of the Omaha
World-Herald.
Re-elected to two-year terms were
incumbents freelance editor Mark
Allen, Gerri Berendzen of the Quincy Herald-
Whig, Sue Bullard of the University of Nebraska,
Karen Martwick of Travel Portland, and Fred
Vultee of Wayne State University.
Christine Steele of the Capital Group, who had
been vice president for membership, was elected
to a three-year term on the Executive Committee
as a result of receiving the highest number of
votes for the board.
Teresa Schmedding of the Daily Herald in
Chicago was elected to a third two-year term as
president of the society. David Sullivan of the
Philadelphia Inquirer, who had been secretary,
was elected to the new post of vice president.
Under the board’s new format, membership,
conferences, communications and other major
areas of the society’s activities will be headed by
board-appointed directors or chairs, with the
president and vice president variously overseeing
the directors and chairs.
Because Sullivan had a year left on his term as
secretary, the board — under the bylaws — was
empowered to fill an officer vacancy, using the
same criteria required for candidates for officer
positions in the election. Jones was appointed
on April 9 and will serve as secretary until next
year’s elections.
On Dec. 15, nominations will open for the
positions of secretary, treasurer, and three
executive committee seats. ACES encourages any
member in good standing to consider helping to
guide the organization by seeking the posts for
which they are qualified. The next election will be
from Feb. 15 to 28, 2015.
CHRISTINE
STEELE
MARK
ALLEN
GERRI
BERENDZEN
SUE
BULLARD
KAREN
MARTWICK
BRADY
JONES
DAVID
SULLIVAN
FRED
VULTEE
2014 ACES elections
DAVID
BRINDLEY
TERESA
SCHMEDDING
6 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG
bombshell announcement.
This ACES conference
focused on the increasingly
digital delivery of information,
with sessions on reporting
with LinkedIn, engaging
readers behind paywalls and
editing online content for
search engine optimization.
The three-day gathering
was social — both virtually,
with hundreds of ACES
moments tweeted live at
#ACES2014 — and physically.
Business cards got swapped in
Planet Hollywood’s upstairs
conference rooms as fast as
chips flew on the gambling
tables in the casino below.
Old friendships deepened
and new ones formed. Copy
editing celebrities, including
New York Times retiree
Merrill Perlman, Grammar
Girl Mignon Fogarty, The
Washington Post’s Bill Walsh,
The Baltimore Sun’s John
McIntyre, returned and other
guests added fresh star power.
The San Diego Zoo sent
Debbie Andreen, Karyl
Carmignani and Mary
Sekulovich, copy editors from
its Zoonooz magazine. They
described landing their jobs
(“The three of us of kind of
weaseled our way in”) and
the thrill of learning about
animals and unique headline
possibilities. (“If you can get
‘poop’ into a headline, you’re
good.”)
Lexicographers also
shined. Merriam-Webster’s
Kory Stamper and Peter
Sokolowski, with Steve
Kleinedler of Houghton Mifflin
Harcourt, the publisher
of American Heritage and
Webster’s New World
Dictionaries, kept packed
rooms rapt describing the
history of dictionaries, usage
dictionaries and hyphenation
rules across dictionaries.
In her usage dictionaries
session, Stamper encouraged
copy desks to use multiple
references, relying, say, on
both the slightly prescriptivist
Garner’s Modern American
Usage and the slightly
descriptivist Merriam-
Webster’s Dictionary of
English Usage. No usage
dictionary, or copy editor,
is wholly descriptivist or
prescriptivist, Stamper said;
they’re always both.
Often, she said, deciding
what to use will be slightly
squishy, based on an editor’s
judgment.
“Good copy editors consider
their audience; they consider
the tone of their publication;
they weigh that against the
work of the author,” she said.
“They also need to be sensitive
to a writer’s voice; they need to
be aware of the peculiarities of
a writer’s style.”
Beyond techniques and
tactics, the conference
emphasized the fight for
truth. The society screened “A
Fragile Trust,” a movie about
the Jayson Blair plagiarism
scandal at The New York
Times; offered sessions on
fighting link-related deception;
and presented the insights of
Silverman, author of “Regret
the Error.”
Before anyone reported
Elvis’ resurrection, Silverman
would have urged vetting.
Otherwise, rumors could start.
Rumors have existed as long
as people have, Silverman
said. And often, they’re less
about someone lying than
someone trying to discern
truth.
Fiction can be stranger than
truth. For example, he said,
in the 1990s, a rumor spread
that beverage maker Snapple
somehow supported the Ku
Klux Klan. This emerged,
Silverman said, because
the label on the company’s
beverage bottles featured
an 18th century-style ship
and a circled letter “K.” The
logic went that the ship was
the kind that ferried African
slaves and the K was a nod to
the Klan.
But the ideas were
ridiculous, Silverman said.
“Snapple was started
by three Jewish guys in
Brooklyn,” he said.
The pictured ship, he said,
was from the Boston Tea
Party. And the K simply
meant the product was kosher.
Fighting off rumors,
or outright lies, matters
particularly now, Silverman
suggested, because powerful,
well-financed entities will
manufacture doubt to further
their economic interests.
In the past, Silverman
said, tobacco ads warned
against cigarettes’ perils but
pictured a doctor smoking
one. (How bad could smoking
really be?) These days, he
said, some entities (including
corporations) try to sow
doubt about climate change,
although scientific consensus
corroborates its existence.
Copy editors, he said, are
well positioned to expose this
chicanery, Silverman said.
First, he said, they know
how to use tools, like
corroborated statistics, vetted
studies and the new, free-
to-download Verification
Handbook, to dispel
falsehoods. They can also use
their voices and instincts.
Copy editors, Silverman
said, examine text
counterintuitively and
interrogate it in ways writers
might not consider.
“This is your ability to hack
your brains in a way, to see
things that other people don’t
and to try to see the skeletons
of it, what are the sources and
where does this come from
and can we do better than
this?” he said. “That ability …
is an incredibly valuable skill
because you can spot bullshit
before other people do.
“And if you can spot it and
get rid of it, then other people
don’t have to see it,” he added.
“And that’s a very good thing.”
Matthew Crowley is a copy
editor for the Las Vegas Review-
Journal. Reach him at matthew_
crowley@copydesk.org or follow
him on Twitter at @copyjockey.
VEGAS:Copyeditorswellpositionedtoexposechicanery
CONTINUED FROM PAGE 1
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
Craig Silverman of the Poynter Institute talks about copy
editors as rumor smashers during the 2014 conference keynote
address March 21.
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SCENESFROMACES18THNATIONALCONFERENCE
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
Erin Brenner of Copyediting.com, left, looks on as
freelance copy editor Dawn McIlvain Stahl makes
a point during the Freelancer Forum.
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
ConferenceattendeeslookovertheitemsupforbidattheACESEducation
Fundsilentauction.Proceedsgotowardscholarshipsforcopyeditingstudents.
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
LEFT:OutgoingVicePresident/ConferencesLisaMcLendonispresentedwithrosesatthe
closeoftheconference.ABOVE:Attendeeslistentooneofthebreakoutsessionpresenters.CHRISTINE STEELE PHOTO
MARK ALLEN PHOTOS
TheACESEducationFundspellingbee,heldthenightbeforetheconference
began,raised$831forscholarships.ABOVE:Contestantslinethefrontof
therowasthebeebegins.RIGHT:BeewinnerAmyGoldsteinlistenstoher
wordasrunner-upLisaMcLendonlookson.
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ACES announced the
winners of its annual headline
contest during the opening
session of the 18th annual
conference in Las Vegas.
ACES’ premier contest
aims to reward good headline
writing in newspapers,
nonnewspaper publications,
websites, and now even
Twitter.
Individual winners in
professional categories could
win up to $300. Winners in
student categories could win
up to $125.
Winning headlines were
published in 2013.
To view PDFs of the
winning headlines, go online
to the headline contest story
on vegas.copydesk.org and
click on the title of the entry
category.
First place winners were:
200+ circulation,
INDIVIDUAL
Jim Webster,
The Washington Post
100-200 circulation,
INDIVIDUAL
Rich Mills,
Omaha World-Herald
0-100 circulation,
INDIVIDUAL
Peter Donahue,
Providence Journal
ONLINE, INDIVIDUAL
Gael Fashingbauer Cooper,
Today.com.
NON-NEWSPAPER,
INDIVIDUAL
Hugh Garvey, Playboy
200+ circulation, STAFF
San Francisco Chronicle
100-200 circulation,
STAFF
The Virginian-Pilot
0-100 circulation, STAFF
Daily Herald
ONLINE, STAFF
NPR
STUDENT, STAFF
The Daily Tar Heel
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tors-cash-and-kudos-in-annual-aces-contest/
WINNERS LIST ONLINE
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Conference attendees
have fun while raising
scholarship dollars
By KAITLYN KLEIN
ACES student member,
University of Kansas
Copyeditors fill the room
across the hall from the
banquet, ACES President
Teresa Schmedding shouts,
“15 minutes” and the chatter
continues.
In 15 minutes, the bidding
ends at the silent auction of
more than 200 items donated
to help raise money for the
ACES Education Fund.
The result: nearly $4,000
from the bidding. Add that to
the $575 raised in a live auc-
tion for a donated iPad, $836
raised in Wednesday night’s
spelling bee and $7,800 from
table donation pledges, and
that’s more than $13,500
raised for scholarships.
And the fundraising con-
tinued after the conference.
ACES 2014 presenter Steve
Buttry, digital transforma-
tion editor at Digital First
Media, did a crowdsourced
fundraiser for the ACES
Education Fund on a dare
from Washington Post
columnist Gene Weingarten.
Weingarten wanted Buttry
to change the name of his
blog, The Buttry Diary.
Weingarten tweeted
asking his followers to “to
overwhelm @stevebuttry
with entreaties to REALLY
change the blog to ‘Mmm.
Smooth, Buttry Goodness.’
It’s way butter. Er, better.”
So Buttry started a Crowd-
rise campaign to change the
name with the money going
to the ACES Education fund.
The campaign raised $725 for
the Education Fund before
Buttry returned to the blog’s
original name after a month.
Currently, the Education
Fund funds five scholar-
ships a year for a total of
$6,500. However, Merrill
Perlman, president of the
ACES Education Fund,
hopes that ACES can expand
its scholarship offerings in
the future. The generosity of
ACES members and friends
can make that happen.
So what great items did
you miss at the auction?
Cutest prize — A stuffed
momma and baby panda and
tote from the San Diego Zoo.
Vegas souvenir — Typo’ed
Vegas shirt.
For the 21 and up members
— Acronym wine.
Celebrity swag — signed
copies of Grammar Girl’s
word lists.
It’s the New York Times
— my personal favorite N.Y.
Times swag was the totes,
but there were also some
great crossword-themed
items.
Best bling — who doesn’t
want a semicolon dangling
from each ear?
Comic relief — no one
appreciates a grammar joke
more than the attendees of
ACES.
If you plan to come back
to the ACES gathering next
year, be sure to keep your
eye out for items like these
that your fellow copy editors
might enjoy.
Save them, donate them
and buy them, while also
contributing to a great cause.
10 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG
By MARGAUX HENQUINET
ACESstudentmember,UniversityofMissouri
Asanassociateeditorandgeneralde-
fineratMerriam-Webster,KoryStamper
answersmanyemailsfromconsumers,a
jobthatsometimesrequireshertotakeon
whatshecalls“hot-buttonlexicographical
issues.”
Peoplesendallkindsofemailsabout
dictionarymatters.Somesaydefinitions
areunclear.Somewanttohavewords
removed.
Someemailaboutwordstheyfindof-
fense.Whensame-sexmarriagewasadded
tothedefinitionofmarriage,about5,000
emailscamein,Stampersaid.
Butit’snotallseriousbusiness;some
emailsareeasiertolaughabout.Oneman,
Stampersaid,wantstoabolishtheword
“homonym”—hesays“homophone”and
“homograph”dothejobjustfine.
InaMarch21presentationatACES2014
nationalconferencetitled“Everything
You’veEverWantedtoKnowAboutDic-
tionaries,”StamperandPeterSokolowski
ofMerriam-WebsterandSteveKleinedler
ofHoughtonMifflinHarcourtoffereda
behind-the-sceneslookattheworldof
dictionaries.
LikeMerriam-Webster’sinbox,their
presentationwaspartserious,partfun;they
outlinedthehistoryofdictionaries,offered
usagetipsanddrewmanylaughs.
Dictionariesareconstantswhereeditors
work,whetherinprintoronline.Butit’snot
alwaysnoticedhowmuchtheychange,how
manynewwordsareaddedeveryyear.
Peoplefocusonthefewexcitingnew
ones,but“that’sjustthetipoftheiceberg,”
Kleinedlersaid.
Newsreleasescomeoutaboutfunwords
like“selfie”beingadded,butalotofnew
wordscomefromresearchersorconsul-
tantswhotellthemwhattheyaremissing,
hesaid.
“Alotofnewrootsthatenterinaren’tall
thatsexy,”Kleinedlersaid.“They’renotthat
funtotalkabout,they’renotthatexciting,
butthey’reimportant.”
Dictionarywebsitesdopublishwords
thatarenotyetintheprintedversion.
KleinedlersaidtheAmericanHeritage
Dictionarydoesasubstantialsiteupdate
twiceayear,andStampersaidMerriam-
Webster’sfreeonlinedictionaryisupdated
onceayear.
Thepresenterstooktheiraudience
throughalessonindictionaryhistory,
tellingstoriesofpastpopularandunpopu-
lardictionariesandgivinganoverviewof
therecentconsolidationofthedictionary
industry.
Whyaretheresomanydifferentdiction-
aries?Inthe’50s,’60sand’70s,publishing
companiesproducedthembecausethought
theywouldbeagoodsourceofincome,
Kleinedlersaid.
Editionsstartedshuttingdowninthelate
’90s,buttherearestillmanyonthemarket
today,andtheonesthatremaincanbequite
differentintermsofwhattheydoandhow
theyareintendedtobeused.
TaketheOxfordEnglishDictionaryand
MerriamWebster’sCollegiateDictionary,
forexample.Workersatthetwocompanies
dothesamekindofresearchbutproduce
dictionarieswithdifferentfunctions,So-
kolowskisaid.
TheOxfordEnglishDictionaryisdia-
chronic,whichmeansthatitmeasuresthe
progressoflanguageovertime,hesaid.
Merriam-Webster’sCollegiateDictionary,
ontheotherhand,issynchronic,meaningit
triestopresentasnapshotofthecurrent,ac-
tivevocabularyofmodernEnglish.Essen-
tially,Merriam-Webster’sfocusesondefini-
tionswhiletheOEDfocusesonhistory.
Stamperexplainedthatdictionaries
canoperatedifferently,too,byindicat-
ingelementssuchasvariantspellingsor
preferredpronunciationindifferentways,
forexample.Sherecommendedreadingthe
book’sfrontmattertolearnhoweverything
works.
Whenitcomestochoosingwhichspell-
ingstouseforwords,Kleinedlersaidthe
importantthingistobeconsistent,andto
followyourstyleguideorhousestyle.
Atonepoint,anaudiencememberasked
howcanyoucreateasynchronicdictionary
whendictionariestakesolongtocreate?
Consumersshouldbeawarethatthe
workofproducingadictionaryneverends,
Kleinedlerresponded,andthatittakesa
while.
“Justkeepinmindthatthedictionaryis
therearviewmirror,”Sokolowskiadded.
Oftenwordsthey’reconsideringadding
arewordsyoualreadyknow,hesaid.
So,withsomanypublishersandtypesof
dictionaryavailable,whichshouldyouget
foryourstaff?
Kleinedlersaiditdependsonwhatyou’re
doing.
First,lookatthecopyrightpageandsee
howoldthedictionaryis.A10-year-old
dictionarywon’tbetoobad,hesaid,but
don’tchoosesomethingthatcamefroman
unknownsourceinthe1920s.
Then,hesaid,lookthroughthediction-
aryandseewhat’susefulorwhatappealsto
you.There’snoone-size-fits-allanswerto
whichdictionaryyoushoulduse.
The definitionofaword-lover’ssession
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
Fromleft,KoryStamperofMerriam-Webster,SteveKleinedlerofHoughtonMifflin
HarcourtandPeterSokolowskiofMerriam-Websterfieldquestionsaboutdictionaries
duringanACES2014sessioninLasVegas.
COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 11
By ROBERT TRISHMAN
ACES member since 2013
Providingattributionandlinkstoin-
formationinonlinecopyismorethanjust
theright,ethicalthingtodo—italsohelps
raiseawebsite’sprofile,authorityandcred-
ibility.
ThatwastheadmonitionofKarenMar-
twick’sACES2014presentation“Linking
Attribution,AggregationandPlagiarism–
CredibilityintheDigitalAge”
Martwick,editorandcontentstrategist
forTravelPortland,outlinedwhyattri-
butionmatters,whenandwheretolink
forattribution,therightwaytolinkout,
andtoolsforverificationandplagiarism
prevention.
Shesaidattributionandlinkingareim-
portantforanyonewhopostscopyonline.
“Youneedtoapplythesamerigorous
standardstoonlineasyouwouldtoaprint
piece,”Martwicksaid.
“Whetheryou’reworkinginjournalism
ornot,attributionisvitaltomaintaining
yourcredibilityandmaintainingyouraudi-
ence,”sheadded.
Plagiarismcanbeadangerwhenrepro-
ducingpressreleasesverbatim,Martwick
said.
“Copyandpastehappens,andit’sconve-
nient,”shesaid.
However,shereferredtothebook“Tell-
ing the Truth and Nothing But,” published
in2013fortheAmericanCopyEditors
Society,specificallytoguidelinesfrom
thechapter “ShowyourWork”bySteve
Buttry.
“Whenyoucopyandpaste,beforeyou
pasteit…alwayscheckthesource,”the
chapterreads.
Ifcopyingandpastingfromapress
releaseontoyourwebsite,settingaside
thepassageinquotemarks—orinblock
quotes,forWordPressusers—withalink
isagoodpractice,butit’sbettertowrite
newcopybasedontheinformationinthe
release.
It’simportanttoletreadersandeditors
checkoutthesourceforthemselves,she
said.
Whileavoidingplagiarismisavital
reasontoattribute,Martwicksaid,adding
authoritativelinksalsocanhelpawebsite’s
SEOperformance.
Sheillustratedwhatconstitutesan
authoritativelinkwithawebpagesheput
togetheraboutOregon’sMultnomahFalls.
Martwicksaidshewantedtoprovidealink
aboutthefalls.AGooglesearchyielded
whatshecalledseveral“spammy”results,
butsheultimatelydecidedontheU.S.For-
estService’sofficialpageforthenaturesite.
Martwicksaidthatlinkingtoreliable
sitesprovidescontext,acknowledgesoth-
ers’work,showsthatyou’vedoneyour
research,andestablishesyourauthority.
“Ifyouvalueyourreaders,youshould
givethemaccesstotheinformationyou
usedtocreateyourpage,”shesaid.
Thisinstanceprovedvaluableinthepage
onTravelPortland’swebsite.Martwick
saidtherewasalinktoabridgethat’spart
ofthefallsarea,butitwasdamagedbya
fallingboulder,soshehadtogobackand
updatethestory,addingalinktothesource
thatbrokethestoryandaforestservice
alertlink.
Martwickcautioned,however,against
usinglinksinonlinecopyjustforthesake
ofusinglinks.Sheofferedguidelineson
whenlinksshouldbeused.
Linksaremostuseful,shesaid,when
readersmightGoogleareference,ifone
ormorephrasesareusedverbatimfroma
source,whenanothersourceprovidesgood
information,or,particularlyforjournalism,
whenanothersourcebrokethestory.
“Putyourselfintheuser’splaceandask,
‘AmImakingitcleareroramImakingit
moreconfusingforthem?’”Martwicksaid.
Whenlinksareused,shesaid,they
shouldbetothemostrelevantpagepos-
sible,whichMartwicksaidisa“deeplink”
ratherthanjusttoahomepage.Links
shouldalsoleadtoreliableandauthorita-
tivesources,tooriginalsources,andto
relatedinformationonyourownsite,or
internallinks.
Includingoutboundlinkstoauthorita-
tive“non-spammy”sites,shesaid,raises
yoursite’svalueinGoogle’seyes,increases
oddsofreciprocallinks,and“atthevery
leastitdoesn’thurtyourSEO.”
Also,linksrequiregood“anchortext,”
concise,descriptivephrasesorsentences
thattellyouwhatyou’relinkingto,busi-
nessandpublicationnames,andthefirst
referenceofanyURLinyourcopy.
Martwickrecommended“The Veri-
fication Handbook,”editedbyPoynter
Institute’sCraigSilverman,forverifying
digitalcontent,availableforfreedownload
atverificationhandbook.com.
“Youarekindofthegatekeeperthat
needstostandupandletpeopleknowit’s
notOK”toleaveorperpetuateerrorsona
website,Martwicksaid.
RobertTrishmanisacopyeditoratthe
DeseretNewsinSaltLakeCity,Utah.
Posting,linkingandattributing
When editors provide reliable links it gives
readers context, acknowledges other’s work
ACES members will have an opportunity to get discounted training on reader engagement and online corrections through the Poynter
Institute’s News University. Members can view the replay of “9 Ways You Drive Readers Away,” which was held May 7, and attend
“Online and Social Media Corrections” on May 22 through the ACES member discount program.
Using the ACES webinar code, members pay only $9.95. This is a $20 discount. Use code: 12PACES995
- See more at: http://www.copydesk.org/blog/2014/04/30/newsu-webinars-on-reader-engagement-online-corrections-discounted-
for-aces-members
ACES DISCOUNTS ON NEWSU WEBINARS
12 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG
By NAÏF BARTLETT
ACES student member, University of Missouri
Nobody’s perfect.
If copy editors were, we wouldn’t
need a constantly updated stylebook to
keep us in line. If everyone else were,
they wouldn’t need copy editors to keep
them in line.
As the mass tweeting over The As-
sociated Press’ new rules on the usage
of “more than” and “over” showed,
we copy editors love rules, and old
habits die hard. The bustling nature
of journalism is counterproductive to
the work we do and the rules we try to
master. Sometimes it can be just as easy
for veterans to make mistakes as it is
for rookies.
Everyone develops blind spots. The
Washington Post’s Bill Walsh spoke
about some blind spots at the ACES
2014 national conference.
Here are some tips Walsh gave to
help veterans avoid easy mistakes:
• Watch subject and verb agree-
ment: Watch out for sentences with
multiple nouns.
“Bob is one of those people who hates
cats.” Apart from Bob’s unnecessary
negativity toward little, furry geniuses,
Bob would be one of those people who
hate cats. Walsh made the point that
grammar sticklers will want to pick
the first, but the second has the correct
verb agreement.
• Watch out for danglers.
• Be specific:  “An Illinois senator
introduced a tax cut bill last January.”
Which January? Walsh said close to an
equal number of copy editors will argue
for January of this year or January of
last year.
• Adjectives of equal weight get
commas: “A big, fat lie.” No, this
rule isn’t a lie. “Big” and “fat” equally
modify “lie” and need a comma.
• Hyphenate with care: Walsh
touched on these twice. First, copy edi-
tors know adverbs ending in -ly don’t
need a hyphen
before another
word. However,
make sure you
are dealing
with an adverb.
“Early-morning
rain” needs a
hyphen.
Second,
be careful
when adding
hyphens to
multiple modi-
fiers. Walsh
used these as
examples:
Anti-child
abuse plans
A town hall-
style meeting
A non-high school friend
An anti-gay discrimination bill
Because adding one hyphen can create
ambiguity, Walsh recommended adding
both.
• Watch the “The”: Proper names
may capitalize the “The” — as in “The
Tonight Show” and “The Washington
Post” — but you don’t need to in the
middle of a sentence. There are also
times when it is appropriate to drop the
word completely.
• Use caution when cutting “that”
out: Taking out the word “that” can
mislead the reader for a few seconds. He
declared his love for her… had died.
• Cops talk like cops: They’ll say a
suspect was transported to a local hos-
pital. Wait, you mean the suspect wasn’t
taken to a hospital 200 miles away?
“Oh, what a novel idea,” Walsh said in
his presentation. There’s no need to use
cop-speak in stories. 
While Walsh was on the subject of
cops, he also brought up the inconsis-
tencies and contradictions with the
word “suspect.” He pointed out that
stories will provide the police’s descrip-
tion of the suspect, and then they will
end with, “Police have no suspects.”
Journalists constantly reach for the
word “suspect,” Walsh said, because
of the fear of libel for calling somebody
a killer. However, if a story says, “The
suspect did this and that,” and the story
then says, “John Smith was arrested as
a suspect,” it is still libeling him.
• Don’t go backward in numbers:
The measure failed, 48-52. The team
lost, 90-91. Both of these examples are
incorrect. Members of the audience
brought up that they had seen this
done many times, but Walsh (and most
people in attendance) agreed it is the
incorrect method.
• Don’t mix typography with an
official name: Journalists do not need
to follow the conventions and typog-
raphy used for titles of works of art
such as books, songs and movies. For
example, Pharrell Williams has a song
called “G I R L.” Must news outlets put
spaces in between every letter? Walsh:
“No.”
• Readers are stupid, but not that
stupid: Any pointless addition that
implies readers are stupid is unneces-
sary. For example: (President Barack)
Obama. Walsh also noted that ellipses
in quotations are to be avoided, as are
parenthetical notations — and a combi-
nation of the two should be avoided at
all costs.
• Be careful when quoting dialects:
There’s a risk of playing favorites here.
Are you only going to quote lower-
income people that way?
“It’s ethically fraud,” Walsh said.
While copy editors are creatures of
habit, we aren’t necessarily opposed
to change. Walsh drew applause from
much of the audience when he professed
near the end of his session to be a fan of
the singular “they.”
He also said he’d like to see “whom”
phased out because it sounds antique.
Old habits die hard, but when change
is made in the name of copy-editing
perfection, anything goes.
BACKTOBASICS
Bill Walsh shares some of the blind spots copy editors have
MARK ALLEN PHOTO
WashingtonPost
multiplatformeditor
BillWalshisauthor
of“Lapsinginto
aComma,”“The
ElephantsofStyle,”
and“Yes,ICouldCare
Less.”
COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 13
And the honorees are ...
Freelance copy editor, mentor
Katharine O’Moore-Klopf
wins Robinson Prize
Many copy editors know Katharine
O’Moore-Klopf even though they’ve never
met her.
O’Moore-Klopf has been a resource for
copy editors long distance through her
Copyeditors Knowledge Base online.
That contribution to copy editors ev-
erywhere is among the reasons freelance
copy editor O’Moore-Klopf was selected as
winner of the American Copy Editors’ 2013
Robinson Prize.
The prize recognizes substantial con-
tributions to the craft of copy editing and
excellence in overall copy editing skills.
O’Moore-Klopf received the award during
the 18th annual ACES national conference
Friday, March 21, in Las Vegas.
O’Moore-Klopf, of Long Island, N.Y.,
has made helping others an intricate part
of her job since she established her full-
time freelancing business in 1995. She has
focused on medical editing, and she has
a reputation for working with foreign-
language doctors and other scientists
to publish important work in English-
language journals.
In late April, she will
teach at the Jishuitan
Orthopaedic Forum in
Beijing, helping young
physicians write better
English and navigate the
U.S. journal-publishing
system.
Maintaining and clari-
fying the client’s voice,
she says, is key to copy editing, she says on
her website biography:
”In my first professional job, I was a
reporter for a midsize Texas newspaper,
where I observed talented editors polish-
ing writers’ prose, including mine, without
removing their voice from it. When I
moved to the publishing industry, I was
determined to do the same.”
Her clients say her work reflects that
determination.
“Kathy is sensitive to giving my voice its
fullest expression while she also skillfully
and meticulously edits my work,” wrote
author Gen LaGreca. “She is a great com-
municator, as well, making it a joy to work
with her. When Kathy has finished editing
my work, I can be confident it will meet the
highest professional standards and also
reflect exactly what I want to say.”
O’Moore-Klopf’s regularly updated
Copyeditors’ Knowledge Base website
at www.kokedit.com/ckb.php contains
hundreds of annotated links; it may be the
most useful index of its kind. One of the
judges noted that “her website is a treasure
trove of information from which editors
the world over can benefit.”
O’Moore-Klopf actively contributes to
several copy-editing organizations, includ-
ing ACES, the American Medical Writers
Association, the Editorial Freelancers As-
sociation, and the Board of Editors in the
Life Sciences, for which she is a certified
editor. She has contributed newsletter ar-
ticles to these organizations, and she runs
the Twitter account for BELS.
Mark Long, for whom she edited several
technical books when he was publisher at
Texas State Technical College, wrote: “I
can think of no better ambassador for the
copy editing profession than Katharine
O’Moore-Klopf.”
The Robinson Prize, which was first
awarded for the 2005 calendar year, is
named for Pam Robinson, a cofounder of
ACES and the society’s first president. The
winner receives $3,000 and an engraved
glass plaque.
Alex Cruden honored
with Glamann Award
Alex Crudenwas named the sixth recipi-
ent of the American Copy Editors Society’s
Glamann Award at the Society’s national
conference March 21 in Las Vegas.
The Glamann Award is named for Hank
Glamann, ACES co-founder and a former
national board member. The award recog-
nizes people and organizations that have
contributed to the Society and the craft of
copy editing. Each year’s recipient is cho-
sen by the Executive Committee of ACES.
Cruden retired from the Detroit Free
Press in 2008 as its chief editor of the copy
desks, ending a 35-year editing career with
the paper that he started shortly after he
graduated from Hamilton College in 1968.
Cruden has led countless seminars at
ACES conferences and workshops and
elsewhere. He most notably moderated a
session at several ACES conferences called
“Inside Readers’ Heads,”
where he invited aver-
age readers to comment
on headlines seen in
newspapers. Welcoming
readers’ candid views by
emphasizing that what
they say is always right,
he provided news copy
editors with valuable
insights on how readers
really respond to headlines, often contrary
to the many rules copy editors had been
taught for decades.
Former Free Press colleagues praised
Cruden as they recalled their years work-
ing with him.
“The way he conveyed his lessons
wasn’t just that it was important to his
rules or even the newspaper’s rules, but
that it was the reader who was of the ut-
most importance,” wrote Free Press copy
editor Janet Graham.
Wrote Free Press Managing Editor Julie
Topping: “When I had some questions on
a story he had edited, I was warned to be
careful. But Alex turned out to be the most
thoughtful, helpful content editor I had
worked with since my arrival at the Free
Press as a youngster.”
And wrote longtime colleague Javan
Kienzle: “His concern for grammatical cor-
rectness has been equaled by his concern
for his fellow copy editors. For Alex was
also an educator, and in correcting others,
he knew that encouragement can be one of
the best teachers.”
Cruden, still living in Detroit, is now
vice president of ACES’ Education Fund
and a founding member of ACES, which
was formed in 1997. He has overseen the
Fund’s scholarship program.
The American Copy Editors Society
shares Kienzle’s sentiment: “I can think
of no one worthier than Alex Cruden to
receive this prestigious award. The award
itself acquires even more honor and luster
in being presented to Alex.”
KATHARINE
O’MOORE-KLOPF
ALEX
CRUDEN
14 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG
By PETER PARISI
ACES member since 2000
Empowered by what you learned at ACES 2014 in Las Vegas,
you can test your freshly enhanced editing skills by detecting
and correcting the mistakes, grammatical and otherwise, in
these actual examples taken from news stories and commentary
columns. In honor of the “more than/over” ruling, our house
style for this quiz is Associated Press style:
1. A 1989 Government Accountability Office report found
that “[a]liens have nothing to lose by failing to appear for
hearings and, in effect, ignoring the deportation process.”
2. President Obama flew to Ann Arbor Wednesday, where the
jobless rate is close to 8 percent to boast about his eco-
nomic policies.
3. California state Sen. Leland Yee, an outspoken advocate
for gun control, has been indicted for arms trafficking and
public corruption.
4. The NBC report maintained that he was actually a Sudan-
born driver and confidante of Omar Abdel-Rahman, the so-
called “blind sheik” tied to the 1993 bombing of the World Trade
Center in New York.
5. Herbert Croly (1869-1930) is not a household name in fed-
eral governmental circles today, nor was he so in 1914 when
he published a book entitled “Progressive Democracy.” 
6. In a vigorous economy such as South Korea or the Czech
Republic, manufacturing contributes at least 20 percent of
gross domestic product. In Russia, that figure is 15 percent. 
7. The Ukraine government has already accused Moscow of
triggering unrest and dissension in the region to justify an
invasion, just as they did in Crimea.
8. The programming language of the World Wide Web is Eng-
lish. This has greatly strengthened the position of English
as the lingua franca of the digital age, but ICANN has been trying
to undo this and balkanize the online community.
9. In Poland, where Solidarity leaders endured marshal law, I
watched courage surface to confront violent suppression of
basic liberty. 
10. On Wednesday, Sen. Rand Paul, Kentucky Republican,
told a state committee in Frankfurt that restoring voting
rights for nonviolent felons is a positive step toward changing the
nation’s flawed “war on drugs.”  
ANSWERS
1.In 1989, the auditing arm of Congress known today as
the Government Accountability Office was still known
as the General Accounting Office. Its name was changed in
July 2004, but the name change didn’t affect its acronym,
GAO.
2.The time element, Wednesday, needs to be moved to
enable the restrictive clause (“where ... “) to follow Ann
Arbor. The “Wednesday” can be placed after the “flew.”
3.We don’t want to convict Mr. Yee before trial, so that
should be “indicted on charges of,” instead of “indicted
for.” See the “indicted” entry in the AP Stylebook.
4.Since “he,” and not “she,” was the driver, he was a con-
fidant, not a confidante. 
5.Croly was entitled to call his book anything he wanted
to, but it’s titled, not entitled, “Progressive Democracy.”
See the “entitled” entry in the AP Stylebook.
6.South Korea and the Czech Republic are countries, not
economies, so this should read “economy such as that
of” or “economy such as South Korea’s or the Czech Repub-
lic.”
7.This is a two-fer. First, the antecedent, whether it’s
Ukraine or Moscow, is singular, so the “they” should be
“it.” Additionally, the sentence is not clear which (Moscow or
Ukraine) the “it” refers back to, and should be rewritten ac-
cording to clarify that.
8.“Balkanize” should be uppercased. According to Web-
ster’s New World College Dictionary, the official diction-
ary of the AP, Balkanize as a verb meaning “to break up into
small, mutually hostile political units, as the Balkans after
WWI,” should be capitalized.
9.It may require a marshal to enforce it, but it’s martial,
not marshal, law.
10. If Mr. Paul is addressing a committee in Germany,
Frankfurt is correct. But if he’s doing it in Kentucky, it’s
Frankfort, with an “o.”
Scoring key:
0-3: J-school dropout
4-6: Snoozed through copy-editing classes
7-8: Candidate for promotion to slot
9-10: Copy-desk chief
Quiz yourself: Think you picked up some knowledge at ACES2014?
Then find the errors in these passages *
* we’re using AP style here; your style may vary
By PAUL CHEVANNES
ACES member since 2011
Aristophanes, a librarian in Alexan-
dria, Greece, during the third century
B.C. suggested that readers could use
middle, low and high points (dots) to
punctuate the written word as the rules
of rhetoric then dictated. And that was
the birth of punctuation.
Now, can you imagine a world with-
out marks — punctuation marks? It
would be like a flower whose bud could
not open, a useless quest for recognition
and appreciation.
One should never think of punctua-
tion marks as barriers, walls or check-
points but rather as a security blanket
for clarity — our ultimate goal being
communication.
A well-punctuated piece of prose is as
welcoming as a lovely morning coffee,
or like a charming French slogan that I
recently came across, which read “Cou-
cou, tu as pris le pain?” (“Hi there, have
you had your bread/baguette?”)
Let’s trace the roots of a few punctua-
tion marks:
Ampersand
The ampersand is the regal queen of
marks in my opinion. It is a favorite of
graphic designers who also use it as a
decorative element.
This queen started out life in Rome,
Italy, centuries ago. The symbol means
“and,” the Latin word being et, hence its
classical shape, a configuration of the
“e” and “t” joined in harmony. A mark
of unquestionable aesthetics.
@ Mark
Like the ampersand, this is techni-
cally not a punctuation mark, but has
been adopted over the years as such.
They are called logograms or gramma-
logues. The @ mark, a most ergonomi-
cally designed one, is used to represent
the word “at.” It was previously rarely
used, but has become a global superstar
— thanks to the Internet.
Dash
Ah, yes, we are all experts on dashes,
except for the swung dash that’s been
out of vogue for a while and all but for-
gotten (the seductive ellipsis has taken
over in modern times).
The swung dash was traditionally
used to indicate the omission of a word
or part of a word. This mark has never
lost its luster in Japan. It is also used a
lot by graphic designers as a decorative
element (dingbat).
Although it looks like a tilde, its us-
age must never be confused.
Hyphen
This punctuation mark has caused
great consternation amongst experts
and novices alike.
A hyphen can be as critical as being
on life-support, as both the literary and
legal professions can attest. Even U.S.
presidents have gotten in on the act
— Theodore Roosevelt and Woodrow
Wilson reprimanded fellow citizens
overusing hyphenated ethnic jargon,
for example, German-Americans, Irish-
Americans, etc., for their perceived
divided loyalties to the United States.
And of course, there’s NASA’s miss-
ing hyphen that led to the absolute
failure of Mariner 1, America’s first
interplanetary probe of Venus. The
missing hyphen in coding used to set
trajectory and speed caused the space-
craft to explode a few minutes after
takeoff — at a price tag of $80 million.
“2001: A Space Odyssey” novelist
Arthur C. Clarke referred to it as “the
most expensive hyphen in history.”
Pilcrow
A favorite punctuation mark of mine,
but unfortunately long defunct. How-
ever, a trace of it is left — even though it
has been relegated to a mere proofread-
ers’ mark. It is a reverse-P shape with
two vertical bars instead of the usual
one. This mark means to begin a new
paragraph.
The Romans adopted the pilcrow
from the Greeks in the late second and
early third centuries B.C. This mark
was used between words as there were
no spaces between words then, and
previously dots (miniature bullets)
had been used. Apparently this was
for fashionable reasons rather than for
practicality.
Asterisk
The utility player in the punctuation
world, it never fails to hit a home run,
as well as some grand slams, too.
Its illustrious history harkens back
to Alexandria, Egypt, in the fourth cen-
tury B.C. It is probably one of the oldest
punctuation marks still around today.
The word asterisk is taken from the
Latin aster, meaning “star,” but that
was derived from the original Greek
word asteriskos, or “little star.”
Its versatility leads to at least eight
different usages. One of my favorites is
called “asterism” — three asterisks in
a triangular formation. Its three main
usages are: to indicate minor breaks in
text, to call attention to a passage, and
to separate sub-chapters in a book.
There is a derivative of asterism
that is called a “dinkus,” where there
are three consecutive asterisks, all in
a straight row. Beware of the word’s
slang usage.
So, you can see why this “little star” is
such a big star.
Paul Chevannes is the supervisor for
copy editing/proofreading at Tiffany &
Company.
COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 15
Mark my words
Vignettes on signs, symbols that grace our writing
Meet my friends, Ampersand and Pilcrow.
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TheAmericanCopyEditorsSocietyhas
formedanalliancewiththeEditors’As-
sociationofCanadathatwilloffermembers
ofeachorganizationmoreopportunitiesfor
trainingandprofessionaldevelopment.
Amongtheopportunitieswillbegiving
membersofeachorganizationaccesstothe
other’snationalorganizedeventsatadis-
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annualconferenceJune6-8inToronto.
“ACEScontinuestoextenditsreachin-
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  • 1. NEWSLETTER OF THE AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY VOL. 17 ISSUE 2 • MAY-JUNE 2014 • ONLINE @ COPYDESK.ORG ACES TAKES LEADERSHIP ROLE Society joins with SPJ to focus on strengthening media industry. ON PAGE 4 BUSTING MYTHS IN VEGAS BY MATTHEW CROWLEY ACES member since 2002 Elvis hadn’t left the building; he’d just arrived. And a Planet Hollywood Resort ballroom full of copy editors was delighted. Craig Silverman of the Poynter Institute had just finished his keynote at the 18th American Copy Editors Society Conference, urging his audience to vet the dubious and protect the truth. And, he said, Las Vegas notwithstanding, Elvis was still dead. Or maybe not. To Silverman’s apparent shock, the King of Rock ’n’ Roll bounded onstage. Eyes shaded by dark sunglasses, body encased in white jumpsuit, he shook his hips and flapped his lips. That’s Vegas, baby. Elvis’ comeback, without even a séance, temporarily rendered mythical the long-standing notion that he’d died (or ever aged). But long before Presley’s proxy, ACES’ Niko Dugan, belted songs and busted moves, myths had busted all over the conference. It was enough to leave the 330-plus attendees all shook up, or at least with suspicious minds. First, conferencegoers busted the myth that flashing slots and glowing neon would outdraw ACES sessions. Standing-room-only classes in grammar, lexicographical history and usage proved this. Second, research by Wayne State University’s Fred Vultee continues to dash the notion that the post-first, post- fast digital era had rendered copydesks superfluous. “Some people may think that this conference is just a bunch of crazy, uptight grammar freaks crying in the desert, fighting for punctuation and subjunctive clause justice in an uncaring, unfeeling world,” ACES President Teresa Schmedding said. “The world has long debated our value. … It mystifies me that people still continue to argue in this day and age that we’re not important, and I think it’s because it’s difficult to measure the absence of something.” As ACES busted myths, NCAA brackets busted for throngs of basketball fans packed into a gallery next to the convention space. Cheers sometimes seeped into meeting rooms, contributing to a uniquely Vegas-in-March din of dinging machines, blasting rock and blathering basketball analysts. A major point of copy editor analysis, and social media outrage, came as Associated Press Stylebook editors David Minthorn and Darrell Christian announced “over” would henceforth be acceptable as a synonym for “more than” when used with numbers. It took mere seconds for the news to reach Poynter and for one Twitter wit to quip, “More than my dead body.” And Christian said this wasn’t a ACES2014allshookupoverstyle,dictionariesandprotectingthetruth INSIDE ACES2014awardees PAGES8,13 Sessionrecaps PAGES10-12 ACES2015 PAGE3 MARK ALLEN PHOTO Elvis (aka Niko Dugan) serenades the crowd during the ACES 2014 conference banquet on March 21 in Las Vegas. VEGAS CONTINUES ON PAGE 6
  • 2. Thanks to all of you, your en- thusiasm and thirst for knowl- edge, our national conference in Las Vegas was a screaming success. I would like to especially thank all the more than 70 speakers who donated their time and expertise. And the volunteers who toil behind the scenes for nothing but our undying gratitude.  If you think it’s time to relax now that the big show is over, you’re wrong. We are gearing up for a lot more training in 2014. This year, we’ll be hosting regional conferences in Chi- cago, Omaha, Pittsburgh, Palm Springs, Nashville and Mon- treal. We’re also experimenting with social events. Karen Mart- wick is planning a copy editor trivia night in Portland.   We’re also continuing to offer you online training in conjunction with the Poyn- ter Institute. I’ll be doing a webinar on managing creative people. Also coming up is Lisa McLendon (trimming content), Neil Holdway (math) and Sue Burzynski Bullard (curating content). Plus, we’ve got the copy editing certificate courses.  Gerri Berendzen continues to provide great training through our #ACESchat on Twitter. ACES is also leading the charge for better collabora- tion among journalism orga- nizations. We’ve invited the presidents of other major U.S. journalism organizations to meet with us in Nashville this fall for a leadership summit. Our goal is to see how we can work together to better serve our members and help the journalism industry. So hang on to your edit- ing hats. We’re just getting started ... 2 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG FROM THE PRESIDENT NEWSLETTER OF THE AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 7 Avenida Vista Grande, Suite B7 #467, Santa Fe, NM 87508-9199 MAY-JUNE 2014 Vol. 17, ISSUE 2 EDITOR Gerri Berendzen ASSOCIATE EDITOR Christine Steele CONTRIBUTORS Naïf Bartlett John Braun Paul Chevannes Matthew Crowley Samantha Enslen Margaux Henquinet Kaitlyn Klein Peter Parisi David Sullivan Robert Trishman FEEDBACK newsletter@ copydesk.org TheAmericanCopyEditors Society,thenation’sleading organizationofediting professionals,educatorsand students,isdedicatedtoimproving thequalityofcommunication andtheworkinglivesofeditors. Wesetstandardsofexcellence andgiveavoicetoeditorsin journalism,government,business andbeyondthroughtop-notch training,networkingandcareer opportunities. ACES’ MISSION ADMINISTRATOR Carol DeMasters administrator@copydesk.org Mark Allen Freelance editor (614) 961-9666 markallen@copydesk.org Gerri Berendzen Quincy Herald-Whig (217) 221-3371 gberendzen @copydesk.org John Braun Vanguard Group (267) 294-5368 johnb@copydesk.org David Brindley National Geographic (202) 857-7214 davidbrindley @copydesk.org Sue Burzynski Bullard University of Nebraska (402) 472-7110 sbullard@copydesk.org Samantha Enslen Dragonfly Editorial (937) 216-9323 sam@copydesk.org Karen Martwick Travel Portland, Oregon (503) 275-9280 karen@copydesk.org Regina McDowell Department of Defense (301) 821-1628 regina@copydesk.org Merrill Perlman ACES Education Fund President Merrill Perlman Consulting (917) 696-3567 meperl@copydesk.org Christine Steele, Director of Membership The Capital Group (213) 615-0528 csteele@copydesk.org Fred Vultee Wayne State University (313) 577-6302 fredvultee @copydesk.org EXECUTIVE COMMITTEE Teresa Schmedding, President Daily Herald, suburban Chicago (847) 427-4574 tschmedding@copydesk.org David Sullivan, Vice President The Philadelphia Inquirer (215) 854-2357 dsullivan@copydesk.org Neil Holdway, Treasurer Daily Herald, suburban Chicago (847) 427-4573 nholdway@copydesk.org Brady Jones, Secretary Omaha World-Herald (402) 444-1277 bradyjones@copydesk.org EXECUTIVE OFFICERS TERESA SCHMEDDING was elected president of the society in March 2010. She is deputy managing editor/ digital at the Daily Herald Media Group, overseeing its website and the copy desks. Email her at tschmedding@ copydesk.org. Trainingdoesn’tstopwithconference If you’re reading this, you’re already aware of the big change in the ACES newsletter. We’ve moved from paper and mail delivery to an electronic edition. The ACES Executive Committee voted to switch newsletter delivery to an electronic format. Members will receive an email four times a year with a link to download a PDF of the newsletter from a secure site. With ACES membership at a record level, this new PDF newsletter will certainly be greener. And switching to electronic delivery will save the society about $8,000 a year in printing and mailing costs. All of the other work on the newsletter is done by volunteers, with no cost to the society. The PDF format and size is perfect for e-readers and tablets, and the PDFs can viewed on any computer or smartphone with free PDF- reading software. And with each page at letter size, it’s easy for those who prefer to hold paper in hand to print out a copy. If you have any questions about the new system, please email newsletter@copydesk.org. ABOUT THE NEW ACES NEWSLETTER
  • 3. PHOTO COURTESY OF VISITPITTSBURGH Pittsburgh, which is the site of the confluence of the Monongahela and Allegheny Rivers, has a lot of nicknames and one is the City of Bridges. You’ll be able to see some of the city’s 446 bridges at ACES 19th national conference March 26-28 in Pittsburgh. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 3 If you missed our conference in Las Vegas — or even if you didn’t — join us at an ACES Editing Boot Camp this summer and fall. ACES presenters will be traveling the country, spreading the gospel of careful edit- ing and proofreading. At Boot Camp, we’ll help you to: • understand gram- mar and punctuation basics; • set and manage an editorial style; • enhance clarity and readability; • ensure accuracy; • and, explain to your boss why editing is important! Here’s our schedule: ACESEditingBoot Camps Aug.5— Montreal, in conjunction with the Association for Educa- tion in Journalism and Mass Communication annual conference. Aug.22 — Chicago Sept.4 — Nashville, in conjunction with the Society for Profession- al Journalism annual conference. Oct.30 — Palm Springs, California, in conjunction with the Journalism and Women Symposium annual conference. Nov.8— Omaha, Nebraska. ACESAdvanced EditingBootCamps OctoberTBD — Washington, D.C. To register, go to workshops.copydesk. org/events. ACESSETS REGIONAL WORKSHOPS Steal away to Pittsburgh By JOHN BRAUN ACES Executive Committee member It’s the Steel City, the home- town of Heinz, and Mister Rogers’ neighborhood. And next March, Pittsburgh will garner a new distinction: as host of the 2015 ACES na- tional conference. Registration has already be- gun for the conference, which will take place March 26 to 28 at the Wyndham Grand Pitts- burgh Downtown. Right across the street from the historic Point State Park where the Al- legheny and Monongahela riv- ers meet to form the Ohio, the hotel is offering a promotional rate of $149 for the conference. Add in that early registrants can book the 2015 conference at the 2014 price, and there’s no reason not to go ahead and sign up now at www.copydesk.org/ national-conference. As you make your travel plans, remember that Pitts- burgh may be closer than you think — just a stone’s throw from Ohio and less than half a day’s drive from Washington, Baltimore, Philadelphia and New York. And if you want to present a session at the conference, you can nab a prime spot on the schedule by emailing your proposal to any of the ACES conference committee mem- bers: Karen Martwick, David Brindley and John Braun. So, as you enjoy spring 2014, firm up your plans to get spring 2015 off to an excellent start by joining us in Pitts- burgh. ACES19thnationalconferencetakesplace wherethe AlleghenyandMonongahelameet
  • 4. 4 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG TheUniversityofNebraska–Lincolnisanequalopportunityeducatorandemployer.©2014,TheBoardofRegentsoftheUniversityofNebraska.Allrightsreserved.GDP_CJM407.14 Be Digital. Be Strategic. Be Marketable. online.unl.edu/aces2014 Earn your M.A. I 100% Online Integrated Media Communications Professional Journalism I Media Studies The American Copy Editors Society is collaborating with the Society of Profes- sional Journalists this fall to bring together journalism organizations to create a uni- fied force in the rapidly changing media industry. ACES and SPJ will be holding a leader- ship summit at the Excellence in Journal- ism Conference Sept. 4-6 in Nashville. “The more we stand together, the stron- ger we are — whether it’s on training or large scale issues affecting our industry,” said Teresa Schmedding, ACES president. “Now, more than ever, journalism organi- zations need to work together toward our common goals, which is why I wanted to bring an event like this leadership summit to fruition. “The days of suspicion and competition are passing. If we want to help journalism, then our organizations need to collaborate as a team.” Last year ACES led a team representing several journalism organizations in put- ting together a summit to fight plagiarism and fabrication. And efforts among the So- ciety of Professional Journalists, Investi- gative Reporters and Editors, the National Association of Hispanic Journalists, the Radio-Television Digital News Associa- tion and other groups have demonstrated the inherent power of industry collabora- tion. “Despite the efforts of our individual groups over the years; media credibility has continued to deteriorate, newsroom diversity hasn’t improved, governments are more secret than ever, and journalists are struggling to find and afford the train- ing they need. No individual journalism organization can fix these problems,” said David Cuillier, SPJ president. “Turning the tide and restoring the important role of journalism in democracy will take all of us working together.” ACES has invited the presidents of all the major journalism organizations in the United States to EIJ for a roundtable dis- cussion on the greatest challenges facing media organizations and the industry and suggestions for how to solve these chal- lenges through collaboration. ACES and SPJ will survey the presi- dents in advance to build a framework for the summit. Representatives from the following or- ganizations already have confirmed they will attend: American Copy Editors Soci- ety; American Society of Business Press Editors; the Native American Journalist Association; the Society for News Design; the American Society of News Editors; Investigative Reporters and Editors; the Radio, Television, Digital News Asso- ciation; and the Society for Professional Journalists. ACESurgesjournaliststojoinforces Society, SPJ host leadership summit focused on strengthening media industry
  • 5. COPYEDITING A solid background in the basic tools and techniques of copyediting is one of today’s most desirable and marketable skills for both full-time and freelance work. Hone your skills and learn to bridge the gap between writers, editors, publishers and readers in our online Copyediting Specialized Certificate. extension.ucsd.edu/copyediting ahl@ucsd.edu | 858.534.5760 MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 5 BY DAVID SULLIVAN ACES vice president One new face will join the ACES Executive Committee as a result of this year’s elections, the first under a new format with a single vice president. David Brindley, managing editor of National Geographic magazine, is the new member of the Executive Committee. He was elected to a two- year term. That new board format also left the office of secretary open, and the Executive Committee voted to fill the vacant position with former board member Brady Jones of the Omaha World-Herald. Re-elected to two-year terms were incumbents freelance editor Mark Allen, Gerri Berendzen of the Quincy Herald- Whig, Sue Bullard of the University of Nebraska, Karen Martwick of Travel Portland, and Fred Vultee of Wayne State University. Christine Steele of the Capital Group, who had been vice president for membership, was elected to a three-year term on the Executive Committee as a result of receiving the highest number of votes for the board. Teresa Schmedding of the Daily Herald in Chicago was elected to a third two-year term as president of the society. David Sullivan of the Philadelphia Inquirer, who had been secretary, was elected to the new post of vice president. Under the board’s new format, membership, conferences, communications and other major areas of the society’s activities will be headed by board-appointed directors or chairs, with the president and vice president variously overseeing the directors and chairs. Because Sullivan had a year left on his term as secretary, the board — under the bylaws — was empowered to fill an officer vacancy, using the same criteria required for candidates for officer positions in the election. Jones was appointed on April 9 and will serve as secretary until next year’s elections. On Dec. 15, nominations will open for the positions of secretary, treasurer, and three executive committee seats. ACES encourages any member in good standing to consider helping to guide the organization by seeking the posts for which they are qualified. The next election will be from Feb. 15 to 28, 2015. CHRISTINE STEELE MARK ALLEN GERRI BERENDZEN SUE BULLARD KAREN MARTWICK BRADY JONES DAVID SULLIVAN FRED VULTEE 2014 ACES elections DAVID BRINDLEY TERESA SCHMEDDING
  • 6. 6 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG bombshell announcement. This ACES conference focused on the increasingly digital delivery of information, with sessions on reporting with LinkedIn, engaging readers behind paywalls and editing online content for search engine optimization. The three-day gathering was social — both virtually, with hundreds of ACES moments tweeted live at #ACES2014 — and physically. Business cards got swapped in Planet Hollywood’s upstairs conference rooms as fast as chips flew on the gambling tables in the casino below. Old friendships deepened and new ones formed. Copy editing celebrities, including New York Times retiree Merrill Perlman, Grammar Girl Mignon Fogarty, The Washington Post’s Bill Walsh, The Baltimore Sun’s John McIntyre, returned and other guests added fresh star power. The San Diego Zoo sent Debbie Andreen, Karyl Carmignani and Mary Sekulovich, copy editors from its Zoonooz magazine. They described landing their jobs (“The three of us of kind of weaseled our way in”) and the thrill of learning about animals and unique headline possibilities. (“If you can get ‘poop’ into a headline, you’re good.”) Lexicographers also shined. Merriam-Webster’s Kory Stamper and Peter Sokolowski, with Steve Kleinedler of Houghton Mifflin Harcourt, the publisher of American Heritage and Webster’s New World Dictionaries, kept packed rooms rapt describing the history of dictionaries, usage dictionaries and hyphenation rules across dictionaries. In her usage dictionaries session, Stamper encouraged copy desks to use multiple references, relying, say, on both the slightly prescriptivist Garner’s Modern American Usage and the slightly descriptivist Merriam- Webster’s Dictionary of English Usage. No usage dictionary, or copy editor, is wholly descriptivist or prescriptivist, Stamper said; they’re always both. Often, she said, deciding what to use will be slightly squishy, based on an editor’s judgment. “Good copy editors consider their audience; they consider the tone of their publication; they weigh that against the work of the author,” she said. “They also need to be sensitive to a writer’s voice; they need to be aware of the peculiarities of a writer’s style.” Beyond techniques and tactics, the conference emphasized the fight for truth. The society screened “A Fragile Trust,” a movie about the Jayson Blair plagiarism scandal at The New York Times; offered sessions on fighting link-related deception; and presented the insights of Silverman, author of “Regret the Error.” Before anyone reported Elvis’ resurrection, Silverman would have urged vetting. Otherwise, rumors could start. Rumors have existed as long as people have, Silverman said. And often, they’re less about someone lying than someone trying to discern truth. Fiction can be stranger than truth. For example, he said, in the 1990s, a rumor spread that beverage maker Snapple somehow supported the Ku Klux Klan. This emerged, Silverman said, because the label on the company’s beverage bottles featured an 18th century-style ship and a circled letter “K.” The logic went that the ship was the kind that ferried African slaves and the K was a nod to the Klan. But the ideas were ridiculous, Silverman said. “Snapple was started by three Jewish guys in Brooklyn,” he said. The pictured ship, he said, was from the Boston Tea Party. And the K simply meant the product was kosher. Fighting off rumors, or outright lies, matters particularly now, Silverman suggested, because powerful, well-financed entities will manufacture doubt to further their economic interests. In the past, Silverman said, tobacco ads warned against cigarettes’ perils but pictured a doctor smoking one. (How bad could smoking really be?) These days, he said, some entities (including corporations) try to sow doubt about climate change, although scientific consensus corroborates its existence. Copy editors, he said, are well positioned to expose this chicanery, Silverman said. First, he said, they know how to use tools, like corroborated statistics, vetted studies and the new, free- to-download Verification Handbook, to dispel falsehoods. They can also use their voices and instincts. Copy editors, Silverman said, examine text counterintuitively and interrogate it in ways writers might not consider. “This is your ability to hack your brains in a way, to see things that other people don’t and to try to see the skeletons of it, what are the sources and where does this come from and can we do better than this?” he said. “That ability … is an incredibly valuable skill because you can spot bullshit before other people do. “And if you can spot it and get rid of it, then other people don’t have to see it,” he added. “And that’s a very good thing.” Matthew Crowley is a copy editor for the Las Vegas Review- Journal. Reach him at matthew_ crowley@copydesk.org or follow him on Twitter at @copyjockey. VEGAS:Copyeditorswellpositionedtoexposechicanery CONTINUED FROM PAGE 1 MARK ALLEN PHOTO Craig Silverman of the Poynter Institute talks about copy editors as rumor smashers during the 2014 conference keynote address March 21.
  • 7. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 7 SCENESFROMACES18THNATIONALCONFERENCE MARK ALLEN PHOTO Erin Brenner of Copyediting.com, left, looks on as freelance copy editor Dawn McIlvain Stahl makes a point during the Freelancer Forum. MARK ALLEN PHOTO ConferenceattendeeslookovertheitemsupforbidattheACESEducation Fundsilentauction.Proceedsgotowardscholarshipsforcopyeditingstudents. MARK ALLEN PHOTO LEFT:OutgoingVicePresident/ConferencesLisaMcLendonispresentedwithrosesatthe closeoftheconference.ABOVE:Attendeeslistentooneofthebreakoutsessionpresenters.CHRISTINE STEELE PHOTO MARK ALLEN PHOTOS TheACESEducationFundspellingbee,heldthenightbeforetheconference began,raised$831forscholarships.ABOVE:Contestantslinethefrontof therowasthebeebegins.RIGHT:BeewinnerAmyGoldsteinlistenstoher wordasrunner-upLisaMcLendonlookson. SEE MORE CONFERENCE PHOTOS ON THE ACES2014 FLICKR GROUP
  • 8. 8 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG Greatheadlinesearncopyeditorscash,kudos Over 180 years of tradition and innovation. Unabridged BRITANNICA DIGITAL LEARNING Advanced Search The Blog Word Games Word of the Day Style Guide Welcome to the New Unabridged! Learn More WORD OF THE DAY nonchalant : having an air of easy unconcern or indifference... more » MOST POPULAR The most frequently looked up words: Past 24 hours 1. duplicity 2. pilfer 3. culture 4. nostalgia 5. irony 6. ethic 7. synonym 8. empathy 9. metaphor 10. pedantic Past 7 Days 1. pilfer 2. metaphor 3. culture 4. irony 5. pedantic 6. effect 7. skit 8. ethic 9. empathy 10. socialism View all » RECENT ADDITIONS altered state of consciousness (noun) Any of various states of awareness (such as... application programming interface (noun) A set of rules that allows programmers to... ace (noun) The best pitcher on a baseball team aqua aerobics (noun) Aerobics performed in water and especially... after-the-fact (adjective) Occurring, done, or made after something... [+] more Reference: Search Type: Main Entry For more options, use Advanced Search. Podcasting from the Vault Turning the information found in a dictionary into a comprehensible spoken-word presentation isn’t easy. Actually, let’s back up and say that speaking out loud at all doesn’t come naturally to [...] more » Merriam-Webster’s Editor At Large A Thing About Words:The Blog Trend Watch Recent Videos “Gossamer” A federal judge ruled that NSA collection of telephone ... “Metaphor” As students prepare for exams at the end of the semester ... “Intransigence” As Congress passed a bipartisan budget deal ... Search the Unabridged Dictionary Merriam-Webster Inc. Merriam-Webster.com • Merriam-WebsterUnabridged.com • LearnersDictionary.com ACES announced the winners of its annual headline contest during the opening session of the 18th annual conference in Las Vegas. ACES’ premier contest aims to reward good headline writing in newspapers, nonnewspaper publications, websites, and now even Twitter. Individual winners in professional categories could win up to $300. Winners in student categories could win up to $125. Winning headlines were published in 2013. To view PDFs of the winning headlines, go online to the headline contest story on vegas.copydesk.org and click on the title of the entry category. First place winners were: 200+ circulation, INDIVIDUAL Jim Webster, The Washington Post 100-200 circulation, INDIVIDUAL Rich Mills, Omaha World-Herald 0-100 circulation, INDIVIDUAL Peter Donahue, Providence Journal ONLINE, INDIVIDUAL Gael Fashingbauer Cooper, Today.com. NON-NEWSPAPER, INDIVIDUAL Hugh Garvey, Playboy 200+ circulation, STAFF San Francisco Chronicle 100-200 circulation, STAFF The Virginian-Pilot 0-100 circulation, STAFF Daily Herald ONLINE, STAFF NPR STUDENT, STAFF The Daily Tar Heel • http://vegas.copydesk.org/great-headlines-earn-copy-edi- tors-cash-and-kudos-in-annual-aces-contest/ WINNERS LIST ONLINE
  • 9. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 9 Conference attendees have fun while raising scholarship dollars By KAITLYN KLEIN ACES student member, University of Kansas Copyeditors fill the room across the hall from the banquet, ACES President Teresa Schmedding shouts, “15 minutes” and the chatter continues. In 15 minutes, the bidding ends at the silent auction of more than 200 items donated to help raise money for the ACES Education Fund. The result: nearly $4,000 from the bidding. Add that to the $575 raised in a live auc- tion for a donated iPad, $836 raised in Wednesday night’s spelling bee and $7,800 from table donation pledges, and that’s more than $13,500 raised for scholarships. And the fundraising con- tinued after the conference. ACES 2014 presenter Steve Buttry, digital transforma- tion editor at Digital First Media, did a crowdsourced fundraiser for the ACES Education Fund on a dare from Washington Post columnist Gene Weingarten. Weingarten wanted Buttry to change the name of his blog, The Buttry Diary. Weingarten tweeted asking his followers to “to overwhelm @stevebuttry with entreaties to REALLY change the blog to ‘Mmm. Smooth, Buttry Goodness.’ It’s way butter. Er, better.” So Buttry started a Crowd- rise campaign to change the name with the money going to the ACES Education fund. The campaign raised $725 for the Education Fund before Buttry returned to the blog’s original name after a month. Currently, the Education Fund funds five scholar- ships a year for a total of $6,500. However, Merrill Perlman, president of the ACES Education Fund, hopes that ACES can expand its scholarship offerings in the future. The generosity of ACES members and friends can make that happen. So what great items did you miss at the auction? Cutest prize — A stuffed momma and baby panda and tote from the San Diego Zoo. Vegas souvenir — Typo’ed Vegas shirt. For the 21 and up members — Acronym wine. Celebrity swag — signed copies of Grammar Girl’s word lists. It’s the New York Times — my personal favorite N.Y. Times swag was the totes, but there were also some great crossword-themed items. Best bling — who doesn’t want a semicolon dangling from each ear? Comic relief — no one appreciates a grammar joke more than the attendees of ACES. If you plan to come back to the ACES gathering next year, be sure to keep your eye out for items like these that your fellow copy editors might enjoy. Save them, donate them and buy them, while also contributing to a great cause.
  • 10. 10 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG By MARGAUX HENQUINET ACESstudentmember,UniversityofMissouri Asanassociateeditorandgeneralde- fineratMerriam-Webster,KoryStamper answersmanyemailsfromconsumers,a jobthatsometimesrequireshertotakeon whatshecalls“hot-buttonlexicographical issues.” Peoplesendallkindsofemailsabout dictionarymatters.Somesaydefinitions areunclear.Somewanttohavewords removed. Someemailaboutwordstheyfindof- fense.Whensame-sexmarriagewasadded tothedefinitionofmarriage,about5,000 emailscamein,Stampersaid. Butit’snotallseriousbusiness;some emailsareeasiertolaughabout.Oneman, Stampersaid,wantstoabolishtheword “homonym”—hesays“homophone”and “homograph”dothejobjustfine. InaMarch21presentationatACES2014 nationalconferencetitled“Everything You’veEverWantedtoKnowAboutDic- tionaries,”StamperandPeterSokolowski ofMerriam-WebsterandSteveKleinedler ofHoughtonMifflinHarcourtoffereda behind-the-sceneslookattheworldof dictionaries. LikeMerriam-Webster’sinbox,their presentationwaspartserious,partfun;they outlinedthehistoryofdictionaries,offered usagetipsanddrewmanylaughs. Dictionariesareconstantswhereeditors work,whetherinprintoronline.Butit’snot alwaysnoticedhowmuchtheychange,how manynewwordsareaddedeveryyear. Peoplefocusonthefewexcitingnew ones,but“that’sjustthetipoftheiceberg,” Kleinedlersaid. Newsreleasescomeoutaboutfunwords like“selfie”beingadded,butalotofnew wordscomefromresearchersorconsul- tantswhotellthemwhattheyaremissing, hesaid. “Alotofnewrootsthatenterinaren’tall thatsexy,”Kleinedlersaid.“They’renotthat funtotalkabout,they’renotthatexciting, butthey’reimportant.” Dictionarywebsitesdopublishwords thatarenotyetintheprintedversion. KleinedlersaidtheAmericanHeritage Dictionarydoesasubstantialsiteupdate twiceayear,andStampersaidMerriam- Webster’sfreeonlinedictionaryisupdated onceayear. Thepresenterstooktheiraudience throughalessonindictionaryhistory, tellingstoriesofpastpopularandunpopu- lardictionariesandgivinganoverviewof therecentconsolidationofthedictionary industry. Whyaretheresomanydifferentdiction- aries?Inthe’50s,’60sand’70s,publishing companiesproducedthembecausethought theywouldbeagoodsourceofincome, Kleinedlersaid. Editionsstartedshuttingdowninthelate ’90s,buttherearestillmanyonthemarket today,andtheonesthatremaincanbequite differentintermsofwhattheydoandhow theyareintendedtobeused. TaketheOxfordEnglishDictionaryand MerriamWebster’sCollegiateDictionary, forexample.Workersatthetwocompanies dothesamekindofresearchbutproduce dictionarieswithdifferentfunctions,So- kolowskisaid. TheOxfordEnglishDictionaryisdia- chronic,whichmeansthatitmeasuresthe progressoflanguageovertime,hesaid. Merriam-Webster’sCollegiateDictionary, ontheotherhand,issynchronic,meaningit triestopresentasnapshotofthecurrent,ac- tivevocabularyofmodernEnglish.Essen- tially,Merriam-Webster’sfocusesondefini- tionswhiletheOEDfocusesonhistory. Stamperexplainedthatdictionaries canoperatedifferently,too,byindicat- ingelementssuchasvariantspellingsor preferredpronunciationindifferentways, forexample.Sherecommendedreadingthe book’sfrontmattertolearnhoweverything works. Whenitcomestochoosingwhichspell- ingstouseforwords,Kleinedlersaidthe importantthingistobeconsistent,andto followyourstyleguideorhousestyle. Atonepoint,anaudiencememberasked howcanyoucreateasynchronicdictionary whendictionariestakesolongtocreate? Consumersshouldbeawarethatthe workofproducingadictionaryneverends, Kleinedlerresponded,andthatittakesa while. “Justkeepinmindthatthedictionaryis therearviewmirror,”Sokolowskiadded. Oftenwordsthey’reconsideringadding arewordsyoualreadyknow,hesaid. So,withsomanypublishersandtypesof dictionaryavailable,whichshouldyouget foryourstaff? Kleinedlersaiditdependsonwhatyou’re doing. First,lookatthecopyrightpageandsee howoldthedictionaryis.A10-year-old dictionarywon’tbetoobad,hesaid,but don’tchoosesomethingthatcamefroman unknownsourceinthe1920s. Then,hesaid,lookthroughthediction- aryandseewhat’susefulorwhatappealsto you.There’snoone-size-fits-allanswerto whichdictionaryyoushoulduse. The definitionofaword-lover’ssession MARK ALLEN PHOTO Fromleft,KoryStamperofMerriam-Webster,SteveKleinedlerofHoughtonMifflin HarcourtandPeterSokolowskiofMerriam-Websterfieldquestionsaboutdictionaries duringanACES2014sessioninLasVegas.
  • 11. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 11 By ROBERT TRISHMAN ACES member since 2013 Providingattributionandlinkstoin- formationinonlinecopyismorethanjust theright,ethicalthingtodo—italsohelps raiseawebsite’sprofile,authorityandcred- ibility. ThatwastheadmonitionofKarenMar- twick’sACES2014presentation“Linking Attribution,AggregationandPlagiarism– CredibilityintheDigitalAge” Martwick,editorandcontentstrategist forTravelPortland,outlinedwhyattri- butionmatters,whenandwheretolink forattribution,therightwaytolinkout, andtoolsforverificationandplagiarism prevention. Shesaidattributionandlinkingareim- portantforanyonewhopostscopyonline. “Youneedtoapplythesamerigorous standardstoonlineasyouwouldtoaprint piece,”Martwicksaid. “Whetheryou’reworkinginjournalism ornot,attributionisvitaltomaintaining yourcredibilityandmaintainingyouraudi- ence,”sheadded. Plagiarismcanbeadangerwhenrepro- ducingpressreleasesverbatim,Martwick said. “Copyandpastehappens,andit’sconve- nient,”shesaid. However,shereferredtothebook“Tell- ing the Truth and Nothing But,” published in2013fortheAmericanCopyEditors Society,specificallytoguidelinesfrom thechapter “ShowyourWork”bySteve Buttry. “Whenyoucopyandpaste,beforeyou pasteit…alwayscheckthesource,”the chapterreads. Ifcopyingandpastingfromapress releaseontoyourwebsite,settingaside thepassageinquotemarks—orinblock quotes,forWordPressusers—withalink isagoodpractice,butit’sbettertowrite newcopybasedontheinformationinthe release. It’simportanttoletreadersandeditors checkoutthesourceforthemselves,she said. Whileavoidingplagiarismisavital reasontoattribute,Martwicksaid,adding authoritativelinksalsocanhelpawebsite’s SEOperformance. Sheillustratedwhatconstitutesan authoritativelinkwithawebpagesheput togetheraboutOregon’sMultnomahFalls. Martwicksaidshewantedtoprovidealink aboutthefalls.AGooglesearchyielded whatshecalledseveral“spammy”results, butsheultimatelydecidedontheU.S.For- estService’sofficialpageforthenaturesite. Martwicksaidthatlinkingtoreliable sitesprovidescontext,acknowledgesoth- ers’work,showsthatyou’vedoneyour research,andestablishesyourauthority. “Ifyouvalueyourreaders,youshould givethemaccesstotheinformationyou usedtocreateyourpage,”shesaid. Thisinstanceprovedvaluableinthepage onTravelPortland’swebsite.Martwick saidtherewasalinktoabridgethat’spart ofthefallsarea,butitwasdamagedbya fallingboulder,soshehadtogobackand updatethestory,addingalinktothesource thatbrokethestoryandaforestservice alertlink. Martwickcautioned,however,against usinglinksinonlinecopyjustforthesake ofusinglinks.Sheofferedguidelineson whenlinksshouldbeused. Linksaremostuseful,shesaid,when readersmightGoogleareference,ifone ormorephrasesareusedverbatimfroma source,whenanothersourceprovidesgood information,or,particularlyforjournalism, whenanothersourcebrokethestory. “Putyourselfintheuser’splaceandask, ‘AmImakingitcleareroramImakingit moreconfusingforthem?’”Martwicksaid. Whenlinksareused,shesaid,they shouldbetothemostrelevantpagepos- sible,whichMartwicksaidisa“deeplink” ratherthanjusttoahomepage.Links shouldalsoleadtoreliableandauthorita- tivesources,tooriginalsources,andto relatedinformationonyourownsite,or internallinks. Includingoutboundlinkstoauthorita- tive“non-spammy”sites,shesaid,raises yoursite’svalueinGoogle’seyes,increases oddsofreciprocallinks,and“atthevery leastitdoesn’thurtyourSEO.” Also,linksrequiregood“anchortext,” concise,descriptivephrasesorsentences thattellyouwhatyou’relinkingto,busi- nessandpublicationnames,andthefirst referenceofanyURLinyourcopy. Martwickrecommended“The Veri- fication Handbook,”editedbyPoynter Institute’sCraigSilverman,forverifying digitalcontent,availableforfreedownload atverificationhandbook.com. “Youarekindofthegatekeeperthat needstostandupandletpeopleknowit’s notOK”toleaveorperpetuateerrorsona website,Martwicksaid. RobertTrishmanisacopyeditoratthe DeseretNewsinSaltLakeCity,Utah. Posting,linkingandattributing When editors provide reliable links it gives readers context, acknowledges other’s work ACES members will have an opportunity to get discounted training on reader engagement and online corrections through the Poynter Institute’s News University. Members can view the replay of “9 Ways You Drive Readers Away,” which was held May 7, and attend “Online and Social Media Corrections” on May 22 through the ACES member discount program. Using the ACES webinar code, members pay only $9.95. This is a $20 discount. Use code: 12PACES995 - See more at: http://www.copydesk.org/blog/2014/04/30/newsu-webinars-on-reader-engagement-online-corrections-discounted- for-aces-members ACES DISCOUNTS ON NEWSU WEBINARS
  • 12. 12 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG By NAÏF BARTLETT ACES student member, University of Missouri Nobody’s perfect. If copy editors were, we wouldn’t need a constantly updated stylebook to keep us in line. If everyone else were, they wouldn’t need copy editors to keep them in line. As the mass tweeting over The As- sociated Press’ new rules on the usage of “more than” and “over” showed, we copy editors love rules, and old habits die hard. The bustling nature of journalism is counterproductive to the work we do and the rules we try to master. Sometimes it can be just as easy for veterans to make mistakes as it is for rookies. Everyone develops blind spots. The Washington Post’s Bill Walsh spoke about some blind spots at the ACES 2014 national conference. Here are some tips Walsh gave to help veterans avoid easy mistakes: • Watch subject and verb agree- ment: Watch out for sentences with multiple nouns. “Bob is one of those people who hates cats.” Apart from Bob’s unnecessary negativity toward little, furry geniuses, Bob would be one of those people who hate cats. Walsh made the point that grammar sticklers will want to pick the first, but the second has the correct verb agreement. • Watch out for danglers. • Be specific:  “An Illinois senator introduced a tax cut bill last January.” Which January? Walsh said close to an equal number of copy editors will argue for January of this year or January of last year. • Adjectives of equal weight get commas: “A big, fat lie.” No, this rule isn’t a lie. “Big” and “fat” equally modify “lie” and need a comma. • Hyphenate with care: Walsh touched on these twice. First, copy edi- tors know adverbs ending in -ly don’t need a hyphen before another word. However, make sure you are dealing with an adverb. “Early-morning rain” needs a hyphen. Second, be careful when adding hyphens to multiple modi- fiers. Walsh used these as examples: Anti-child abuse plans A town hall- style meeting A non-high school friend An anti-gay discrimination bill Because adding one hyphen can create ambiguity, Walsh recommended adding both. • Watch the “The”: Proper names may capitalize the “The” — as in “The Tonight Show” and “The Washington Post” — but you don’t need to in the middle of a sentence. There are also times when it is appropriate to drop the word completely. • Use caution when cutting “that” out: Taking out the word “that” can mislead the reader for a few seconds. He declared his love for her… had died. • Cops talk like cops: They’ll say a suspect was transported to a local hos- pital. Wait, you mean the suspect wasn’t taken to a hospital 200 miles away? “Oh, what a novel idea,” Walsh said in his presentation. There’s no need to use cop-speak in stories.  While Walsh was on the subject of cops, he also brought up the inconsis- tencies and contradictions with the word “suspect.” He pointed out that stories will provide the police’s descrip- tion of the suspect, and then they will end with, “Police have no suspects.” Journalists constantly reach for the word “suspect,” Walsh said, because of the fear of libel for calling somebody a killer. However, if a story says, “The suspect did this and that,” and the story then says, “John Smith was arrested as a suspect,” it is still libeling him. • Don’t go backward in numbers: The measure failed, 48-52. The team lost, 90-91. Both of these examples are incorrect. Members of the audience brought up that they had seen this done many times, but Walsh (and most people in attendance) agreed it is the incorrect method. • Don’t mix typography with an official name: Journalists do not need to follow the conventions and typog- raphy used for titles of works of art such as books, songs and movies. For example, Pharrell Williams has a song called “G I R L.” Must news outlets put spaces in between every letter? Walsh: “No.” • Readers are stupid, but not that stupid: Any pointless addition that implies readers are stupid is unneces- sary. For example: (President Barack) Obama. Walsh also noted that ellipses in quotations are to be avoided, as are parenthetical notations — and a combi- nation of the two should be avoided at all costs. • Be careful when quoting dialects: There’s a risk of playing favorites here. Are you only going to quote lower- income people that way? “It’s ethically fraud,” Walsh said. While copy editors are creatures of habit, we aren’t necessarily opposed to change. Walsh drew applause from much of the audience when he professed near the end of his session to be a fan of the singular “they.” He also said he’d like to see “whom” phased out because it sounds antique. Old habits die hard, but when change is made in the name of copy-editing perfection, anything goes. BACKTOBASICS Bill Walsh shares some of the blind spots copy editors have MARK ALLEN PHOTO WashingtonPost multiplatformeditor BillWalshisauthor of“Lapsinginto aComma,”“The ElephantsofStyle,” and“Yes,ICouldCare Less.”
  • 13. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 13 And the honorees are ... Freelance copy editor, mentor Katharine O’Moore-Klopf wins Robinson Prize Many copy editors know Katharine O’Moore-Klopf even though they’ve never met her. O’Moore-Klopf has been a resource for copy editors long distance through her Copyeditors Knowledge Base online. That contribution to copy editors ev- erywhere is among the reasons freelance copy editor O’Moore-Klopf was selected as winner of the American Copy Editors’ 2013 Robinson Prize. The prize recognizes substantial con- tributions to the craft of copy editing and excellence in overall copy editing skills. O’Moore-Klopf received the award during the 18th annual ACES national conference Friday, March 21, in Las Vegas. O’Moore-Klopf, of Long Island, N.Y., has made helping others an intricate part of her job since she established her full- time freelancing business in 1995. She has focused on medical editing, and she has a reputation for working with foreign- language doctors and other scientists to publish important work in English- language journals. In late April, she will teach at the Jishuitan Orthopaedic Forum in Beijing, helping young physicians write better English and navigate the U.S. journal-publishing system. Maintaining and clari- fying the client’s voice, she says, is key to copy editing, she says on her website biography: ”In my first professional job, I was a reporter for a midsize Texas newspaper, where I observed talented editors polish- ing writers’ prose, including mine, without removing their voice from it. When I moved to the publishing industry, I was determined to do the same.” Her clients say her work reflects that determination. “Kathy is sensitive to giving my voice its fullest expression while she also skillfully and meticulously edits my work,” wrote author Gen LaGreca. “She is a great com- municator, as well, making it a joy to work with her. When Kathy has finished editing my work, I can be confident it will meet the highest professional standards and also reflect exactly what I want to say.” O’Moore-Klopf’s regularly updated Copyeditors’ Knowledge Base website at www.kokedit.com/ckb.php contains hundreds of annotated links; it may be the most useful index of its kind. One of the judges noted that “her website is a treasure trove of information from which editors the world over can benefit.” O’Moore-Klopf actively contributes to several copy-editing organizations, includ- ing ACES, the American Medical Writers Association, the Editorial Freelancers As- sociation, and the Board of Editors in the Life Sciences, for which she is a certified editor. She has contributed newsletter ar- ticles to these organizations, and she runs the Twitter account for BELS. Mark Long, for whom she edited several technical books when he was publisher at Texas State Technical College, wrote: “I can think of no better ambassador for the copy editing profession than Katharine O’Moore-Klopf.” The Robinson Prize, which was first awarded for the 2005 calendar year, is named for Pam Robinson, a cofounder of ACES and the society’s first president. The winner receives $3,000 and an engraved glass plaque. Alex Cruden honored with Glamann Award Alex Crudenwas named the sixth recipi- ent of the American Copy Editors Society’s Glamann Award at the Society’s national conference March 21 in Las Vegas. The Glamann Award is named for Hank Glamann, ACES co-founder and a former national board member. The award recog- nizes people and organizations that have contributed to the Society and the craft of copy editing. Each year’s recipient is cho- sen by the Executive Committee of ACES. Cruden retired from the Detroit Free Press in 2008 as its chief editor of the copy desks, ending a 35-year editing career with the paper that he started shortly after he graduated from Hamilton College in 1968. Cruden has led countless seminars at ACES conferences and workshops and elsewhere. He most notably moderated a session at several ACES conferences called “Inside Readers’ Heads,” where he invited aver- age readers to comment on headlines seen in newspapers. Welcoming readers’ candid views by emphasizing that what they say is always right, he provided news copy editors with valuable insights on how readers really respond to headlines, often contrary to the many rules copy editors had been taught for decades. Former Free Press colleagues praised Cruden as they recalled their years work- ing with him. “The way he conveyed his lessons wasn’t just that it was important to his rules or even the newspaper’s rules, but that it was the reader who was of the ut- most importance,” wrote Free Press copy editor Janet Graham. Wrote Free Press Managing Editor Julie Topping: “When I had some questions on a story he had edited, I was warned to be careful. But Alex turned out to be the most thoughtful, helpful content editor I had worked with since my arrival at the Free Press as a youngster.” And wrote longtime colleague Javan Kienzle: “His concern for grammatical cor- rectness has been equaled by his concern for his fellow copy editors. For Alex was also an educator, and in correcting others, he knew that encouragement can be one of the best teachers.” Cruden, still living in Detroit, is now vice president of ACES’ Education Fund and a founding member of ACES, which was formed in 1997. He has overseen the Fund’s scholarship program. The American Copy Editors Society shares Kienzle’s sentiment: “I can think of no one worthier than Alex Cruden to receive this prestigious award. The award itself acquires even more honor and luster in being presented to Alex.” KATHARINE O’MOORE-KLOPF ALEX CRUDEN
  • 14. 14 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY MAY-JUNE 2014 COPYDESK.ORG By PETER PARISI ACES member since 2000 Empowered by what you learned at ACES 2014 in Las Vegas, you can test your freshly enhanced editing skills by detecting and correcting the mistakes, grammatical and otherwise, in these actual examples taken from news stories and commentary columns. In honor of the “more than/over” ruling, our house style for this quiz is Associated Press style: 1. A 1989 Government Accountability Office report found that “[a]liens have nothing to lose by failing to appear for hearings and, in effect, ignoring the deportation process.” 2. President Obama flew to Ann Arbor Wednesday, where the jobless rate is close to 8 percent to boast about his eco- nomic policies. 3. California state Sen. Leland Yee, an outspoken advocate for gun control, has been indicted for arms trafficking and public corruption. 4. The NBC report maintained that he was actually a Sudan- born driver and confidante of Omar Abdel-Rahman, the so- called “blind sheik” tied to the 1993 bombing of the World Trade Center in New York. 5. Herbert Croly (1869-1930) is not a household name in fed- eral governmental circles today, nor was he so in 1914 when he published a book entitled “Progressive Democracy.”  6. In a vigorous economy such as South Korea or the Czech Republic, manufacturing contributes at least 20 percent of gross domestic product. In Russia, that figure is 15 percent.  7. The Ukraine government has already accused Moscow of triggering unrest and dissension in the region to justify an invasion, just as they did in Crimea. 8. The programming language of the World Wide Web is Eng- lish. This has greatly strengthened the position of English as the lingua franca of the digital age, but ICANN has been trying to undo this and balkanize the online community. 9. In Poland, where Solidarity leaders endured marshal law, I watched courage surface to confront violent suppression of basic liberty.  10. On Wednesday, Sen. Rand Paul, Kentucky Republican, told a state committee in Frankfurt that restoring voting rights for nonviolent felons is a positive step toward changing the nation’s flawed “war on drugs.”   ANSWERS 1.In 1989, the auditing arm of Congress known today as the Government Accountability Office was still known as the General Accounting Office. Its name was changed in July 2004, but the name change didn’t affect its acronym, GAO. 2.The time element, Wednesday, needs to be moved to enable the restrictive clause (“where ... “) to follow Ann Arbor. The “Wednesday” can be placed after the “flew.” 3.We don’t want to convict Mr. Yee before trial, so that should be “indicted on charges of,” instead of “indicted for.” See the “indicted” entry in the AP Stylebook. 4.Since “he,” and not “she,” was the driver, he was a con- fidant, not a confidante.  5.Croly was entitled to call his book anything he wanted to, but it’s titled, not entitled, “Progressive Democracy.” See the “entitled” entry in the AP Stylebook. 6.South Korea and the Czech Republic are countries, not economies, so this should read “economy such as that of” or “economy such as South Korea’s or the Czech Repub- lic.” 7.This is a two-fer. First, the antecedent, whether it’s Ukraine or Moscow, is singular, so the “they” should be “it.” Additionally, the sentence is not clear which (Moscow or Ukraine) the “it” refers back to, and should be rewritten ac- cording to clarify that. 8.“Balkanize” should be uppercased. According to Web- ster’s New World College Dictionary, the official diction- ary of the AP, Balkanize as a verb meaning “to break up into small, mutually hostile political units, as the Balkans after WWI,” should be capitalized. 9.It may require a marshal to enforce it, but it’s martial, not marshal, law. 10. If Mr. Paul is addressing a committee in Germany, Frankfurt is correct. But if he’s doing it in Kentucky, it’s Frankfort, with an “o.” Scoring key: 0-3: J-school dropout 4-6: Snoozed through copy-editing classes 7-8: Candidate for promotion to slot 9-10: Copy-desk chief Quiz yourself: Think you picked up some knowledge at ACES2014? Then find the errors in these passages * * we’re using AP style here; your style may vary
  • 15. By PAUL CHEVANNES ACES member since 2011 Aristophanes, a librarian in Alexan- dria, Greece, during the third century B.C. suggested that readers could use middle, low and high points (dots) to punctuate the written word as the rules of rhetoric then dictated. And that was the birth of punctuation. Now, can you imagine a world with- out marks — punctuation marks? It would be like a flower whose bud could not open, a useless quest for recognition and appreciation. One should never think of punctua- tion marks as barriers, walls or check- points but rather as a security blanket for clarity — our ultimate goal being communication. A well-punctuated piece of prose is as welcoming as a lovely morning coffee, or like a charming French slogan that I recently came across, which read “Cou- cou, tu as pris le pain?” (“Hi there, have you had your bread/baguette?”) Let’s trace the roots of a few punctua- tion marks: Ampersand The ampersand is the regal queen of marks in my opinion. It is a favorite of graphic designers who also use it as a decorative element. This queen started out life in Rome, Italy, centuries ago. The symbol means “and,” the Latin word being et, hence its classical shape, a configuration of the “e” and “t” joined in harmony. A mark of unquestionable aesthetics. @ Mark Like the ampersand, this is techni- cally not a punctuation mark, but has been adopted over the years as such. They are called logograms or gramma- logues. The @ mark, a most ergonomi- cally designed one, is used to represent the word “at.” It was previously rarely used, but has become a global superstar — thanks to the Internet. Dash Ah, yes, we are all experts on dashes, except for the swung dash that’s been out of vogue for a while and all but for- gotten (the seductive ellipsis has taken over in modern times). The swung dash was traditionally used to indicate the omission of a word or part of a word. This mark has never lost its luster in Japan. It is also used a lot by graphic designers as a decorative element (dingbat). Although it looks like a tilde, its us- age must never be confused. Hyphen This punctuation mark has caused great consternation amongst experts and novices alike. A hyphen can be as critical as being on life-support, as both the literary and legal professions can attest. Even U.S. presidents have gotten in on the act — Theodore Roosevelt and Woodrow Wilson reprimanded fellow citizens overusing hyphenated ethnic jargon, for example, German-Americans, Irish- Americans, etc., for their perceived divided loyalties to the United States. And of course, there’s NASA’s miss- ing hyphen that led to the absolute failure of Mariner 1, America’s first interplanetary probe of Venus. The missing hyphen in coding used to set trajectory and speed caused the space- craft to explode a few minutes after takeoff — at a price tag of $80 million. “2001: A Space Odyssey” novelist Arthur C. Clarke referred to it as “the most expensive hyphen in history.” Pilcrow A favorite punctuation mark of mine, but unfortunately long defunct. How- ever, a trace of it is left — even though it has been relegated to a mere proofread- ers’ mark. It is a reverse-P shape with two vertical bars instead of the usual one. This mark means to begin a new paragraph. The Romans adopted the pilcrow from the Greeks in the late second and early third centuries B.C. This mark was used between words as there were no spaces between words then, and previously dots (miniature bullets) had been used. Apparently this was for fashionable reasons rather than for practicality. Asterisk The utility player in the punctuation world, it never fails to hit a home run, as well as some grand slams, too. Its illustrious history harkens back to Alexandria, Egypt, in the fourth cen- tury B.C. It is probably one of the oldest punctuation marks still around today. The word asterisk is taken from the Latin aster, meaning “star,” but that was derived from the original Greek word asteriskos, or “little star.” Its versatility leads to at least eight different usages. One of my favorites is called “asterism” — three asterisks in a triangular formation. Its three main usages are: to indicate minor breaks in text, to call attention to a passage, and to separate sub-chapters in a book. There is a derivative of asterism that is called a “dinkus,” where there are three consecutive asterisks, all in a straight row. Beware of the word’s slang usage. So, you can see why this “little star” is such a big star. Paul Chevannes is the supervisor for copy editing/proofreading at Tiffany & Company. COPYDESK.ORG MAY-JUNE 2014 AMERICAN COPY EDITORS SOCIETY 15 Mark my words Vignettes on signs, symbols that grace our writing Meet my friends, Ampersand and Pilcrow.
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